Snacks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Apni answer e boro sentence use korun ebong proshner uttor spostho bhabe din. Apnar answer e kichu grammar error ache ebong eta natural mone hoy na. Apni bolte paren, "I usually eat snacks about two hours after lunch."

Example: I usually eat snacks about two hours after lunch because I feel hungry by then.

Suggestion: Apnar uttor e grammar error ache ebong kichu word use kora hoyeche jeta spostho noy. Apni uttor e spostho bhabe bolte paren je snacks er dhoroner upor nirvor kore. Apni linking word use korte paren jemon 'because' ba 'for example'.

Example: It depends on the type of snacks because some snacks like chocolates and chips are unhealthy, but fruits and nuts are healthy.

Suggestion: Apnar uttor e contradiction ache ebong grammar error o ache. Apni proshner uttor spostho bhabe din ebong sentence gulo shothik bhabe gathan korun. Apni bolte paren, "When I was young, I used to eat snacks quite often."

Example: When I was young, I used to eat snacks quite often, especially after school.

Suggestion: Apnar uttor e kichu grammar error ache ebong sentence gulo aro natural korte hobe. Apni linking word use korte paren ebong kichu details dite paren keno apni chips pochondo koren.

Example: I like to eat chips, burgers, cold drinks, and sandwiches, but my favorite snack is chips because they are crispy and tasty.

× Completing my lunch after two hours. I usually eat snacks.

✓ I usually eat snacks two hours after completing my lunch.

The original sentence 'Completing my lunch after two hours.' is a sentence fragment and lacks a subject and verb, making it incomplete. The corrected sentence combines the ideas into a complete sentence with proper subject-verb agreement and clear time reference.

× It's depend on the type of snacks like summer chocolates, summer breads, summer chips and something I like.

✓ It depends on the type of snacks like summer chocolates, summer breads, summer chips, and things I like.

The modal verb 'It's depend' is incorrect; the correct form is 'It depends' to agree with the third person singular subject 'It'. Also, 'something I like' is better expressed as 'things I like' for clarity and plurality.

× In my young age I every time used to eat snacks. Not often.

✓ When I was young, I used to eat snacks all the time, not often.

The phrase 'In my young age' is awkward; 'When I was young' is more natural. 'I every time used to eat snacks' is incorrect word order; 'I used to eat snacks all the time' is correct. The sentence 'Not often.' is unclear and contradictory; it is better to clarify the frequency.

× Chips, burgers, cold drinks and sandwiches. The most thing I like about is chips.

✓ I like chips, burgers, cold drinks, and sandwiches. The thing I like the most is chips.

The original sentences are fragments lacking verbs. Adding 'I like' makes the first sentence complete. The phrase 'The most thing I like about is chips' is incorrect; the correct form is 'The thing I like the most is chips' to properly express preference.