Snacks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a direct response with clear reasons and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Example: I usually eat snacks in the morning because they are healthy and give me energy to start my day.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but needs clearer structure and better grammar. Use linking words like 'however' to contrast ideas and be more specific about why frequent snacking can be harmful.

Example: Yes, eating snacks once or twice a week is healthy; however, eating them daily can be harmful to our health because of excess calories.

Suggestion: Your answer is confusing and repetitive. Provide a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details. Use correct tense and avoid redundancy.

Example: When I was a child, my mother made snacks for me once a week, so I usually ate snacks only on weekends.

Suggestion: Your answer has good content but needs better sentence structure and linking words. Avoid repeating the same idea and use correct vocabulary and grammar.

Example: I like to eat fritters as snacks because they taste delicious, and my mother often makes them since they are easy and convenient to prepare.

× I eat snacks in morning becauses in more in these snacks are very good and it is healthy for our.

✓ I eat snacks in the morning because these snacks are very good and healthy for us.

The preposition 'in' is missing before 'the morning'. 'Becauses' is incorrect; it should be 'because'. The phrase 'in more in these snacks' is incorrect and unclear; it is corrected to 'these snacks'. 'For our' is incorrect; it should be 'for us'. Use 'the' before 'morning' as it is a specific time of day.

× I eat snacks in morning becauses in more in these snacks are very good and it is healthy for our.

✓ I eat snacks in the morning because these snacks are very good and healthy for us.

The pronoun 'our' is incorrectly used; it should be 'us' to refer to the object of the preposition 'for'.

× I let her health in morning.

✓ I take care of my health in the morning.

The original sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. 'I let her health' does not convey a clear meaning. The corrected sentence clarifies the intended meaning and uses proper structure.

× Yes, when we eat snacks a in once a week or two times a week it is healthy, but in daily life it is very dangerous for our health.

✓ Yes, when we eat snacks once or twice a week, it is healthy, but in daily life, it is very dangerous for our health.

The preposition 'in' before 'once a week' is incorrect and removed. 'A in once a week' is incorrect; corrected to 'once or twice a week'. Commas are added for clarity.

× Yes, when we eat snacks a in once a week or two times a week it is healthy, but in daily life it is very dangerous for our health.

✓ Yes, when we eat snacks once or twice a week, it is healthy, but in daily life, it is very dangerous for our health.

The pronoun 'our' is correctly used here to indicate possession; no change needed in this aspect.

× When I am child, my mother made snacks for me.

✓ When I was a child, my mother made snacks for me.

The verb 'am' is present tense; it should be past tense 'was' to match the past time frame. Also, 'a' is missing before 'child'.

× I ate snack a snack so once a week because my mother did not make it.

✓ I ate snacks once a week because my mother did not make them daily.

'Snack a snack so once a week' is incorrect and unclear. 'Snack' should be plural 'snacks'. 'Did not make it' is unclear; corrected to 'did not make them daily' for clarity.

× Daily snacks for me.

✓ I did not have snacks daily.

The original sentence lacks a verb and is incomplete. The correction provides a complete sentence with proper structure.

× I like to eat fritter in snacks because it is very delicious in taste and my mother also make a freighter for me.

✓ I like to eat fritters as snacks because they are very delicious in taste and my mother also makes fritters for me.

'Fritter' should be plural 'fritters' when referring to snacks in general. 'Make' should be 'makes' to agree with third person singular subject 'my mother'. 'Freighter' is a misspelling of 'fritter'.

× I like to eat fritter in snacks because it is very delicious in taste and my mother also make a freighter for me.

✓ I like to eat fritters as snacks because they are very delicious in taste and my mother also makes fritters for me.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the third person singular subject 'my mother'.

× Because it is very convenient to make and easy also.

✓ Because it is very convenient and easy to make.

The phrase 'easy also' is awkward; it is better to say 'easy to make'. The preposition 'to' should be placed before 'make'.