Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to use correct verb tenses and avoid redundancy. Also, keep your answer concise and clear by limiting to 3-4 sentences. For example, say "The weather in Bangalore changes frequently; mornings are often sunny, but it usually rains by evening. This unpredictability makes forecasting difficult."

Example: The weather in Bangalore changes frequently; mornings are often sunny, but it usually rains by evening. This unpredictability makes forecasting difficult.

Suggestion: Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, "I prefer hot weather because it allows me to enjoy activities like swimming and pool games. Moreover, I enjoy cold snacks such as ice cream during summer."

Example: I prefer hot weather because it allows me to enjoy activities like swimming and pool games. Moreover, I enjoy cold snacks such as ice cream during summer.

Suggestion: Good answer but improve grammar by using correct verb forms and add linking words for coherence. For example, "I prefer dry weather because it allows me to enjoy outdoor activities with friends easily. In contrast, wet weather makes travelling difficult and clothes muddy, which is inconvenient."

Example: I prefer dry weather because it allows me to enjoy outdoor activities with friends easily. In contrast, wet weather makes travelling difficult and clothes muddy, which is inconvenient.

Suggestion: Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example, "Yes, I usually check the weather forecast before planning activities with friends. If rain is expected, I prefer indoor activities. Checking the forecast helps us plan better."

Example: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast before planning activities with friends. If rain is expected, I prefer indoor activities. Checking the forecast helps us plan better.

Suggestion: Good content and structure. Improve grammar by using singular/plural forms correctly and add linking words for clarity. For example, "In my opinion, climate change is mainly caused by air pollution and excessive industrial activities. These have disturbed the natural climate balance, leading to serious ecosystem damage. Consequently, we experience more extreme weather events and biodiversity loss."

Example: In my opinion, climate change is mainly caused by air pollution and excessive industrial activities. These have disturbed the natural climate balance, leading to serious ecosystem damage. Consequently, we experience more extreme weather events and biodiversity loss.

Suggestion: Improve sentence structure and grammar. Use linking words and be more specific. For example, "Certainly, I would love to visit cities like Himachal Pradesh in northern India because of its beautiful and varied climate. The weather there is often cold, which is different from where I live."

Example: Certainly, I would love to visit cities like Himachal Pradesh in northern India because of its beautiful and varied climate. The weather there is often cold, which is different from where I live.

× In Bangalore the weather changed quite frequently and sometimes the morning are very sunny by but by the evening it's often start to rain.

✓ In Bangalore the weather changes quite frequently and sometimes the mornings are very sunny but by the evening it often starts to rain.

The sentence has singular and plural issues: 'changed' should be 'changes' to match present tense, 'morning' should be plural 'mornings' to agree with 'are', and 'it's often start' should be 'it often starts' for subject-verb agreement and correct tense.

× In Bangalore the weather changed quite frequently and sometimes the morning are very sunny by but by the evening it's often start to rain.

✓ In Bangalore the weather changes quite frequently and sometimes the mornings are very sunny but by the evening it often starts to rain.

The verb forms 'changed' and 'start' do not agree with the third person singular subject 'weather' and 'it'. They should be 'changes' and 'starts' respectively to maintain subject-verb agreement in present tense.

× I mostly prefer hot weather over the cold weather because in summer we can do various kinds of summer activities such as swimming, going to the different kinds of pool activities.

✓ I mostly prefer hot weather over cold weather because in summer we can do various kinds of summer activities such as swimming and going to different kinds of pool activities.

The phrase 'the cold weather' is better as 'cold weather' without 'the' for general preference. Also, 'the different kinds' should be 'different kinds' without 'the' to indicate variety generally.

× Moreover, we can have a cold snacks like ice cream during the summer.

✓ Moreover, we can have cold snacks like ice cream during the summer.

'A cold snacks' is incorrect because 'snacks' is plural and cannot be preceded by 'a'. Removing 'a' corrects the quantifier usage.

× I love to go for swimming as it.

✓ I love to go swimming.

The phrase 'go for swimming as it' is ungrammatical and incomplete. The correct structure is 'go swimming' to express the activity.

× When it rains, it become difficult to travel around and our clothes often get muddy, which is quite inconvenient.

✓ When it rains, it becomes difficult to travel around and our clothes often get muddy, which is quite inconvenient.

The verb 'become' should be 'becomes' to agree with the singular subject 'it' in present tense.

× Most of the time I will check the weather forecast before planning any activities with my friends.

✓ Most of the time I check the weather forecast before planning any activities with my friends.

Using 'will' here is unnecessary for habitual actions. The simple present 'check' is appropriate to express routine.

× If it's going to rain, I would prefer going to the indoor activities rather than outdo outdoor activities.

✓ If it's going to rain, I would prefer going to indoor activities rather than outdoor activities.

'Going to the indoor activities' is incorrect; 'indoor activities' does not need 'the'. Also, 'outdo outdoor activities' is a typo and should be 'outdoor activities'.

× And it is better to check weather forecast to predict all those weather information so that we can plan.

✓ And it is better to check the weather forecast to get all that weather information so that we can plan.

'Weather forecast' needs the definite article 'the'. 'Predict all those weather information' is incorrect; 'get all that weather information' is more natural. 'Information' is uncountable, so 'those' is incorrect.

× From my point of view, climate change in recent years has been largely caused by the air pollutions and the excessive industrial activities.

✓ From my point of view, climate change in recent years has been largely caused by air pollution and excessive industrial activities.

'Air pollutions' is incorrect; 'pollution' is uncountable and should be singular. Also, 'the' before 'air pollution' and 'excessive industrial activities' is unnecessary here.

× These factors have disturbed the natural climate balance, leading to serious damage to ecosystem.

✓ These factors have disturbed the natural climate balance, leading to serious damage to the ecosystem.

'Ecosystem' is singular and needs the definite article 'the' to specify the ecosystem affected.

× As a result, we have been more extreme weather events and a decline in biodiversity.

✓ As a result, we have had more extreme weather events and a decline in biodiversity.

The phrase 'have been more extreme weather events' is incorrect; 'have had' is the correct present perfect form to indicate occurrence of events.

× Certainly, I would love to visit other cities such as Himachal Pradesh because it is in the north side of the India and has a beautiful weather on them.

✓ Certainly, I would love to visit other places such as Himachal Pradesh because it is in the northern part of India and has beautiful weather.

'Himachal Pradesh' is a state, not a city, so 'places' is better than 'cities'. 'North side of the India' should be 'northern part of India' without 'the'. 'A beautiful weather on them' is incorrect; 'beautiful weather' without article and 'on them' is unnecessary.

× In that place, the weather varies from time to time and it often has a cold weather.

✓ In that place, the weather varies from time to time and it often is cold.

'Has a cold weather' is incorrect; 'weather' is uncountable and does not take 'a'. The correct expression is 'it often is cold'.