Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Apni uttor e boro bhabe kotha bolte paren, kintu apnar sentence gulo shothik bhabe gathito hoy nai. Apni proshner uttor shuru korar shomoy subject o verb er shothik byabohar korun ebong sentence gulo ke sohoje bujhte parben emon bhabe gathito korun. Apni linking words babohar korte paren jemon 'and', 'because' jate uttor ta natural lage.

Example: The weather in my area is very hot. When I wake up, the sun is already shining brightly. In the afternoon, we often experience strong heat waves which make it uncomfortable to stay outside.

Suggestion: Apni apnar opinion spasto bhabe bolte paren, kintu kichu sentence onek bar bar hoyeche ebong kichu bhul ache. Apni sentence gulo ke sohoje bujhte parben emon bhabe gathito korun ebong linking words babohar korun jate uttor ta logical lage.

Example: I prefer cold weather because hot weather makes me feel uncomfortable and less focused. On the other hand, cold weather refreshes my mind and helps me think clearly, so I like it more.

Suggestion: Apnar uttor e kichu repetition ache ebong sentence gulo aro spasto korte hobe. Apni linking words babohar kore uttor ke aro logical korte paren. Apnar karon gulo aro specific korte paren.

Example: I prefer dry weather because when it rains, it becomes difficult to use my bike or car. This is very frustrating for me, so I like dry weather better.

Suggestion: Apni uttor e shothik tense babohar korun ebong sentence gulo ke sohoje bujhte parben emon bhabe gathito korun. Apni linking words babohar korte paren jate uttor ta natural lage.

Example: I check the weather forecast several times a day on my phone. I use applications and websites like BBC Weather, usually in the morning and late at night.

Suggestion: Apnar uttor e onek bhul ache ebong sentence gulo spasto noy. Apni proshner uttor shuru korar shomoy subject o verb er shothik byabohar korun ebong sentence gulo ke sohoje bujhte parben emon bhabe gathito korun. Apni specific details dite paren ebong linking words babohar korun.

Example: In recent years, climate change has caused many problems. For example, we have experienced very hot heat waves and unusual rain during the winter season.

Suggestion: Apnar uttor e kichu repetition ache ebong sentence gulo spasto noy. Apni proshner uttor shuru korar shomoy subject o verb er shothik byabohar korun ebong sentence gulo ke sohoje bujhte parben emon bhabe gathito korun. Apni linking words babohar korte paren ebong specific details dite paren.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit cities with cold weather because my area is very hot. For example, I want to visit a northern city in my country that has a pleasant and cool climate.

× In my area weather like is very hot.

✓ In my area, the weather is very hot.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and missing article 'the' before 'weather'. The correct sentence places the subject 'the weather' before the verb 'is' and includes the article for proper grammar.

× When I wake up and see the sun, the sun is so brutal.

✓ When I wake up and see the sun, it is so brutal.

Repeating 'the sun' twice is redundant. Using 'it' as a pronoun refers back to 'the sun' correctly. Also, 'brutal' is acceptable here as an adjective describing the sun's intensity.

× In in afternoon it give us very hot heat wave.

✓ In the afternoon, it gives us a very hot heat wave.

The verb 'give' should be in third person singular form 'gives' to agree with the subject 'it'. Also, 'in in' is a repetition error and 'the' is needed before 'afternoon'. Adding 'a' before 'very hot heat wave' is necessary as 'heat wave' is a countable noun here.

× I prefer cold weather because hot weather gives us mentally very sick or don't think any critical critical thoughts in hot weather.

✓ I prefer cold weather because hot weather makes us mentally very sick and prevents us from thinking any critical thoughts.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'gives us mentally very sick' and 'don't think' without a subject. The verb 'makes' is more appropriate here, and the second clause needs a subject 'us' and proper verb form 'prevents us from thinking'.

× On the other hand, cold weather gives us very cold mind and refreshing brain and that's why I prefer to prefer cold weather.

✓ On the other hand, cold weather gives us a clear mind and a refreshing brain, and that's why I prefer cold weather.

'Very cold mind' is not a natural expression; 'a clear mind' is better. Also, 'prefer to prefer' is redundant; only one 'prefer' is needed. Articles 'a' are necessary before 'clear mind' and 'refreshing brain'.

× I prefer dry weather because wet weather we don't don't use our bike or cars in wet weather and this is very frustrating.

✓ I prefer dry weather because in wet weather, we don't use our bikes or cars, and this is very frustrating.

The sentence has repeated 'don't' and awkward structure. Adding 'in' before 'wet weather' clarifies the condition. 'Bike' should be plural 'bikes' to match 'cars'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× That's why I prefer to dry weather.

✓ That's why I prefer dry weather.

The preposition 'to' is unnecessary after 'prefer'. The correct form is 'prefer dry weather' without 'to'.

× In several time I am checking my weather forecast in my in my phone.

✓ I check the weather forecast on my phone several times.

'In several time' is incorrect; 'several times' is the correct plural form. Present simple tense 'I check' is more appropriate for habitual actions than present continuous 'I am checking'. Also, 'on my phone' is the correct preposition.

× I used some application and website in my phone which is BBC weather forecast and I use it in the morning and and at the late night.

✓ I use some applications and websites on my phone, such as BBC Weather Forecast, and I check it in the morning and late at night.

'Used' should be 'use' to match present habit. 'Application and website' should be plural 'applications and websites'. 'On my phone' is the correct preposition. 'At the late night' should be 'late at night'. Repetition of 'and' is removed.

× Climate change in recent year is very bars because past five years we got very, very heat up, heat wave and winter season.

✓ Climate change in recent years is very severe because in the past five years, we have had very intense heat waves and winter seasons.

'Year' should be plural 'years'. 'Bars' is incorrect; 'severe' or 'bad' is appropriate. 'Got' should be 'have had' for present perfect tense. 'Heat up, heat wave' is redundant; 'intense heat waves' is better. 'Winter season' should be plural 'winter seasons'.

× We got in rain in winter. Oh.

✓ We have had rain in winter.

'Got in rain' is incorrect; 'have had rain' is the correct present perfect form. 'In winter' is correct preposition.

× Yes, from my from my living area this is very hot.

✓ Yes, my living area is very hot.

The phrase 'from my from my living area this is very hot' is awkward and repetitive. Simplifying to 'my living area is very hot' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× I'd like to cold weather cities which is silent I guess.

✓ I'd like to visit cold weather cities, which are quiet, I guess.

'Like to cold weather cities' is incorrect; 'like to visit cold weather cities' is correct. 'Which is silent' should be 'which are quiet' to agree with plural 'cities' and use a more natural adjective.

× So it is a northern area from my country and has have very good climate.

✓ They are in the northern area of my country and have a very good climate.

'It is a northern area' is incorrect when referring to multiple cities; 'they are' is correct. 'Has have' is redundant; 'have' is correct. 'Of my country' is the correct preposition.