Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be clear and concise: start with a direct topic sentence describing the typical weather, then add one or two specific supporting details. Fix grammar (article use, singular/plural) and avoid repetition. Use linking words like "and" or "so" to connect ideas.

Example: I live in a semi-rural area where the climate is mostly warm and humid. During the rainy season the surroundings become very green, with fresh leaves and new growth, so people enjoy that time of year.

Suggestion: Give a clear opinion sentence and one or two specific reasons. Avoid repeating words and improve grammatical accuracy (use articles, correct comparative forms). Use linking words like "because" or "so" to explain.

Example: I prefer cold weather because I find it more comfortable to be active outdoors. When it is hot I feel tired and find it difficult to move around, but in cool weather I can walk and exercise easily.

Suggestion: Answer directly and give specific reasons that are relevant and coherent. Avoid unrelated details and correct sentence structure. Use linking words such as "because" and "for example" to connect ideas.

Example: I prefer wet weather because I enjoy the rain and the fresh atmosphere it brings. For example, rainy days are relaxing and there are local snacks and markets that I like to visit during the season.

Suggestion: Provide a clear frequency (how often) and reason with correct grammar. Use linking words like "because" and "so" and give a concise concrete example of when you check it.

Example: Yes, I check the weather forecast every morning and before planning outdoor work because my father is a farmer. For example, if heavy rain is predicted we delay watering the crops and prepare protective covers.

Suggestion: Start with a clear topic sentence about effects, then give 1–2 specific examples with correct grammar and linking words. Avoid repetition and be concise.

Example: Climate change has caused longer, hotter summers and shorter winters in my region. As a result, crops suffer from drought and farmers struggle because the growing seasons have become unpredictable.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer then add one or two specific examples of places and activities. Use correct tense and concise linking words such as "for example" or "because". Avoid unnecessary repetition and tighten sentences to 3–4 clear lines.

Example: Yes, I enjoy visiting cities with different climates; for example, I recently went to Shimla which is much colder than my hometown. I like exploring snowy landscapes, trying local foods, and doing outdoor activities like hiking in the winter.

× Usually I live in a urban area in my in my village there is so much cranery.

✓ Usually I live in an urban area. In my village there is a lot of greenery.

The indefinite article 'a' should be 'an' before a vowel sound (urban). The sentence was also run-on and unclear; split into two sentences. 'Cranery' is incorrect word choice; use 'greenery' and 'a lot of' for uncountable nouns instead of 'so much' which is awkward here.

× In my village people used to like rainy seasons because it's green.

✓ In my village people like the rainy season because it makes everything green.

Used 'used to like' implies a past habit; the speaker means a general preference so present simple 'like' is appropriate. 'Rainy seasons' was made singular 'the rainy season' to refer to the season in general. Also clarified cause by adding 'makes everything'.

× A greenery to a plants and new trees leaves to the plant.

✓ It brings greenery to the plants and new leaves to the trees.

Original is ungrammatical. Use 'brings' to show cause and effect. 'Plants' is plural and 'trees' takes 'new leaves.' Correct word order is 'new leaves on the trees' or 'new leaves to the trees'.

× Usually I prefer cold weather because it's quite cold.

✓ Usually I prefer cold weather because I feel quite comfortable in it.

Repetition of 'cold' is awkward and unclear. Changed to express reason clearly and maintain present simple for a habitual preference.

× I like it to move around, but there is an hot weather there are so much difficulties to move around, but in a cold weather we can move freely.

✓ I like being able to move around, but in hot weather there are many difficulties moving around. In cold weather we can move freely.

Removed unnecessary 'it' and corrected 'an hot' to omit the article. Use 'hot weather' without an article. 'So much difficulties' is incorrect; use 'many difficulties.' Broke into two sentences for clarity.

× Usually I prefer wet weather because I like to take a bath in a rainy season is known as a wet weather.

✓ Usually I prefer wet weather because I like bathing during the rainy season, which is wet weather.

Avoid repeated articles: 'a rainy season' should be 'the rainy season' when referring to the season in general. 'Take a bath in a rainy season is known as a wet weather' was ungrammatical and redundant; rephrased to be clear.

× I like to enjoy new snacks also.

✓ I also enjoy trying new snacks.

Word order improved: 'enjoy trying new snacks' is natural and 'also' placed before the verb for clarity.

× Yes, I have a habit to check forecast because of my father is an farmer.

✓ Yes, I have a habit of checking the forecast because my father is a farmer.

Use 'have a habit of' followed by gerund 'checking.' 'Check forecast' needs 'the forecast.' 'An farmer' is incorrect article; use 'a farmer.' Removed extra 'because of' and 'is' redundancy.

× He always ask to me check the weather forecast because his and farmer according to the rainy season he have to change and give the water to the crops.

✓ He always asks me to check the weather forecast because, as a farmer, he has to adjust irrigation for his crops according to the rainy season.

Subject-verb agreement: 'ask' -> 'asks' and 'have' -> 'has.' Correct pronoun and word order: 'asks me to check.' 'His and farmer' is wrong; use 'as a farmer.' Clarified meaning 'adjust irrigation' for clarity.

× There is lot of effects on climate change in the recent year because I have usually see that summers take a lot of time and the winters only come for the two to three months and its effect its effect by the climate change.

✓ There have been a lot of effects of climate change in recent years because I usually see that summers last much longer while winters only come for two or three months.

Use present perfect 'have been' to describe recent changes. 'There is lot of effects' -> 'There have been a lot of effects' for correct number agreement. 'Have usually see' incorrect; use 'I usually see.' 'Take a lot of time' -> 'last much longer.' Removed repeated phrase 'its effect'.

× Being a travel buff, I travel a lot. Yes, I visit other cities having a different climate.

✓ Being a travel buff, I travel a lot. Yes, I visit other cities that have a different climate.

Use a relative clause 'that have' rather than 'having' to describe cities. 'Having' could be used but 'that have' is more natural here.

× Recently I visit the Shimla which have a cold weather.

✓ Recently I visited Shimla, which has cold weather.

Use past simple 'visited' to describe a recent completed action. 'The Shimla' is incorrect; use 'Shimla' without 'the.' 'Which have' should be 'which has' for subject-verb agreement.

× In my city there is a hot weather.

✓ In my city the weather is hot.

Incorrect article usage: say 'the weather is hot' rather than 'there is a hot weather.' 'There is' is unnecessary.

× I like to explore there in a some in the winter season because I like that and I enjoyed there a lot of things, places and new adventurous things and food.

✓ I like to visit there in the winter because I enjoy many activities, places, adventurous experiences, and local food.

Original is repetitive and ungrammatical. Use 'visit there in the winter' and 'enjoy many activities' for clarity. Use consistent tense: present 'enjoy.' Simplified list and removed redundant words.