Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cavabınızda təkrarlar və qeyri-dəqiqliklər var. Daha təbii və səlis ifadə üçün, fikirlərinizi daha qısa və aydın şəkildə ifadə edin. Məsələn, mövsümlərə görə hava şəraitini sadə və konkret şəkildə təsvir edin.

Example: The weather in my country is quite changeable. For instance, summers are usually sunny, while autumn tends to be rainy and windy.

Suggestion: Cümlələrinizdə qrammatik səhvlər və anlaşılmaz ifadələr var. Daha aydın və düzgün ifadə üçün, fikirlərinizi sadə cümlələrlə və düzgün söz seçimi ilə ifadə edin.

Example: I prefer hot weather because I enjoy going to the seaside or swimming in the pool. Summer is my favorite season, and I like to drink cold beverages during that time.

Suggestion: Cümlələrinizdə qarışıqlıq və qrammatik səhvlər var. Daha aydın və məntiqli cavab üçün fikirlərinizi daha sadə və düzgün quruluşda ifadə edin, əlaqələndirici sözlərdən istifadə edin.

Example: I prefer dry weather because wet weather makes my hair messy. Also, dry weather feels calm and beautiful, which helps me relax.

Suggestion: Cümlələrinizdə zaman və qrammatika səhvləri var. Daha təbii və düzgün cavab üçün, zamanları düzgün istifadə edin və fikirlərinizi daha aydın ifadə edin.

Example: Yes, I check the weather forecast every day because I go to court and university. If the weather is sunny tomorrow, I will wear shorts or T-shirts, but if it rains, I will wear a blouse and pants.

Suggestion: Cümlələrinizdə məna qarışıqlığı və səhvlər var. Daha aydın və məntiqli cavab üçün fikirlərinizi düzgün ifadə edin və əlaqələndirici sözlərdən istifadə edin.

Example: I think climate change negatively affects elderly people and our health. For example, our skin becomes very dry, so we need to use sunscreen even in winter.

Suggestion: Cümlələrinizdə qrammatik səhvlər və qeyri-dəqiqliklər var. Daha aydın və düzgün cavab üçün, fikirlərinizi sadə və məntiqli şəkildə ifadə edin.

Example: Actually, I visited Germany five days ago. The climate there is very different from my country; it is rainy and windy, while my country is mostly sunny.

× Actually, in my country, the weather is, uh, the weather is like sunny, umm, actually it's changeable weather to weather.

✓ Actually, in my country, the weather is, uh, like sunny, umm, actually it's changeable from weather to weather.

The phrase 'changeable weather to weather' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'changeable from weather to weather' to indicate variability. The adjective 'changeable' should be followed by 'from' to show the change between different weather conditions.

× For example, in the summer the weather is sunny, but in the autumn the weather is rainy or windy.

✓ For example, in the summer the weather is sunny, but in the autumn the weather is rainy or windy.

This sentence is grammatically correct and does not require correction.

× So it's so changeable.

✓ So it's very changeable.

Using 'so' before an adjective is informal and can be ambiguous. 'Very' is more appropriate to emphasize the degree of changeability in formal or semi-formal speech.

× I am keen on hot weather because I love to go seaside or to go to pool or another scene.

✓ I am keen on hot weather because I love to go to the seaside or to the pool or other places.

The phrase 'go seaside' and 'go to pool' lack the definite article 'the'. Also, 'another scene' is unclear; 'other places' is more appropriate. Prepositions and articles are necessary for correct noun phrases.

× So the my favorite weather is the hot and my favorite season.

✓ So my favorite weather is hot and my favorite season is summer.

The phrase 'the my favorite' is incorrect; 'my favorite' is sufficient. Also, 'the hot' should be 'hot'. The sentence is incomplete without specifying the favorite season.

× In the summer I like to drink cold drinks such as mosquito or another thing.

✓ In the summer I like to drink cold drinks such as mojito or other beverages.

'Mosquito' is incorrect; likely the intended word is 'mojito', a cold drink. 'Another thing' is vague; 'other beverages' is clearer.

× I prefer dry weather because of the summer when the wet weather my hair is so mixed because of the weather is so wet, rainy or another thing.

✓ I prefer dry weather because in summer, when the weather is wet, my hair gets very messy because of the rain or other conditions.

The original sentence has incorrect prepositions and awkward phrasing. 'Because of the summer when the wet weather' is incorrect; it should be 'because in summer, when the weather is wet'. 'My hair is so mixed' is unclear; 'my hair gets very messy' is better.

× But the dry weather is so beautiful, calm, I feel like relaxed.

✓ But dry weather is so beautiful and calm, I feel relaxed.

The phrase 'I feel like relaxed' is incorrect; it should be 'I feel relaxed'. Also, 'the dry weather' can be 'dry weather' in general statements. The adjectives should be connected properly.

× Yes, I checked the weather forecast all the day, because I go to the courts, I go to the university.

✓ Yes, I check the weather forecast all day because I go to the courts and the university.

The question asks about habitual action, so present tense 'check' is appropriate instead of past tense 'checked'. 'All the day' should be 'all day'. Also, conjunction 'and' is needed between 'courts' and 'university'.

× So if the tomorrow the weather will be sunny, I can I can wear shorts or T-shirts, but the weather will be rainy.

✓ So if the weather is sunny tomorrow, I can wear shorts or T-shirts, but if the weather is rainy, I must wear blouses or pants.

In conditional sentences about the future, the present simple is used in the 'if' clause, not 'will'. Also, 'the tomorrow' is incorrect; just 'tomorrow' is correct. Repetition 'I can I can' is an error.

× I must wear blouses or some pants.

✓ I must wear a blouse or some pants.

'Blouses' is plural but 'some pants' is plural; mixing singular and plural is awkward. Usually, 'a blouse' (singular) pairs better with 'some pants' (plural). Also, 'blouse' is singular countable noun requiring an article.

× I think it's very bad for old people, for our health, for our skin, because of the climate change, our skin, our skin is so dry.

✓ I think it's very bad for old people, for our health, and for our skin because of climate change; our skin becomes very dry.

Repetition of 'our skin' is redundant. Also, 'because of the climate change' should be 'because of climate change' without 'the'. The sentence structure is improved by connecting ideas properly.

× So we can use some sunscreen also in the winter, but past five years we must use some criminal.

✓ So we can use some sunscreen also in the winter, but in the past five years, we must use some cream.

'Criminal' is incorrect; likely intended word is 'cream'. Also, 'past five years' needs 'in the' before it. 'Some cream' is appropriate for skin care.

× Actually, I wasted five days ago.

✓ Actually, I visited five days ago.

'Wasted' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'visited' to indicate going to a place. The past tense 'visited' is appropriate here.

× In Germany, the climate is very different from our country.

✓ In Germany, the climate is very different from that of our country.

When comparing climates of two places, 'different from that of' is the correct form to avoid ambiguity.

× In the Germany, the weather is so rainy, windy, but in our country the weather is so sunny, we feel so bad for another.

✓ In Germany, the weather is very rainy and windy, but in our country, the weather is very sunny; we feel bad for each other.

'In the Germany' is incorrect; 'in Germany' is correct. 'So rainy, windy' should be 'very rainy and windy' for clarity. 'Feel so bad for another' is unclear; 'feel bad for each other' is the correct expression.