Snacks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer needs to be clearer and more natural. Try to avoid grammatical errors and redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and keep your answer within 5 sentences. For example, start with a direct response, then explain why and what you usually eat.

Example: I usually eat snacks in the evening because I get hungry around 5 PM after a light lunch. For instance, I often eat chips or sweets before dinner to satisfy my hunger.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but fragmented and has some unclear parts. Try to form complete sentences and use linking words like 'however' and 'therefore' properly. Also, avoid spelling mistakes and clarify your points clearly.

Example: I don't think eating snacks like chips or fried foods every day is healthy. However, having them occasionally, such as in the evening after a light lunch, can help satisfy hunger without harming your health. Therefore, it's important to eat snacks in moderation.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors and incomplete sentences. Try to give a direct answer first, then explain with clear and complete sentences. Avoid unnecessary words and focus on coherence.

Example: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young. For example, I used to eat chips and fried foods daily because they were easily available at convenience stores. I usually ate them in the evening when I felt hungry.

Suggestion: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear words and sentence structure. Try to clearly name the snack and describe it in simple, complete sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Example: I like to eat samosas, which are my favorite evening snack after a light lunch. They are filled with spicy potatoes inside and are deep-fried until crispy on the outside.

× I don't eat snacks more often but whenever I turned to it, I usually prefer to eat at evening becauses after having my light lunch in the afternoon I become hungry at 5:00 PM and I eat chips or sweets as a snacks before heading to my dinner.

✓ I don't eat snacks very often but whenever I turn to them, I usually prefer to eat in the evening because after having my light lunch in the afternoon I become hungry at 5:00 PM and I eat chips or sweets as snacks before heading to my dinner.

The modal verb 'don't' is correctly used for present habits, but 'turned' should be present tense 'turn' to match the habitual action. Also, 'at evening' should be 'in the evening' as per preposition rules. 'As a snacks' is incorrect; 'as snacks' is correct because 'snacks' is plural and does not need an article here.

× I don't think eating snacks like chips or fried foods is very healthy if you have them everyday. However having such nice occasionally, for example in the evening after light lunch. Can help satisfy. Anger without affecting your health too much. It's important to eat them in moderation.

✓ I don't think eating snacks like chips or fried foods is very healthy if you have them every day. However, having such snacks occasionally, for example in the evening after a light lunch, can help satisfy hunger without affecting your health too much. It's important to eat them in moderation.

The modal verb usage is correct but the sentence structure is fragmented and some words are misspelled or misused. 'Everyday' should be 'every day' as an adverbial phrase. 'Nice' should be 'snacks'. 'Satisfy anger' is incorrect; it should be 'satisfy hunger'. Also, commas and articles are needed for clarity.

× Yes, I used to eat snacks. That too. I know this night such as chips and fried food on daily basis becauses it was easily available all over the convenience stores. Ann. Nude Oh my. Evening hunger. I used to eat aged. On daily basis.

✓ Yes, I used to eat snacks, such as chips and fried food on a daily basis because they were easily available all over the convenience stores. In the evening when I was hungry, I used to eat them daily.

The original sentences have many fragments and unclear phrases. 'Becauses' should be 'because'. 'On daily basis' should be 'on a daily basis'. 'Used to eat aged' is unclear and corrected to 'used to eat them daily'. Past tense 'were' is used to agree with plural 'chips and fried food'. Sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× I I like to eat some more Soph it is my favorite snack to have in my in evening. Session after light lunch. It's spicy. It is filled with spicy potato inside an. Outside it is in the door which is fully fried. It is crisp air from the outside an.

✓ I like to eat samosas; it is my favorite snack to have in the evening after a light lunch. It's spicy. It is filled with spicy potato inside. Outside, it is made of dough which is fully fried. It is crispy from the outside.

The pronoun 'it' is used correctly but the original sentences have many unclear words and fragments. 'Some more Soph' is corrected to 'samosas'. 'In my in evening session' is corrected to 'in the evening after a light lunch'. 'In the door' is corrected to 'made of dough'. 'Crisp air' is corrected to 'crispy'. The sentences are restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.