Snacks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答时应避免重复表达，如“watching movies or watching the competition”可以简化为“watching movies or competitions”。此外，回答可以更自然流畅，避免机械罗列。

Example: I usually eat snacks like chips and candies while watching movies or sports competitions because it makes the experience more enjoyable.

Suggestion: 回答中语法稍有错误，如“it's bad”应为“is bad”。建议使用更连贯的连接词，如“however”来连接观点，使表达更自然。

Example: I know that eating snacks like candies and chips regularly is bad for my health; however, sometimes having a candy helps me feel happy and relaxed, and it temporarily distracts me from stress.

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误，如“prohibit me to eat”应为“prohibited me from eating”。建议使用更准确的时态和表达，使句子更自然。

Example: Not really. When I was a child, my parents and grandparents always prohibited me from eating snacks because they believed it was unhealthy and could cause problems.

Suggestion: 回答中应注意主谓一致，如“have a little sweet”应为“has a little sweetness”。建议丰富描述，使用更多形容词和连接词。

Example: I enjoy eating spicy dry noodles, which are delicious with a perfect balance of spiciness and a hint of sweetness. Eating them always makes me feel happy and relaxed.

× I always eat snacks such as chips and candies when I'm watching movies or watching the competition.

✓ I always eat snacks such as chips and candies when I'm watching movies or competitions.

这里“watching the competition”中的“the competition”不太自然，通常说“watching competitions”表示观看比赛。此处应使用复数形式，且不需要定冠词。

× I can't deny that always eating snacks such as candies and chips it's bad for my health.

✓ I can't deny that always eating snacks such as candies and chips is bad for my health.

句中“it's”是多余的，主语是“always eating snacks”，应直接用“is”作为谓语，避免重复主语。

× When I was a kid my parents and grandparents always prohibit me to eat snacks.

✓ When I was a kid my parents and grandparents always prohibited me from eating snacks.

动词“prohibit”后应接“somebody from doing something”，不能用“to do”。同时时态应为过去时“prohibited”。

× When I was a kid my parents and grandparents always prohibit me to eat snacks.

✓ When I was a kid my parents and grandparents always prohibited me from eating snacks.

句子描述过去的情况，动词应使用过去时“prohibited”。

× They say they thought it was bad for my health and maybe will have some dangerous situation.

✓ They said they thought it was bad for my health and that it might cause some dangerous situations.

“They say”应改为过去时“they said”，且“maybe will have some dangerous situation”表达不自然，应改为“might cause some dangerous situations”，使用复数形式更合适。

× I like to eat snacks called spicy dry noodles. It is very delicious and spicy and also have a little sweet.

✓ I like to eat a snack called spicy dry noodles. It is very delicious and spicy and also has a little sweetness.

“snacks”应改为单数“a snack”，因为“spicy dry noodles”是单一食品名称。谓语动词应与主语一致，“have”改为“has”。“a little sweet”应改为“a little sweetness”更符合表达习惯。