Snacks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit confusing and includes unnecessary details about your whole day instead of focusing on when you eat snacks. Try to give a clear and direct answer about the time you eat snacks, and keep it concise within 5 sentences. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Example: I usually eat snacks in the evening, around 5 or 6 pm. After finishing my work or studies, I feel hungry and like to have something light before dinner. For example, I often eat fruits or biscuits as my evening snack.

Suggestion: Your answer shows your opinion but has grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'prepare my system for dinner'. Try to use clearer expressions and add linking words to explain your reasons logically. Also, avoid repetition and incomplete sentences.

Example: Yes, I think eating snacks is healthy for me because I often feel hungry in the evening after work or study. Therefore, having a small snack helps me to control my hunger and prepares me for a proper dinner later.

Suggestion: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and unclear parts. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. Also, avoid repeating the same idea and keep your sentences complete and clear.

Example: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young, usually twice a day. For example, I liked to have snacks after breakfast and after lunch because I was always hungry and had nothing else to do during those times.

Suggestion: Your answer is quite clear but can be improved by using better linking words and more varied vocabulary. Also, try to avoid mixing tenses and keep your sentences grammatically correct and concise.

Example: Usually, I like to have tea and biscuits as my snacks. However, sometimes I crave fast food, so I order burgers or pizzas in the evening after finishing my studies or work.

× I woke up in the morning and then have breakfast and then after that I had my lunch in 2:00 PM and after that I had go for sleep for a while and then after I woke up I had a little.

✓ I woke up in the morning and then had breakfast, and after that I had my lunch at 2:00 PM. After that, I went to sleep for a while, and then after I woke up, I had a little snack.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. 'Have' should be 'had' to maintain past tense consistency. 'Had go for sleep' is incorrect; it should be 'went to sleep' as 'go' is irregular and needs past form 'went'. Also, 'in 2:00 PM' should be 'at 2:00 PM' due to preposition use.

× I had my lunch in 2:00 PM

✓ I had my lunch at 2:00 PM

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to specific times. The correct preposition is 'at' for exact times like '2:00 PM'.

× I had go for sleep for a while

✓ I went to sleep for a while

The phrase 'had go' is incorrect. The correct past tense of 'go' is 'went', and the verb 'sleep' requires the preposition 'to' after 'went'.

× I was hung easily

✓ I got hungry easily

'Was hung' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'got hungry' to indicate becoming hungry. 'Hung' is the past tense of 'hang' and does not mean hungry.

× I become hungry after finishing my job or studies and and that snacks also help me to prepare my system for dinner and.

✓ I become hungry after finishing my job or studies, and those snacks also help me prepare my system for dinner.

The phrase 'that snacks' is incorrect; it should be 'those snacks' to refer to plural items. Also, 'help me to prepare' is better as 'help me prepare' for smoother English. The sentence was incomplete and needed proper punctuation.

× Yes, I love to eat snacks in when I was young, especially two times in a day, I love to eat snacks in the after breakfast and after lunch period because I was always hungry because I don't have anything to I didn't have anything to do.

✓ Yes, I loved to eat snacks when I was young, especially twice a day. I loved to eat snacks after breakfast and after lunch because I was always hungry and didn't have anything to do.

The sentence mixes present and past tense incorrectly. 'Love' should be 'loved' to match past time 'when I was young'. 'Two times in a day' is better expressed as 'twice a day'. The phrase 'in the after breakfast and after lunch period' is awkward; 'after breakfast and after lunch' is clearer. Also, 'I don't have' should be 'I didn't have' to maintain past tense.

× I love to eat snacks in when I was young

✓ I loved to eat snacks when I was young

The preposition 'in' is unnecessary and incorrect before 'when I was young'. The correct phrase is 'when I was young' without 'in'.

× I love to eat snacks in the after breakfast and after lunch period

✓ I loved to eat snacks after breakfast and after lunch

The phrase 'in the after breakfast and after lunch period' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'after' without 'in' and 'period' is unnecessary.

× I don't have anything to I didn't have anything to do.

✓ I didn't have anything to do.

The phrase 'I don't have' is present tense and conflicts with past tense context. It should be 'I didn't have' to maintain past tense consistency.

× Usually I like to eat tea and biscuits in my snacks, but sometimes I got cravings for fast food.

✓ Usually I like to have tea and biscuits as my snacks, but sometimes I get cravings for fast food.

'Eat tea' is incorrect; we 'have' tea. 'Got cravings' should be 'get cravings' to indicate habitual present tense. Also, 'in my snacks' is incorrect; 'as my snacks' is better.

× Then I ordered some burgers or pizzas for the evening period after finishing my studies or work.

✓ Then I order some burgers or pizzas for the evening after finishing my studies or work.

The sentence is about habitual actions, so present tense 'order' is appropriate instead of past tense 'ordered'. 'Evening period' is awkward; 'evening' suffices.