Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete. Try to make your sentences more natural and complete, avoid redundancy, and provide specific details. For example, start with a clear topic sentence about the weather, then explain how it affects farming with linking words.

Example: The weather in Vietnam is usually hot and humid throughout the year. This kind of climate benefits farming because the warm temperatures and moisture help crops grow well, especially rice and tropical fruits.

Suggestion: Your answer has some unclear phrases and incomplete sentences. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., 'cold weather' instead of 'cold water'), and provide clear reasons with linking words. Keep your answer concise and coherent.

Example: I prefer cold weather because it makes eating hot food more enjoyable. Also, during cold days, I can do many indoor activities, which makes my holidays more fun and relaxing.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains many fillers. Try to express your opinion clearly with fewer hesitations. Use linking words to explain why you dislike extreme weather and how it affects your activities.

Example: I prefer moderate weather because I don't like it when it's too dry or too wet. For example, heavy rain prevents me from going outside and enjoying outdoor activities, which can be frustrating.

Suggestion: Your answer has many hesitations and grammatical errors. Try to speak more fluently and use correct verb forms. Also, organize your answer logically with linking words to explain when and why you check the forecast.

Example: I don't usually check the weather forecast, but recently I have started to check it on my phone before commuting to school. This helps me decide whether to bring an umbrella if it is going to rain.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat vague and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to clearly state the effects of climate change with specific examples and use linking words to connect ideas.

Example: Climate change is a serious problem worldwide, including in Vietnam. It negatively affects agriculture by causing unpredictable weather, which makes farming difficult. Additionally, it harms people's health due to increased pollution and heatwaves.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations and grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas clearly and use linking words to explain why you prefer cold cities and how it makes you feel.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit cities with colder climates during my holidays. I find cold weather more comfortable and refreshing, which makes my trips more enjoyable.

× Well, because I live in Vietnam, which is one of the hot weather in the world, so the weather here is often humid and hot so that it has many benefits for farming and.

✓ Well, because I live in Vietnam, which is one of the hottest places in the world, the weather here is often humid and hot, which has many benefits for farming.

The phrase 'one of the hot weather' is incorrect because 'weather' is uncountable and cannot be used with 'one of the'. Instead, use 'one of the hottest places' to correctly express the idea. Also, the sentence structure was improved for clarity and correctness.

× Well, actually I prefer cold water because it help me enjoy hot food delicious and it make my holiday so enjoyable and grateful and I think cold water bring me a lot of indoor activities and it's really.

✓ Well, actually I prefer cold weather because it helps me enjoy hot food deliciously and it makes my holiday so enjoyable and grateful. I think cold weather brings me a lot of indoor activities and it's really nice.

The modal verb 'help' and verbs 'make' and 'bring' need to be in third person singular form 'helps', 'makes', and 'brings' to agree with the singular subject 'cold weather'. Also, 'cold water' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'cold weather'. The sentence was also completed for clarity.

× Well, I think it depends on umm, dry or wet because I don't like uh, the too dry or too wet 'cause it's so, uh, annoyed and I feel furious whenever, umm, the weather is too wet and I can go out to participate in any outdoor activities.

✓ Well, I think it depends on whether it's dry or wet because I don't like it when it's too dry or too wet because it's so annoying and I feel furious whenever the weather is too wet and I can't go out to participate in any outdoor activities.

The pronoun 'it' was missing or misused in several places. Also, 'annoyed' should be 'annoying' to describe the weather. The sentence was restructured for clarity and correct pronoun use.

× Not really, but uh, recently I have been uh, often use the use of watch the forecast before I commute commuting to school, uh, I uh, often uh, serve my phone to uh, check the weather and I will bring the umbrella if it raining.

✓ Not really, but recently I have often watched the forecast before I commute to school. I often use my phone to check the weather and I will bring an umbrella if it is raining.

The sentence had incorrect verb forms and tense usage. 'Have been often use' is incorrect; it should be 'have often watched' or 'have often checked'. 'Serve my phone' is incorrect; it should be 'use my phone'. Also, 'if it raining' should be 'if it is raining'. The sentence was corrected for proper present perfect and present simple tense usage and verb forms.

× While climate change is one of the serious problems and it affect negatively not only in Vietnam but also in the world and in Vietnam it made the agriculture so hard to develop and it made people get bad health healthy.

✓ While climate change is one of the serious problems and it affects negatively not only Vietnam but also the world. In Vietnam, it has made agriculture very hard to develop and has caused people's health to worsen.

The verb 'affect' needs to be in third person singular present tense 'affects' to agree with 'it'. Also, 'made the agriculture so hard to develop' should be 'has made agriculture very hard to develop' to use present perfect tense for recent effects. 'Made people get bad health healthy' is incorrect; it should be 'has caused people's health to worsen'. The sentence was restructured for clarity and correct tense usage.

× Yes, if I have day off or I'm in a on holiday I would like choose a cold uh city because umm they like dialect city because the weather that is there is so cold and it help me more comfortable and umm more please.

✓ Yes, if I have a day off or I'm on holiday, I would like to choose a cold city because I like quiet cities. The weather there is so cold and it helps me feel more comfortable and pleased.

The modal verb phrase 'would like choose' is incorrect; it should be 'would like to choose'. 'Have day off' needs an article 'a day off'. 'I'm in a on holiday' should be 'I'm on holiday'. 'They like dialect city' is unclear and likely meant 'I like quiet cities'. 'It help me more comfortable and more please' should be 'it helps me feel more comfortable and pleased'. The sentence was corrected for modal verb usage, article use, and clarity.