Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to avoid filler words like 'umm' and 'uh' to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, use linking words such as 'because' to connect your ideas clearly. For example, you can say, 'The weather here is very hot because it is the end of the summer season, which makes outdoor activities tiring due to the humidity and high temperature.'

Example: The weather here is very hot because it is the end of the summer season, which makes outdoor activities tiring due to the humidity and high temperature.

Suggestion: Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Use clear linking words to connect your ideas logically. For example, say, 'I definitely prefer cold weather because it feels cool and helps me relax, allowing me to work peacefully. On the other hand, hot weather is frustrating and uncomfortable when I go outside.'

Example: I definitely prefer cold weather because it feels cool and helps me relax, allowing me to work peacefully. On the other hand, hot weather is frustrating and uncomfortable when I go outside.

Suggestion: Try to use more precise vocabulary and avoid filler words. Also, use linking words like 'because' and 'however' to make your answer coherent. For example, 'I prefer dry weather because it improves my mood. However, heavy rain makes me feel uncomfortable.'

Example: I prefer dry weather because it improves my mood. However, heavy rain makes me feel uncomfortable.

Suggestion: Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Structure your answer clearly with linking words. For example, 'I don't usually check the weather forecast because I'm not used to it. However, when I go out, I check the weather on my phone using the Google weather app.'

Example: I don't usually check the weather forecast because I'm not used to it. However, when I go out, I check the weather on my phone using the Google weather app.

Suggestion: Use more specific vocabulary and clearer sentence structure. For example, 'I think climate change is caused by global warming, which results from increased pollution and waste. This leads to changes in weather patterns in many regions.'

Example: I think climate change is caused by global warming, which results from increased pollution and waste. This leads to changes in weather patterns in many regions.

Suggestion: Avoid unclear phrases and use correct grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example, 'Yes, I would like to visit cities with snowfall because no one in my country has seen snow. I want to experience cold weather below zero degrees and see how I can adapt to it.'

Example: Yes, I would like to visit cities with snowfall because no one in my country has seen snow. I want to experience cold weather below zero degrees and see how I can adapt to it.

× So people are getting so tired when caring when doing some kind of outdoor activities because of the humid and the high temperature.

✓ So people are getting so tired when caring for or doing some kind of outdoor activities because of the humidity and the high temperature.

The preposition 'caring' should be followed by 'for' to indicate the object of care. Also, 'the humid' is incorrect; it should be 'the humidity' to correctly refer to the condition of moisture in the air.

× I definitely prefer cold weather because it feels so cool and makes me to feel relaxed and, umm, get your, get your work and uh, get into your work in a peaceful manner.

✓ I definitely prefer cold weather because it feels so cool and makes me feel relaxed and, umm, get my work done and, uh, get into my work in a peaceful manner.

The pronouns 'your' are incorrectly used when referring to oneself; 'my' is appropriate here. Also, 'makes me to feel' should be 'makes me feel' as 'make' is followed by the bare infinitive without 'to'.

× I would prefer dry weather because it's when climate is good, your mood is also will be so good.

✓ I would prefer dry weather because when the climate is good, your mood will also be good.

The sentence has awkward phrasing and incorrect word order. 'It's when climate is good' is incorrect; it should be 'when the climate is good'. Also, 'your mood is also will be so good' is redundant and incorrect; 'your mood will also be good' is correct.

× If it's right it it it let it be. I don't care of it because whenever I go out I choose to take my phone and check my weather.

✓ If it's right, let it be. I don't care about it because whenever I go out I choose to take my phone and check the weather.

The phrase 'I don't care of it' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'about'. Also, 'check my weather' is incorrect; it should be 'check the weather'.

× I think the effect would be due to the global warming because there are more pollution and some kind of waste that affects the earth and also the weather.

✓ I think the effect would be due to global warming because there is more pollution and some kinds of waste that affect the earth and also the weather.

'Pollution' is uncountable and should be treated as singular with 'is'. 'Some kind of waste' should be pluralized to 'some kinds of waste' to match the plural verb 'affect'. Also, 'the global warming' is incorrect; 'global warming' is used without 'the'.

× Yes, I would like to visit cities which have snowfall because in my country no one would be witness the snowfall.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit cities which have snowfall because in my country no one would witness the snowfall.

The phrase 'would be witness' is incorrect; the correct form is 'would witness' as 'witness' is a verb here and does not need 'be'.

× So I would like to go in a snow country which is in a minus degree.

✓ So I would like to go to a snowy country which is below zero degrees.

The preposition 'go in' is incorrect; it should be 'go to'. Also, 'a snow country' is unnatural; 'a snowy country' is correct. 'In a minus degree' is incorrect; 'below zero degrees' or 'minus degrees' is appropriate.

× I don't know I would can pad the weather condition.

✓ I don't know if I would be able to adapt to the weather conditions.

The phrase 'would can pad' is incorrect; modal verbs 'would' and 'can' cannot be used together. The correct expression is 'would be able to'. Also, 'pad' is incorrect; the intended word is 'adapt'.