Snacks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct. Use linking words to explain your reason clearly and avoid redundancy. For example, say "I usually prefer to eat snacks in the morning because it is a common habit in America."

Example: I usually prefer to eat snacks in the morning because it is a common habit in America, and it helps me start my day with some energy.

Suggestion: Make your answer more fluent and natural by using linking words and correct grammar. Also, be more specific about why snacks are unhealthy. For example, "I don't think eating snacks is healthy because they often contain a lot of oil and artificial chemicals, which can harm our body."

Example: I don't think eating snacks is healthy because they often contain a lot of oil and artificial chemicals, which can increase the risk of health problems like obesity and heart disease.

Suggestion: Improve your answer by using correct tense and linking words. Also, avoid repetition and be more specific. For example, "Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young because it was a habit I developed during my childhood."

Example: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young because it was a habit I developed during my childhood, especially after school with my friends.

Suggestion: Use correct vocabulary and grammar, and explain your preferences clearly with linking words. For example, "I prefer to eat chicken burgers and fried rolls because they are very delicious and contain many spices that enhance the flavor."

Example: I prefer to eat chicken burgers and fried rolls because they are very delicious and contain many spices that enhance the flavor, making them my favourite snacks.

× I usually prefer to eat snacks at morning because snacks is more popular in America eating at morning time.

✓ I usually prefer to eat snacks in the morning because snacks are more popular in America in the morning.

The phrase 'at morning' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in the morning' (Grammar Problem Type ID: 11). Also, 'snacks is' is incorrect because 'snacks' is plural and requires the plural verb 'are' (Grammar Problem Type ID: 1). Additionally, 'eating at morning time' is awkward and redundant; 'in the morning' suffices.

× I usually prefer to eat snacks at morning because snacks is more popular in America eating at morning time.

✓ I usually prefer to eat snacks in the morning because snacks are more popular in America in the morning.

The noun 'snacks' is plural and should be paired with the plural verb 'are' instead of 'is' (Grammar Problem Type ID: 1).

× No, according to me the eating snacks is not healthy for health because snacks contain a lot of oil and chemicals.

✓ No, according to me, eating snacks is not healthy because snacks contain a lot of oil and chemicals.

The phrase 'the eating snacks' is incorrect; 'eating snacks' should be used without 'the' (Grammar Problem Type ID: 17). Also, 'not healthy for health' is redundant; simply 'not healthy' is sufficient.

× Yes, absolutely. I like to eat snacks when I was young because the habit of eating snacks is from my childhood.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I liked to eat snacks when I was young because the habit of eating snacks is from my childhood.

The verb 'like' should be in the past tense 'liked' to match the past time frame 'when I was young' (Grammar Problem Type ID: 5).

× Yes, absolutely. I like to eat snacks when I was young because the habit of eating snacks is from my childhood.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I liked to eat snacks when I was young because the habit of eating snacks has been with me since my childhood.

The phrase 'is from my childhood' is awkward; 'has been with me since my childhood' is more natural and correct (Grammar Problem Type ID: 11).

× I prefer to eat chicken burger and also roll of fried oil because it is very delicious and containing a lot of species which is increase the taste of snacks.

✓ I prefer to eat chicken burgers and also fried rolls because they are very delicious and contain a lot of spices which increase the taste of snacks.

'Chicken burger' should be plural 'chicken burgers' if referring generally (Grammar Problem Type ID: 1). 'Roll of fried oil' is incorrect; 'fried rolls' is more appropriate (Grammar Problem Type ID: 11). 'It is' should be 'they are' to agree with plural subjects (Grammar Problem Type ID: 1). 'Containing' should be 'contain' to match the plural subject (Grammar Problem Type ID: 6). 'Species' is incorrect; the correct word is 'spices' (Grammar Problem Type ID: 13). 'Which is increase' should be 'which increase' to agree with plural 'spices' (Grammar Problem Type ID: 1).