Snacks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but needs improvement in grammar and clarity. Try to use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for natural flow.

Example: I usually eat snacks in the evening because after lunch I get busy with my studies or work. So, I feel very hungry later, and snacks help me stay focused and keep my energy up.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Avoid vague phrases like 'diagnosis system'. Use clear reasons and linking words to explain your opinion logically.

Example: Yes, I think eating snacks is healthy for me because they help me stay focused and prepare my appetite for dinner.

Suggestion: Your answer needs better grammar and clearer expression. Use past tense consistently and link your ideas logically. Avoid unclear phrases like 'I was in the time'.

Example: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young. I had snacks twice a day sometimes because I had a lot of free time. I enjoyed trying new foods like burgers and pizzas.

Suggestion: Your answer is good but can be improved by using clearer linking words and correcting grammar. Explain the health problems briefly for more detail.

Example: I mostly have tea or coffee as snacks now. Previously, I used to eat fast food like burgers and pizzas, but they caused me health problems, so I switched to tea and coffee.

× I usually eat snacks in the evening period.

✓ I usually eat snacks in the evening.

The phrase 'in the evening period' is unnatural in English. 'In the evening' is the correct and commonly used expression to indicate the time of day when the action happens.

× After finishing my lunch I get busy with my study or work and after that I get very hungry and snacks help me to stay focused and keep me energy.

✓ After finishing my lunch, I get busy with my study or work, and after that, I get very hungry. Snacks help me to stay focused and keep my energy.

The original sentence is a run-on sentence lacking proper punctuation and conjunctions. Adding commas and splitting into two sentences improves clarity and grammatical correctness. Also, 'keep me energy' is incorrect; it should be 'keep my energy'.

× snacks help me to stay focused and keep me energy.

✓ snacks help me to stay focused and keep my energy.

The pronoun 'me' is incorrectly used before 'energy'. The correct possessive pronoun is 'my' to indicate that the energy belongs to the speaker.

× Yes it is snacks help me to keep me focused and especially for the diagnosis system in my body and it also help me prepare for the dinner and also help me.

✓ Yes, snacks help me to keep focused, especially for the digestive system in my body. They also help me prepare for dinner.

The original sentence is confusing and lacks proper punctuation. 'Diagnosis system' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely 'digestive system'. Also, 'help me prepare for the dinner and also help me' is redundant and unclear, so it is simplified for clarity.

× Yes, I often eat snacks.

✓ Yes, I often ate snacks.

The question is about past habits ('Did you often eat snacks when you were young?'), so the verb should be in the past tense 'ate' instead of present tense 'eat'.

× When I was young, sometimes I had snacks two times in a day because I was in the time.

✓ When I was young, sometimes I had snacks twice a day because I had free time then.

The phrase 'I was in the time' is incorrect and unclear. It is corrected to 'I had free time then' to convey the intended meaning. Also, 'two times in a day' is better expressed as 'twice a day'.

× There's a lot of free time for me and so I like to enjoy new food like burgers or pizzas sometimes.

✓ There was a lot of free time for me, so I liked to enjoy new foods like burgers or pizzas sometimes.

Since the context is past ('when I was young'), 'There's' should be 'There was'. Also, 'like to enjoy' should be 'liked to enjoy' to maintain past tense consistency. 'Food' is better pluralized as 'foods' when referring to different types.

× I mostly eat tea or coffee for snacks but previously I used to have fast food like burgers and pizzas and that cost me a lot of health problem so I relied on tea or coffee.

✓ I mostly drink tea or coffee as snacks, but previously I used to have fast food like burgers and pizzas, and that caused me a lot of health problems, so I rely on tea or coffee now.

'Eat tea or coffee' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'drink'. 'Cost me a lot of health problem' should be 'caused me a lot of health problems' to use the correct verb and plural form. 'Relied' is changed to 'rely' to indicate current habit. Also, commas are added for clarity.