Snacks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit confusing because you mixed past and present tenses. Try to keep your answer clear and concise by focusing on the present habit. Also, avoid redundancy and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Example: I usually eat snacks in the afternoon when I feel very hungry and there is nothing else to eat. For example, if there are only vegetables and chapatis, I prefer to have some snacks instead.

Suggestion: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical errors. Try to express your opinion clearly and support it with reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Example: I don't think eating snacks is healthy for me because I usually eat them when I am very hungry and there is no proper food available. Therefore, I eat snacks just to satisfy my hunger temporarily.

Suggestion: Your answer is repetitive and has some grammatical mistakes. Try to avoid repeating the same idea and use a variety of vocabulary. Also, structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details.

Example: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young because most children enjoy fast food like chips and packaged snacks. I also liked eating these kinds of snacks during my childhood.

Suggestion: Your answer is repetitive and lacks coherence. Try to use linking words and avoid repeating the same words. Also, explain why you like those snacks to make your answer more specific.

Example: I like to eat snacks such as pizzas and burgers because they make me feel happy. These are my favourite snacks since I enjoy their taste and texture.

× Well, I eat my snacks in the afternoon when I was very hungry and there's nothing to eat, just like the vegetables and the chapatis.

✓ Well, I eat my snacks in the afternoon when I am very hungry and there is nothing to eat, just like the vegetables and the chapatis.

The sentence mixes past tense 'was' with present tense 'eat'. Since the question is about usual habits (present), 'was' should be 'am' and 'there's' should be 'there is' to maintain subject-verb agreement and tense consistency.

× I didn't want to eat that things.

✓ I didn't want to eat those things.

The demonstrative pronoun 'that' is singular, but 'things' is plural. The correct plural form is 'those things' to match the plural noun.

× Uh, usually I eat the snacks at that time.

✓ Uh, usually I eat snacks at that time.

The definite article 'the' is unnecessary before 'snacks' when speaking generally. Removing 'the' makes the sentence natural and grammatically correct.

× According to me it is not healthy for me because when I was very hungry at the at the time and there is nothing to eat.

✓ According to me, it is not healthy for me because when I am very hungry at that time and there is nothing to eat.

The phrase 'when I was very hungry at the at the time' is incorrect for a habitual present context. 'Was' should be 'am' and 'at the at the time' should be 'at that time'. Also, a comma after 'According to me' improves clarity.

× So I eat the snacks just to feel very calm and I want to finish my hunger Ness.

✓ So I eat snacks just to feel calm and to satisfy my hunger.

'Hunger Ness' is incorrect; the correct noun is 'hunger'. Also, 'feel very calm' is unnatural; 'feel calm' suffices. 'Finish my hunger' is incorrect; 'satisfy my hunger' is the proper expression.

× Obviously when I was young I usually eat the snacks because in the childhood everyone likes to eat the fast food like the packet things, chips, etc, things they want to eat.

✓ Obviously, when I was young I usually ate snacks because in childhood everyone liked to eat fast food like packet items, chips, etc., things they wanted to eat.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. 'Usually eat' should be 'usually ate' and 'likes' should be 'liked' to maintain past tense consistency. Also, 'the childhood' should be 'childhood' without 'the'. 'Packet things' is better as 'packet items'.

× So when I was young I usually eat the snacks.

✓ So when I was young I usually ate snacks.

Again, 'usually eat' is present tense but the context is past. It should be 'usually ate' to match the past time frame.

× Usually in my snacks I usually want to eat the pizzas, burgers because by eating that snacks it's feel very happy because I just want to eat that items because it was it was my favorite items that I want to eat in my snacks.

✓ Usually, for my snacks, I want to eat pizzas and burgers because eating those snacks makes me feel very happy. I just want to eat those items because they were my favorite items to eat as snacks.

'The pizzas, burgers' should be 'pizzas and burgers' without 'the'. 'That snacks' should be 'those snacks' to match plural. 'It's feel' is incorrect; should be 'makes me feel'. 'That items' should be 'those items'. 'It was it was' is repetitive and should be 'they were' to agree with plural 'items'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.