Snacks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer should be more natural and directly address the question. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases. Try to use simple, clear sentences and explain briefly when you eat snacks and why you prepare them yourself.

Example: I usually eat snacks during my leisure time because I enjoy cooking. I like to prepare my own snacks and experiment with different spices to make them tasty.

Suggestion: Your answer has good content but needs clearer structure and vocabulary. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid unclear terms like 'Adner protein nutrients'. Be specific and concise.

Example: I believe snacks can be healthy if they contain nutritious ingredients like vegetables and proteins. However, snacks cooked with a lot of oil are unhealthy because they add excess fat, which can lead to obesity and other health problems.

Suggestion: Your answer is repetitive and unclear. Try to directly answer the question with a simple topic sentence, then add one or two clear supporting details. Avoid grammatical errors and redundancy.

Example: Yes, I often ate snacks in the afternoon when I was young. I enjoyed preparing my own snacks and trying new flavors because I have always been interested in cooking.

Suggestion: Your answer has good ideas but needs clearer expression and better vocabulary. Avoid unclear phrases like 'long elastic energy'. Use linking words to connect ideas and be concise.

Example: I prefer healthy snacks that are low in calories and high in protein. For example, I often eat protein-rich salads with boiled vegetables and roasted peanuts, which give me lasting energy.

× I usually eat snacks in my leisure time and I am fascinated in cooking and cooking is my impact.

✓ I usually eat snacks in my leisure time and I am fascinated by cooking and cooking is my passion.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'fascinated'. The correct preposition is 'by' to indicate the object of fascination. Also, 'impact' is incorrect here; 'passion' fits the context better.

× So I prepare my snacks by my owns and add new spices and dishes to it and eat them.

✓ So I prepare my snacks on my own and add new spices and dishes to them and eat them.

The phrase 'by my owns' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'on my own'. Also, 'dishes to it' should be 'dishes to them' to agree with the plural 'snacks'.

× Well, in my perception, I think that healthy snacks is based on the nutrients that we put in.

✓ Well, in my perception, I think that healthy snacks are based on the nutrients that we put in.

The subject 'healthy snacks' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to maintain subject-verb agreement.

× If we used the world vegetables and some Adner protein nutrients, it would be healthier.

✓ If we used whole vegetables and some other protein nutrients, it would be healthier.

'World' is a wrong word here; the correct adjective is 'whole'. 'Adner' is a misspelling of 'other'. These corrections improve clarity and correctness.

× If we add some oil and cook date and oil, it is very unhealthy and which causes too much fat to a body and which further causes other diseases like obesity.

✓ If we add some oil and cook with oil, it is very unhealthy and causes too much fat in the body, which further causes other diseases like obesity.

The phrase 'cook date and oil' is unclear and likely incorrect; 'cook with oil' is appropriate. Also, 'fat to a body' should be 'fat in the body' for correct prepositional use.

× Definitely. I usually eat snacks in the afternoon. I have always giving of having a snack so I prepare it by my own and I adding new flavors to it and I am always fascinated cooking so I cook it in on my own and I am always possesses have a healthier snacks.

✓ Definitely. I usually ate snacks in the afternoon. I have always enjoyed having a snack, so I prepare it on my own and add new flavors to it. I am always fascinated by cooking, so I cook it on my own and always try to have healthier snacks.

The sentence mixes tenses incorrectly. 'Usually eat' should be past tense 'usually ate' to match 'when you were young'. 'Have always giving' is incorrect; 'have always enjoyed' is correct. 'By my own' should be 'on my own'. 'I adding' should be 'I add'. 'Possesses have' is incorrect; 'try to have' fits better.

× I am always fascinated cooking so I cook it in on my own and I am always possesses have a healthier snacks.

✓ I am always fascinated by cooking, so I cook it on my own and always try to have healthier snacks.

'Fascinated cooking' needs the preposition 'by'. 'Cook it in on my own' is incorrect; 'cook it on my own' is correct. 'Possesses have' is incorrect; 'try to have' is appropriate.

× To be honest, I always prefer healthy snacks that are low in calories and high in protein nutrients.

✓ To be honest, I always prefer healthy snacks that are low in calories and high in protein nutrients.

This sentence is correct; no change needed.

× In my all, I usually eat snacks in my leisure time.

✓ Overall, I usually eat snacks in my leisure time.

'In my all' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'Overall' to express generalization.

× I eat like proteins salads which contain of different boiled vegetables and like roasted peanuts which gives me further long elastic energy to do and.

✓ I eat protein salads which contain different boiled vegetables and roasted peanuts which give me long-lasting energy to keep going.

'Proteins salads' should be 'protein salads' (protein as adjective). 'Contain of' is incorrect; 'contain' is sufficient. 'Gives' should be 'give' to agree with plural 'peanuts'. 'Further long elastic energy to do and' is unclear; 'long-lasting energy to keep going' is clearer.