Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 你的回答有些语法错误和表达不自然。建议你直接回答问题，使用正确的时态和结构，并且避免重复。可以用更具体的词汇描述天气特点。

Example: The weather in my city, which is in southwestern China, is generally mild and comfortable throughout the year.

Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议你用简洁的句子表达你的喜好，并用连接词使句子更连贯。避免重复表达同一意思。

Example: I prefer cold weather because although I need to wear more clothes, I feel more comfortable. Hot weather makes me feel sticky and anxious.

Suggestion: 你的回答语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议你用完整的句子说明原因，并用连接词连接观点。注意形容词和副词的正确使用。

Example: I prefer dry weather because it is cooler and more comfortable. On the other hand, wet weather often causes many problems.

Suggestion: 回答较好，但有重复词语和小错误。建议你注意句子流畅性，避免重复，并且用更自然的表达方式。

Example: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast on my phone before going out to make sure the weather won't affect my plans.

Suggestion: 回答中有严重语法和表达错误，内容不清晰。建议你用简单明了的句子表达观点，避免拼写错误，并具体说明气候变化的影响。

Example: In recent years, climate change has caused more extreme weather, such as very hot summers and severe storms around the world.

Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然。建议你用正确的时态和结构表达你的想法，并用具体的词汇描述不同气候的城市。

Example: Yes, I want to visit cities with different climates. Since I was born and raised in northern China, I would like to explore southern cities, which have warmer and fresher air.

× Well my the city I lived, the weather is very comfortable because it's located in southwestern area of China and the weather is very soft.

✓ Well, in the city where I live, the weather is very comfortable because it's located in the southwestern area of China and the weather is very mild.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and missing prepositions, causing confusion. 'My the city I lived' is incorrect; it should be 'in the city where I live'. Also, 'soft' is not appropriate to describe weather; 'mild' is better. Adding commas improves clarity.

× I prefer cold weather because I find cold weather the only question is you need to wear a lot of clothes to keep warm.

✓ I prefer cold weather because I find cold weather comfortable; the only issue is you need to wear a lot of clothes to keep warm.

The original sentence lacks proper conjunctions and punctuation, making it confusing. 'The only question is' should be 'the only issue is' or 'the only problem is'. Using a semicolon or conjunction clarifies the relationship between ideas.

× But in hot weather The Dirty feeling always make me anxiety make me anxious.

✓ But in hot weather, the dirty feeling always makes me anxious.

'The Dirty feeling' should be lowercase 'dirty feeling'. 'Make me anxiety' is incorrect; 'make me anxious' is correct because 'anxious' is an adjective describing a feeling, while 'anxiety' is a noun. Also, subject-verb agreement requires 'makes' for singular subject.

× I prefer dry weather because dry weather more colder and more comfortable.

✓ I prefer dry weather because dry weather is colder and more comfortable.

'More colder' is incorrect because 'colder' is already a comparative form; 'more' is unnecessary. Also, the verb 'is' is missing before 'colder'.

× But in the wet weather there are numerous bad situation would emerges.

✓ But in wet weather, numerous bad situations would emerge.

'Situation' should be plural 'situations' to match 'numerous'. 'Would emerges' is incorrect; 'would emerge' is correct because 'would' is followed by the base form of the verb.

× I would check the weather forecast on my phone and to to ensure the situation wouldn't damage my plans.

✓ I would check the weather forecast on my phone to ensure the situation wouldn't damage my plans.

The phrase 'and to to' is incorrect and redundant. Removing 'and' and one 'to' corrects the sentence. Also, 'damage my plans' is correct usage.

× From my observation, especially like global warming, the climate change makes the weather over the world becau are becoming more extreme like 2 hearts or too close.

✓ From my observation, especially with global warming, climate change is making the weather around the world become more extreme, like very hot or too cold.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains unclear phrases like 'becau are' and '2 hearts or too close'. Correcting to 'especially with global warming' and clarifying 'very hot or too cold' improves meaning and grammar.

× Yes, I would like to visit some places which is not familiar to me because I lived, born and lived in the northern city in China.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit some places which are not familiar to me because I was born and have lived in a northern city in China.

'Which is' should be 'which are' to agree with plural 'places'. 'Born' needs auxiliary verb 'was' to form past tense. 'Lived' is repeated; 'have lived' is better to indicate experience.

× I prefer to explore the southern city, which is more lower temperature, so fresh. I'm so fresh.

✓ I prefer to explore southern cities, which have lower temperatures and fresh air. I feel very refreshed.

'More lower' is incorrect; 'lower' alone suffices. 'Southern city' should be plural 'southern cities' for generalization. 'So fresh' and 'I'm so fresh' are awkward; 'fresh air' and 'I feel very refreshed' are appropriate expressions.