Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: คำตอบควรใช้ภาษาอังกฤษที่เป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น และหลีกเลี่ยงคำที่ไม่ถูกต้อง เช่น "haunted" ควรเป็น "hot" หรือ "humid" นอกจากนี้ควรจัดระเบียบคำตอบให้กระชับและชัดเจน เช่น ระบุฤดูกาลและลักษณะอากาศอย่างชัดเจน พร้อมใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหล

Example: I live in the central region of Thailand, which is known for its hot and humid climate. We have three main seasons: hot, rainy, and cool. However, most of the year feels hot and rainy to me.

Suggestion: ควรปรับปรุงโครงสร้างประโยคให้ถูกต้องและชัดเจน เช่น เริ่มด้วยประโยคหลักที่ตอบคำถามโดยตรง และใช้คำเชื่อมที่เหมาะสม นอกจากนี้ควรใช้คำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสมและหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำซ้ำซ้อน

Example: Having lived in Thailand for 17 years, I definitely prefer cold weather because hot weather makes me feel lazy and unmotivated. Cold weather, on the other hand, helps me feel more fresh and active.

Suggestion: ควรปรับปรุงการใช้ไวยากรณ์และคำเชื่อมให้ถูกต้อง เช่น ใช้ "humid weather" แทน "weather humid weather" และใช้คำเชื่อมที่เหมาะสมเพื่อความลื่นไหลของประโยค

Example: If I had to choose, I prefer dry weather because humid weather often causes my allergies. Therefore, dry and cool air is the best combination for me.

Suggestion: ควรปรับปรุงการใช้คำศัพท์และไวยากรณ์ให้ถูกต้อง เช่น ใช้ "checking" แทน "shaking" และหลีกเลี่ยงการพูดซ้ำซ้อน นอกจากนี้ควรตอบคำถามให้ชัดเจนและมีความสมเหตุสมผล

Example: I don't usually check the weather forecast because the weather in Thailand is mostly hot. However, I know that in Arkansas, there is a lot of rain around October.

Suggestion: ควรใช้คำศัพท์ที่ถูกต้องและชัดเจน เช่น "effects" แทน "effect" และปรับปรุงโครงสร้างประโยคให้สมบูรณ์ นอกจากนี้ควรใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อเชื่อมโยงความคิดอย่างมีเหตุผล

Example: In my opinion, I have observed many effects of climate change in recent years. First, there are more extreme weather changes in Thailand, and second, the weather has become more unpredictable.

Suggestion: ควรปรับปรุงการใช้ไวยากรณ์และคำศัพท์ให้ถูกต้อง เช่น "touch snow" แทน "touch of snow" และจัดระเบียบประโยคให้กระชับและชัดเจนมากขึ้น

Example: Yes, of course. I have always dreamed of touching snow at least once in my life. After graduate school, I plan to save as much money as I can to travel to Japan and experience the cold winter there.

× So in one year we have three season.

✓ So in one year we have three seasons.

The noun 'season' should be plural 'seasons' because it refers to more than one season in a year. This is a singular and plural issue (ID 1).

× There are hot rain and winter but mostly I feel like they are hot and rainy every day.

✓ There are hot, rain, and winter seasons but mostly I feel like it is hot and rainy every day.

The phrase 'hot rain' is incorrect; 'rain' is a noun and should be separated by commas. Also, 'they are' should be 'it is' because 'weather' is singular. This involves singular/plural and article usage (IDs 1 and 17).

× As a time and live in Thailand for 17 years, I of course prefer cold because hot hot weather always make me feel lazy and don't want to do anything, therefore could make me feel more fresh and actively.

✓ As I have lived in Thailand for 17 years, I of course prefer cold weather because hot weather always makes me feel lazy and I don't want to do anything; therefore, cold weather makes me feel fresher and more active.

Incorrect verb tense and subject-verb agreement: 'make' should be 'makes' for third person singular (ID 2). Also, 'don't want' needs a subject 'I'. 'Could make' is incorrect modal usage (ID 4). 'More fresh' should be 'fresher' (ID 25). 'Actively' is an adverb but should be an adjective 'active' here (ID 13).

× therefore could make me feel more fresh and actively.

✓ therefore it makes me feel fresher and more active.

Modal verb 'could' is incorrectly used without a subject. The sentence needs a subject and correct verb form. Also, 'more fresh' should be 'fresher' and 'actively' should be 'active' (ID 4 and 13).

× If I had to choose between dry or wet weather, I think I'm going to be on dry weather side because weather humid weather always 'cause my allergies to happen.

✓ If I had to choose between dry or wet weather, I think I would choose the dry weather side because humid weather always causes my allergies to happen.

Incorrect preposition 'on' should be omitted or replaced with 'the'. Also, 'cause' should be 'causes' for subject-verb agreement (ID 11 and 27).

× So dryer with cool air I think it will be best combination for me.

✓ So drier weather with cool air, I think it will be the best combination for me.

'Dryer' should be 'drier' (correct comparative adjective). Also, missing article 'the' before 'best combination' (ID 13 and 22).

× I'm not really in the habit of shaking weather forecast because mostly in Thailand there are only hot.

✓ I'm not really in the habit of checking the weather forecast because mostly in Thailand it is hot.

'Shaking' is incorrect; should be 'checking'. Also, 'there are only hot' is incomplete and incorrect; 'it is hot' is correct (ID 12 and 26).

× But I'm I'm, I'm, I'm knowing that on Arkansas around October there was many rain.

✓ But I know that in Arkansas around October there is a lot of rain.

Incorrect preposition 'on' should be 'in'. 'I'm knowing' is incorrect; simple present 'I know' is correct. 'There was many rain' should be 'there is a lot of rain' (ID 6 and 11).

× In my opinion, I observe there are many effect of climate change in these recent years.

✓ In my opinion, I observe there are many effects of climate change in recent years.

'Effect' should be plural 'effects' because it refers to multiple impacts (ID 1). 'These recent years' is better as 'recent years' (ID 11).

× First, I I can feel that there are more swing or better in Thailand and second there are more unpredictable weather also.

✓ First, I can feel that there are more swings or better weather in Thailand, and second, the weather is more unpredictable as well.

'Swing or better' is unclear; 'swings' is plural noun. 'More unpredictable weather' needs article 'the' and verb 'is' for correct sentence structure (ID 13 and 17).

× Yes, of course I have a dream that I would like to touch of snow at once in my life, so I have a plan that after Graduate School I will try to collect money as much as I can and travel to Japan to experience the coldest and also winter.

✓ Yes, of course I have a dream that I would like to touch snow once in my life, so I have a plan that after graduate school I will try to save as much money as I can and travel to Japan to experience the coldest weather and winter.

'Touch of snow' should be 'touch snow' without 'of'. 'Collect money' is better as 'save money'. 'Graduate School' should be lowercase unless a proper noun. 'The coldest and also winter' is unclear; 'the coldest weather and winter' is better (ID 11 and 13).