Snacks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Make your answer more concise and clear by directly stating when you eat snacks and what kind you prefer, using proper sentence structure.

Example: I usually eat snacks in the evening with tea or coffee. I prefer healthier options that are not oily whenever they are available.

Suggestion: Improve sentence clarity and grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid redundancy by not repeating the same information.

Example: Yes, I think eating snacks can be healthy because the market now offers many healthier options, such as protein bars, which are not oil-based. Therefore, I usually choose these snacks with my tea or coffee.

Suggestion: Focus on correct verb tenses and sentence completion. Avoid incomplete sentences and clarify your ideas with linking words to make your answer coherent.

Example: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young. However, nowadays I prefer to have full meals and a balanced diet for better nutrition. When I do eat snacks, I choose healthy options.

Suggestion: Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Use specific vocabulary and complete sentences to clearly express your preferences.

Example: I usually prefer healthier snacks such as protein bars. I avoid oily snacks, especially when I have tea.

× I I usually eat the snacks in the evening time with the tea or the coffee.

✓ I usually eat snacks in the evening with tea or coffee.

The use of 'the snacks' is incorrect here because 'snacks' is a general plural noun and does not need the definite article 'the'. Also, 'the tea or the coffee' should be 'tea or coffee' as these are uncountable nouns used in a general sense. Removing the extra 'I' also corrects redundancy.

× I prefer the snacks which are not oily and which are and I go with the healthier options if available.

✓ I prefer snacks that are not oily and go with healthier options if available.

The sentence has an incomplete conjunction 'and which are and I go' which is incorrect. It should be simplified to 'and go with healthier options'. Also, 'the snacks' should be 'snacks' as a general plural noun without 'the'.

× Yes, nowadays a market is flourished with the new healthier options as snacks like protein bars and other healthy options which are not oil based snacks.

✓ Yes, nowadays the market is flourished with new healthier snack options like protein bars and other healthy snacks which are not oil-based.

The phrase 'a market is flourished' is incorrect. 'Market' here is a specific concept, so 'the market' is appropriate. Also, 'oil based snacks' should be hyphenated as 'oil-based snacks'. The sentence structure is improved by removing redundancy and clarifying the noun phrases.

× Yes, I often eat snacks when I was young, but nowadays I usually prefer the healthier options like eating the full meals and eating the balanced diet.

✓ Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young, but nowadays I usually prefer healthier options like full meals and a balanced diet.

The verb 'eat' should be in past tense 'ate' to match the past time reference 'when I was young'. Also, 'the balanced diet' should be 'a balanced diet' as it is a general concept. The phrase 'eating the full meals and eating the balanced diet' is redundant and can be simplified.

× For my better nutrition I usually prefer the but in case of snacks I usually prefer the healthy ones.

✓ For better nutrition, I usually prefer full meals, but in case of snacks, I usually prefer healthy ones.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'full meals' clarifies the meaning. 'The healthy ones' is corrected to 'healthy ones' as a general plural noun without 'the'. Also, commas improve sentence clarity.

× I usually prefer the healthier options when it comes to the snacking like protein bars and the big big products I have big products.

✓ I usually prefer healthier options when it comes to snacking, like protein bars and big products.

'The healthier options' and 'the snacking' should be 'healthier options' and 'snacking' without 'the' as they are general references. The phrase 'the big big products I have big products' is redundant and unclear; simplified to 'big products'.

× I I usually ignore or do not prefer the oiled up snacks for my meal during the tea or.

✓ I usually ignore or do not prefer oily snacks during tea time.

The phrase 'oiled up snacks' is incorrect; 'oily snacks' is the correct adjective form. The sentence ends abruptly with 'during the tea or', which is incomplete. 'During tea time' is a clearer expression. Also, the repeated 'I' is removed.