Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to use clearer vocabulary and structure your sentences more naturally. Avoid redundancy and be more specific about the weather conditions.

Example: I enjoy mild weather where I live because it's neither too hot nor too cold. This kind of weather makes me feel refreshed and comfortable throughout the day.

Suggestion: Your answer is repetitive and incomplete. Try to give a clear topic sentence and support it with reasons or examples. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Example: I prefer mild weather because extreme temperatures make me uncomfortable. For example, very hot weather can be exhausting, and very cold weather can be harsh on my health.

Suggestion: Your answer is mostly clear but has some grammatical mistakes and incomplete sentences. Try to complete your thoughts and use correct verb forms. Also, provide specific examples to support your preference.

Example: I prefer dry weather, especially in autumn, because it allows me to enjoy outdoor activities comfortably. For instance, I like going for walks or cycling when the weather is mild and dry.

Suggestion: Your answer is incomplete and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a full response with clear reasons and use proper sentence structure. Avoid vague phrases like 'very interesting for me'.

Example: Yes, I check the weather forecast every day using my smartphone. It helps me plan my activities and dress appropriately for the day.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains repetition and grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas clearly and use specific vocabulary related to climate change. Avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

Example: In recent years, climate change has caused temperatures to rise steadily, leading to more extreme weather events. This is a serious warning sign for our environment.

Suggestion: Your answer is repetitive and incomplete. Try to give a clear reason for your preference and use varied vocabulary. Complete your sentences and avoid repeating the same phrases.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because I enjoy experiencing new environments. For example, visiting a snowy city would be exciting since I live in a warm area.

× I love light ring weather because it's a very not so cold or not so hot in the weather.

✓ I love light rain weather because it's not too cold or too hot.

The phrase 'light ring weather' is incorrect; it should be 'light rain weather'. Also, 'very not so cold or not so hot' is awkward and incorrect; the correct expression is 'not too cold or too hot' to describe mild weather conditions.

× So I think everyone like the weather.

✓ So I think everyone likes the weather.

The subject 'everyone' is singular and requires the verb 'likes' in the third person singular form for subject-verb agreement.

× I feel refreshed and I love it for.

✓ I feel refreshed and I love it.

The phrase 'I love it for' is incomplete and incorrect. The sentence should end with 'I love it' to be grammatically correct and clear.

× Of course I prefer mild weather because I don't like very cold or very hot weather, so I always like the medium weather, hot and cold.

✓ Of course, I prefer mild weather because I don't like very cold or very hot weather, so I always like medium weather, neither too hot nor too cold.

The phrase 'the medium weather, hot and cold' is unclear and incorrect. It should be 'medium weather, neither too hot nor too cold' to clearly express preference for mild weather.

× So I.

✓ So I prefer mild weather.

The sentence 'So I.' is incomplete and lacks a verb or complement. It should be completed to express the intended meaning.

× I always prefer mild weather like autumn.

✓ I always prefer mild weather like in autumn.

The phrase 'like autumn' is better expressed as 'like in autumn' to indicate the season as a time reference.

× It's allow me to enjoy outdoor activities without feeling too hot or too cold.

✓ It allows me to enjoy outdoor activities without feeling too hot or too cold.

The verb 'allow' needs to be in the third person singular form 'allows' to agree with the singular subject 'It'.

× So I always do my all things like going outside or.

✓ So I always do all my activities like going outside.

The phrase 'do my all things' is incorrect; it should be 'do all my activities'. Also, the sentence is incomplete and should end properly.

× Yeah, of course. It's a very interesting for me.

✓ Yeah, of course. It's very interesting for me.

The article 'a' is unnecessary before 'very interesting' because 'interesting' is an adjective describing the situation, not a countable noun.

× I always use my cell phones to check the weather, so I daily do it.

✓ I always use my cell phone to check the weather, so I do it daily.

'Cell phones' should be singular 'cell phone' if referring to one device. Also, 'I daily do it' is awkward; the correct adverb placement is 'I do it daily'.

× Basically I it's a habit, so I can't.

✓ Basically, it's a habit, so I can't stop doing it.

The sentence is incomplete and contains an unnecessary pronoun 'I'. It should be restructured for clarity and completeness.

× I think the effect of climate change in recent years is now nowadays.

✓ I think the effect of climate change in recent years is noticeable nowadays.

The phrase 'is now nowadays' is redundant and incorrect. 'Nowadays' alone suffices, and 'noticeable' clarifies the meaning.

× Temperature are increasing day by day so I think it's a danger side side sign.

✓ Temperatures are increasing day by day, so I think it's a dangerous sign.

'Temperature' should be plural 'Temperatures' to match the plural verb 'are'. Also, 'danger side side sign' is incorrect; it should be 'dangerous sign'.

× Yeah, of course, I always love it to do it because I always like to do interesting thing.

✓ Yeah, of course, I always love to do it because I always like to do interesting things.

The phrase 'love it to do it' is incorrect; it should be 'love to do it'. Also, 'interesting thing' should be plural 'interesting things' to be grammatically correct.

× I always like to enjoy another different climates, so I always love.

✓ I always like to enjoy different climates, so I always love it.

'Another different climates' is incorrect; 'different climates' suffices. Also, the sentence is incomplete and should end with 'I always love it'.