Snacks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Tapai ko uttar thik chha tara thap spashtata ra sahaj bhasha prayog garnu parcha. Samaya ko barema sodhiyeko bhaye, sidha samaya matra bhannu parcha ra thap karan ya paribesh ko barema thapna saknuhunchha. English ma, "I usually eat snacks around 3 PM because I have lunch early at 10 AM, so I get hungry in the afternoon."

Example: I usually eat snacks around 3 PM because I have lunch early at 10 AM, so I get hungry in the afternoon.

Suggestion: Tapai ko uttar lamo ra thap shabda haru chha jun prashna ko mukhya kura bata hatauchha. English ma, sidha ra spasht uttar dinu parcha ra thap karan haru linking words jastai 'because' ya 'so' le jodne. Udaharan ko lagi, "Yes, I think eating snacks is healthy because I avoid junk food and choose nutritious options that keep me energized until dinner."

Example: Yes, I think eating snacks is healthy because I avoid junk food and choose nutritious options that keep me energized until dinner.

Suggestion: Tapai ko uttar ma thap spashtata ra vyakaran sudhar garnu parcha. English ma, simple ra direct sentence haru prayog garnu ramro huncha. Udaharan ko lagi, "Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young because I am a foodie and like to eat small amounts frequently."

Example: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young because I am a foodie and like to eat small amounts frequently.

Suggestion: Tapai ko uttar ramro chha tara thap linking words jastai 'for example' ya 'also' prayog garera uttar lai arko star ma lyauna saknuhunchha. English ma, "I like different snacks depending on what is available. For example, sometimes I eat fruits and nuts, other times spicy noodles, or tea with biscuits."

Example: I like different snacks depending on what is available. For example, sometimes I eat fruits and nuts, other times spicy noodles, or tea with biscuits.

× I usually have snacks in the daytime at 3:00 PM because I have had lunch at the 10:00 AM so I would be hungry around 2:00 or 3:00 PM.

✓ I usually have snacks in the daytime at 3:00 PM because I have had lunch at 10:00 AM so I would be hungry around 2:00 or 3:00 PM.

The article 'the' before '10:00 AM' is unnecessary when referring to specific times. In English, we say 'at 10:00 AM' without 'the'. Remove 'the' to correct the sentence.

× I'm eating a healthy snacks because I feel so much sluggish when I am hungry so it gives me energizes during the whole day till the dinner.

✓ I'm eating healthy snacks because I feel so sluggish when I am hungry so it gives me energy during the whole day till dinner.

'A' is used with singular countable nouns, but 'snacks' is plural, so 'a' should be removed. 'So much sluggish' is incorrect; 'sluggish' is an adjective and should be used without 'much'. 'Energizes' is a verb, but here a noun 'energy' is needed. Also, 'the dinner' should be 'dinner' without 'the'.

× So I will definitely have dinner snacks before dinner.

✓ So I definitely have dinner snacks before dinner.

Using 'will' here implies future intention, but the context suggests a habitual action. Using simple present tense 'have' is more appropriate for habitual actions.

× Yes, most probably I have eaten snacks all my life because I'm a foodie person and I can eat less but I have to eat time in time to time so I definitely have snacks every day.

✓ Yes, most probably I have eaten snacks all my life because I'm a foodie person and I can eat little but I have to eat from time to time so I definitely have snacks every day.

'Eat less' is incorrect here; 'eat little' is better to express small quantity. The phrase 'time in time to time' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'from time to time' meaning occasionally.

× Well, it it depends upon what we have in our kitchen.

✓ Well, it depends upon what we have in our kitchen.

The repetition of 'it' is a typographical error. Only one 'it' is needed to make the sentence correct.

× Sometimes it's just fruits and nuts, sometimes is the spicy noodles and sometimes I would just have tea and biscuits.

✓ Sometimes it's just fruits and nuts, sometimes it's spicy noodles and sometimes I just have tea and biscuits.

The subject 'it' is missing before 'is the spicy noodles'. Also, 'the' before 'spicy noodles' is unnecessary. 'I would just have' suggests conditional mood; simple present 'I just have' fits better here.