Snacks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy and unnecessary phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and keep your answer within 4-5 sentences.

Example: I usually eat snacks in the afternoon when I feel a bit hungry before my next task. This helps me stay energized and focused for the rest of the day.

Suggestion: Improve clarity by correcting grammar and sentence structure. Use linking words to explain your opinion clearly and avoid vague terms like 'recap'.

Example: Yes, I believe eating snacks is healthy because it helps me stay energized throughout the day. Moreover, having small snacks prevents me from feeling too hungry between meals.

Suggestion: Try to organize your answer better by using linking words and avoid repetition. Provide specific examples and keep your sentences clear and connected.

Example: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young. My mother usually gave me healthy snacks in the morning or evening, but in the afternoon, I often ate junk snacks like chips or sweets.

Suggestion: Make your answer more natural and fluent by simplifying phrases and using linking words to explain your preference clearly.

Example: Considering my current lifestyle, I prefer eating healthy snacks because I focus on maintaining my physical fitness. Therefore, I avoid unhealthy options and choose fruits or nuts instead.

× I usually eat snacks during the afternoon time of my day where I'm heading towards my next work and I feel a little hungry or starving at that point of the moment, so I usually have a snack at that time.

✓ I usually eat snacks during the afternoon when I'm heading towards my next work and feel a little hungry or starving at that moment, so I usually have a snack then.

The phrase 'at that point of the moment' is redundant and awkward. Using 'at that moment' or 'then' is more natural. Also, 'where' is incorrectly used to refer to time; 'when' is appropriate for time references.

× Yes I completely agree with this point that eating snacks is a gives me a healthy benefit because it helps me keep energized throughout the day and it also give me a recap.

✓ Yes, I completely agree with this point that eating snacks gives me healthy benefits because it helps me stay energized throughout the day and also gives me a recap.

The phrase 'is a gives me a healthy benefit' is grammatically incorrect. 'Gives me healthy benefits' is correct. Also, 'keep energized' should be 'stay energized' for natural usage. 'Give' should be 'gives' to agree with singular subject 'it'.

× Yes, I do eat snacks. When I was young I used to eat a lot of snacks, healthy, unhealthy. Both. My mother used to give me healthy snacks during the morning time or the dinner time. But I usually I used to have some of the snacks in the afternoon which is junk.

✓ Yes, I did eat snacks. When I was young, I used to eat a lot of snacks, both healthy and unhealthy. My mother used to give me healthy snacks in the morning or at dinner time. But I usually had some snacks in the afternoon which were junk.

The phrase 'I do eat snacks' is better as 'I did eat snacks' to match past tense context. 'Which is junk' should be 'which were junk' to agree in number with 'snacks'. Also, 'usually I used to have' is redundant; 'usually had' is clearer.

× If you talk about my lifestyle now, I would rather suggest or like to eat a healthy snack instead of instead do that of an unhealthy one because I am more into the physical fitness of mine that's why I prefer to eat healthy snacks.

✓ If you talk about my lifestyle now, I would rather suggest or like to eat a healthy snack instead of an unhealthy one because I am more into my physical fitness; that's why I prefer to eat healthy snacks.

The phrase 'instead do that of an unhealthy one' is incorrect; it should be 'instead of an unhealthy one'. Also, 'the physical fitness of mine' is unnatural; 'my physical fitness' is correct. The sentence is improved by correcting prepositions and phrasing for clarity.