Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Та хариултаа илүү тодорхой, байгалийн нөхцөл байдлыг тодорхой тайлбарлах хэрэгтэй. Мөн үгсийн давтагдлыг багасгаж, илүү байгалийн хэллэг ашиглахыг зөвлөж байна.

Example: The weather in Mongolia is very changeable; it can be sunny one moment and rainy the next, which makes it quite unpredictable.

Suggestion: Хариултдаа илүү тодорхой, логик холбоос ашиглан, үгсийн давтагдлыг багасгах хэрэгтэй. Мөн илүү нарийвчилсан шалтгаан, жишээ оруулахыг зөвлөж байна.

Example: I prefer hot weather because it allows me to spend more time outdoors, enjoying activities with my friends and family, such as traveling and picnics.

Suggestion: Хариултдаа илүү тодорхой, алдаагүй хэллэг ашиглах хэрэгтэй. Мөн үгсийн давтагдлыг арилгаж, илүү логик холбоос ашиглахыг зөвлөж байна.

Example: I can't choose between dry and wet weather because dry weather can cause droughts, while wet weather may lead to flooding in cities, so I think both have their disadvantages.

Suggestion: Хариултдаа илүү байгалийн хэллэг, алдаагүй өгүүлбэр ашиглах хэрэгтэй. Мөн цаг хугацааны илэрхийлэл тодорхой байхыг зөвлөж байна.

Example: Yes, I always check the weather forecast every two hours because the weather in Mongolia changes very quickly.

Suggestion: Хариултдаа илүү тодорхой, алдаагүй өгүүлбэр ашиглах хэрэгтэй. Мөн илүү нарийвчилсан тайлбар, жишээ оруулахыг зөвлөж байна.

Example: This summer, I noticed the effects of climate change in my country. When I went to the countryside, there was little grass for animals to eat, and the rivers had shrunk significantly.

Suggestion: Хариултдаа илүү өргөн үгсийн сан ашиглаж, илүү тодорхой, алдаагүй өгүүлбэр бичих хэрэгтэй.

Example: Yes, I enjoy traveling, so I would love to visit cities with different climates to experience new environments.

× The weather in Mongolia changes in every single hour.

✓ The weather in Mongolia changes every single hour.

The phrase 'in every single hour' is incorrect; the correct preposition is omitted here. The correct expression is 'changes every single hour' to indicate frequency without 'in'. This is a present tense usage issue related to preposition use.

× I would prefer hot weather because hot weather gives the time to activities in our time to enjoy with my friends and enjoy with my family and traveling.

✓ I prefer hot weather because it gives me time to enjoy activities with my friends, my family, and to travel.

The original sentence misuses 'would prefer' and has awkward phrasing. 'Would prefer' is conditional; here, simple present 'prefer' is better. Also, 'gives the time to activities in our time to enjoy' is incorrect and unclear. The correction simplifies and clarifies the meaning, improving modal verb usage and sentence structure.

× I can't prefer between of them because a lot of dry weather condition can make drought and the weather weather wet weather makes it drown for long matter city. So 5050.

✓ I can't prefer between them because a lot of dry weather conditions can cause drought, and wet weather can cause flooding in cities. So, it's 50-50.

The phrase 'prefer between of them' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'prefer between them'. Also, 'make drought' should be 'cause drought', and 'makes it drown for long matter city' is unclear and incorrect; it should be 'can cause flooding in cities'. The sentence also uses '5050' informally; '50-50' is the correct expression. These are preposition and word choice errors.

× Yes, absolutely, because the weather is in Mongolia changes in every hour, so I check the weather forecast for like in two hours.

✓ Yes, absolutely, because the weather in Mongolia changes every hour, so I check the weather forecast every two hours.

The phrase 'the weather is in Mongolia changes in every hour' is incorrect; 'is' is unnecessary and 'in every hour' should be 'every hour'. Also, 'for like in two hours' is awkward; 'every two hours' is correct. This is a present tense and preposition usage issue.

× This summer, I felt the climate change in my country. Brunei went to the countryside, there was no grasses to eat. The herds and the rivers were like shrinked.

✓ This summer, I felt the effects of climate change in my country. When I went to the countryside, there was no grass to eat. The herds and the rivers seemed to have shrunk.

'Felt the climate change' is vague; 'felt the effects of climate change' is clearer. 'Brunei went to the countryside' is unclear; assuming the speaker meant 'I went'. 'No grasses' should be 'no grass' (uncountable). 'Were like shrinked' is incorrect; the past participle 'shrunk' is correct, and 'seemed to have shrunk' is a better expression. These are past tense and word choice errors.

× Yeah, I like to travel, so I like to try.

✓ Yeah, I like to travel, so I would like to try visiting other cities with different climates.

The phrase 'I like to try' is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'visiting other cities with different climates' clarifies the meaning. Also, 'would like to try' is more appropriate for expressing willingness or desire. This is a present tense and sentence structure issue.