Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer has some hesitation and redundancy, and the sentence about 'trains' seems out of context. Try to be more direct and clear, avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm', and keep your answer within 5 sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Example: The weather where I live is quite changeable. For example, it can be sunny in the morning but rainy in the afternoon. During the monsoon, it is usually very windy and wet, while summers tend to be hot. Overall, I find the weather interesting and pleasant most of the time.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but contains hesitation and some grammatical errors like 'a air conditioner'. Try to speak confidently, avoid filler words, and use correct articles. Also, provide a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details with linking words.

Example: I prefer hot weather because it is easier to manage with an air conditioner. In contrast, cold weather requires wearing many layers, which can be uncomfortable. Therefore, summer is my favourite season.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear and relevant but has minor grammatical errors such as 'a dry weather' and 'dryer spells'. Use correct article usage and plural forms. Also, try to use linking words like 'however' to contrast ideas more effectively.

Example: I definitely prefer dry weather. When it rains, you have to carry an umbrella or wear a raincoat, which can be inconvenient. However, during dry spells, you can enjoy sunny days and feel the warmth comfortably.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains hesitation and unclear phrases like 'sources of the feather'. Avoid filler words and redundancy. Also, try to organise your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words.

Example: I usually do not check the weather forecast because I find it unreliable. Instead, I prefer to observe the sky myself. For example, if I see clouds, I expect rain later in the day.

Suggestion: Your answer covers relevant points but is somewhat vague and contains filler words like 'you know'. Try to be more specific and concise, and use linking words to connect ideas clearly.

Example: Climate change has caused erratic weather patterns, increased pollution, and higher greenhouse gas levels. As a result, global temperatures are rising, affecting ecosystems worldwide.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but contains unclear phrases and hesitation, such as 'AQIS or you know' and 'say set cities'. Try to speak clearly, avoid filler words, and organise your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates. For instance, many Indian cities have poor air quality, but cities like Sydney and Melbourne have much cleaner air. Therefore, I am eager to visit those places.

× Sometimes the trains, uh, sometimes it's quite sunny, so you can get multiple weathers even throughout the day as well as all throughout the year.

✓ Sometimes the weather, uh, sometimes it's quite sunny, so you can experience multiple types of weather even throughout the day as well as all throughout the year.

The phrase 'multiple weathers' is incorrect because 'weather' is an uncountable noun and cannot be pluralized as 'weathers'. Instead, use 'multiple types of weather' or 'varied weather conditions' to express the idea of different weather patterns.

× I think I'd prefer the hot weather because that can be tackled with the help of a air conditioner, but when it comes to cold weather, there's really no substitute, uh, to facing that issue unless you're just wearing multiple layers of clothing.

✓ I think I'd prefer the hot weather because that can be tackled with the help of an air conditioner, but when it comes to cold weather, there's really no substitute, uh, for facing that issue unless you're just wearing multiple layers of clothing.

The article 'a' before 'air conditioner' is incorrect because 'air' starts with a vowel sound; it should be 'an air conditioner'. Also, the phrase 'no substitute to facing that issue' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'for' as in 'no substitute for facing that issue'.

× Oh, I feel that a dry weather definitely is much better because when it comes to the wetter weathers, you always need to carry an umbrella or have a raincoat on you whenever you're stepping outside.

✓ Oh, I feel that dry weather definitely is much better because when it comes to wetter weather, you always need to carry an umbrella or have a raincoat on you whenever you're stepping outside.

'Weather' is an uncountable noun and should not be preceded by 'a' or pluralized as 'weathers'. Therefore, 'a dry weather' should be 'dry weather' and 'wetter weathers' should be 'wetter weather'.

× Oh, I definitely don't check the weather forecast anywhere because I find those extremely unreliable.

✓ Oh, I definitely don't check the weather forecast anywhere because I find it extremely unreliable.

The phrase 'those' is incorrect when referring to 'weather forecast' which is singular and uncountable. The correct pronoun is 'it'. Also, 'weather forecast' is singular, so 'those' should be replaced with 'it'.

× Because if I see a little bit of cloud, uh, in the skies, I know that it might rain during the day, but, uh, weather forecast definitely, in my opinion are extremely unreliable sources of the feather.

✓ Because if I see a little bit of cloud, uh, in the skies, I know that it might rain during the day, but, uh, weather forecasts definitely, in my opinion, are extremely unreliable sources of the weather.

The phrase 'weather forecast definitely, in my opinion are' has subject-verb agreement issues; 'weather forecast' should be plural 'weather forecasts' to agree with 'are'. Also, 'sources of the feather' is a mispronunciation or typo; it should be 'sources of the weather' or better phrased as 'sources of information about the weather'.

× I think every single one of us can actually see the facts right now, not just in terms of, you know, the erratic weather conditions, but also in terms of quite other things like the increased levels of pollution, increase in the amount of greenhouse gases, rising levels of global warming and a lot of those other factors.

✓ I think every single one of us can actually see the facts right now, not just in terms of, you know, the erratic weather conditions, but also in terms of other things like the increased levels of pollution, increase in the amount of greenhouse gases, rising levels of global warming and a lot of those other factors.

The phrase 'quite other things' is incorrect; 'quite' is unnecessary and incorrect here. The correct phrase is 'other things'.

× Oh yes, definitely. I mean, I feel that all of the Indian cities right now have AQIS or you know, the air quality index Oyo is exceeding like 203 hundred, even 500 in some cities.

✓ Oh yes, definitely. I mean, I feel that all of the Indian cities right now have AQI or you know, the air quality index is exceeding like 200, even 500 in some cities.

The phrase 'AQIS' is incorrect; the correct abbreviation is 'AQI' for Air Quality Index. Also, '203 hundred' is incorrect; it should be '200'. Numbers should be expressed clearly and correctly.

× But from what I've heard say set cities like Sydney and Melbourne and Australia, they have AQI of almost like 5:00 and 6:00.

✓ But from what I've heard, cities like Sydney and Melbourne in Australia have an AQI of almost 500 and 600.

The phrase 'say set cities' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo; it should be 'cities like'. Also, 'and Australia' should be 'in Australia' to indicate location. The AQI values '5:00 and 6:00' should be '500 and 600' without colons.