Snacks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答时语言不够自然，有语法错误，如“need eat”应为“need to eat”，且表达略显冗长。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，同时使用更地道的表达。

Example: I usually eat snacks like chocolate or crisps when I'm binge-watching light TV dramas because they help me relax.

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不连贯，如“if it's baked by myself”应为“if I bake them myself”，且句子较长且缺少连接词。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并注意主谓一致。

Example: I think it depends. If I bake the snacks myself, they are quite healthy because I use less sugar and oil. However, store-bought snacks are usually unhealthy.

Suggestion: 回答中存在重复和表达不自然的问题，如“I'm just affected by them”表达不准确。建议使用更自然的表达，避免重复，并丰富细节。

Example: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young because it was popular among my friends. I enjoyed eating chocolates and crisps a lot because everyone around me did.

Suggestion: 回答较好，但存在语法错误，如“contains lower calorie”应为“contain fewer calories”，且句子连接可以更自然。建议注意复数形式和连接词的使用。

Example: I especially like dark chocolate because it contains fewer calories, which helps me stay fit and healthy. In contrast, white chocolate has too much sugar and is less healthy.

× I usually eat snacks when I'm binge watching trashy dramas because when I watch such kind of TV dramas, I need eat some snacks such as chocolate or crisps that can make me more relaxed and comfortable.

✓ I usually eat snacks when I'm binge-watching trashy dramas because when I watch such kinds of TV dramas, I need to eat some snacks such as chocolate or crisps that can make me more relaxed and comfortable.

动词短语中，动词“binge”后面应加“-ing”构成现在分词，表示正在进行的动作；此外，动词“need”后面应加不定式“to eat”，而不是直接跟动词原形。

× I usually eat snacks when I'm binge watching trashy dramas because when I watch such kind of TV dramas, I need eat some snacks such as chocolate or crisps that can make me more relaxed and comfortable.

✓ I usually eat snacks when I'm binge-watching trashy dramas because when I watch such kinds of TV dramas, I need to eat some snacks such as chocolate or crisps that can make me more relaxed and comfortable.

“such kind of”应改为“such kinds of”，因为“dramas”是复数，需用复数形式的“kinds”。

× if the snacks is bought in the shop or the supermarket it's unhealthy.

✓ if the snacks are bought in the shop or the supermarket, it's unhealthy.

“snacks”是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”，而不是单数“is”。

× if the snacks is bought in the shop or the supermarket it's unhealthy.

✓ if the snack is bought in the shop or the supermarket, it's unhealthy.

如果指单个零食，应使用单数“snack”搭配单数动词“is”；如果指复数，则动词应为“are”。根据上下文，复数更合适。

× other kinds of chocolate like white chocolate contains too much sugar and I think it's unhealthy.

✓ other kinds of chocolate like white chocolate contain too much sugar and I think it's unhealthy.

“other kinds of chocolate”是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“contain”，而不是单数“contains”。