Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Votre réponse manque de clarté et de structure. Essayez de répondre directement à la question avec une phrase d'introduction claire, puis ajoutez des détails spécifiques en utilisant des mots de liaison pour rendre votre réponse plus fluide et naturelle.

Example: The weather where I live is usually very hot, especially during the summer. However, we also have a rainy season, which makes the temperature cooler and more comfortable. I enjoy this change because it provides relief from the heat.

Suggestion: Votre réponse contient des erreurs grammaticales et manque de clarté. Formulez une phrase d'introduction claire et utilisez des détails spécifiques pour expliquer votre préférence, en évitant les répétitions et en utilisant un vocabulaire approprié.

Example: I always prefer cool weather because it feels refreshing and comfortable for the skin. In contrast, the hot weather in Bengal can be quite uncomfortable and exhausting.

Suggestion: Votre réponse est difficile à comprendre à cause de fautes et de vocabulaire inapproprié. Répondez directement, utilisez des mots de liaison pour organiser vos idées, et choisissez un vocabulaire précis et pertinent.

Example: I prefer dry weather because it is comfortable and makes outdoor activities enjoyable. On the other hand, wet weather can be messy and inconvenient, which limits my ability to go outside.

Suggestion: Votre réponse est incomplète et manque de structure. Essayez de répondre clairement à la question en expliquant vos habitudes avec des phrases complètes et un vocabulaire approprié.

Example: I don't usually check the weather forecast. Instead, I look at the sky before going outside to decide what to do. However, sometimes I check the temperature to plan my activities better.

Suggestion: Votre réponse est très courte et ne répond pas à la question. Donnez une opinion claire et développez-la avec des exemples ou des conséquences spécifiques du changement climatique.

Example: In my opinion, climate change has caused more extreme weather events recently, such as floods and heatwaves, which affect people's lives and the environment.

Suggestion: Votre réponse est correcte mais pourrait être améliorée en évitant les répétitions et en ajoutant des détails spécifiques pour expliquer votre choix.

Example: Yes, I would love to visit cities with different climates. For example, I want to go to Cox's Bazar because its weather is cooler and more comfortable compared to where I live.

× Well, I lived a place where the weather is very usually very hot, especially doing the summer season.

✓ Well, I live in a place where the weather is usually very hot, especially during the summer season.

The sentence incorrectly uses the past tense 'lived' instead of the present tense 'live' to describe a current situation. Also, 'doing' should be 'during' to correctly indicate the time period. Use present tense for current facts and correct preposition for time.

× Well, I lived a place where the weather is very usually very hot, especially doing the summer season.

✓ Well, I live in a place where the weather is usually very hot, especially during the summer season.

The adverb 'very' is incorrectly placed before 'usually'. The correct order is 'usually very hot' to properly modify the adjective 'hot'.

× Well, I lived a place where the weather is very usually very hot, especially doing the summer season.

✓ Well, I live in a place where the weather is usually very hot, especially during the summer season.

The preposition 'in' is required after 'live' to indicate location. Also, 'doing' is incorrect; 'during' is the correct preposition to indicate a time period.

× Sometimes we also raining season.

✓ Sometimes we also have a rainy season.

The sentence lacks a verb; 'raining' is a present participle and cannot stand alone as a verb here. The correct form is 'have a rainy season' to express occurrence.

× Sometimes we also raining season.

✓ Sometimes we also have a rainy season.

The word 'raining' is a verb form used incorrectly as an adjective. The correct adjective is 'rainy' to describe the season.

× I enjoy a lot because it's cold and down a bit.

✓ I enjoy it a lot because it gets a bit cooler.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. 'It's cold and down a bit' is incorrect; 'it gets a bit cooler' properly conveys the intended meaning.

× That's why I love it.

✓ That's why I love it.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× I am always prefer cool weather because it feels uncomfortable and refresh our skin.

✓ I always prefer cool weather because it feels comfortable and refreshes our skin.

The modal verb 'am' is incorrectly used with 'prefer'. 'Always prefer' is correct without 'am'. Also, 'uncomfortable' contradicts the intended meaning; 'comfortable' is correct. The verb 'refresh' needs 'es' to agree with singular subject 'it'.

× But we are Bengalis so our season is very bad bad, hot.

✓ But we are Bengalis, so our season is very bad, very hot.

The sentence needs commas for clarity. The repetition 'bad bad' is likely a mistake; if emphasis is intended, 'very bad' suffices. 'Our season' is correct pronoun usage.

× We weather feels unconfirmed, comfortable.

✓ Our weather feels uncomfortable.

The word 'unconfirmed' is incorrect; the intended word is 'uncomfortable'. Also, 'comfortable' contradicts 'uncomfortable' and should be removed for clarity.

× I always prefer dry weather because it feels comfortable and relaxing and I fight find essential to go outdoor.

✓ I always prefer dry weather because it feels comfortable and relaxing, and I find it essential to go outdoors.

The phrase 'I fight find' is incorrect; it should be 'I find it'. Also, 'go outdoor' should be 'go outdoors' to use the correct adverbial form.

× On the other hand, I don't like weight weather because soiled very madly which makes outdoor activities difficult.

✓ On the other hand, I don't like wet weather because it gets very muddy, which makes outdoor activities difficult.

'Weight weather' is incorrect; it should be 'wet weather'. 'Soiled very madly' is incorrect; 'gets very muddy' is the correct expression. 'Madly' is an adverb and does not fit here.

× When and how often I am not inhabited for checking the weather forest because I when I go outdoor I see sky and I am I feel what to do but sometimes for temperature to decide what to do for example if it's.

✓ I am not in the habit of checking the weather forecast regularly because when I go outdoors, I look at the sky and decide what to do. Sometimes, I check the temperature to decide what to do, for example, if it's...

The sentence has multiple errors: 'inhabited' should be 'in the habit'; 'weather forest' should be 'weather forecast'; 'go outdoor' should be 'go outdoors'; sentence structure is fragmented and unclear. The correction improves clarity and grammar.

× Yes, I in my opinion, I personally believe climate change affected in recent recent, yeah.

✓ Yes, in my opinion, I personally believe climate change has affected us in recent years.

The sentence lacks auxiliary verbs and proper tense. 'Affected' should be in present perfect 'has affected' to indicate recent impact. 'Recent recent' is redundant and corrected to 'recent years'.

× Yes, I would love to visit other cities with different climate from there I live.

✓ Yes, I would love to visit other cities with different climates from where I live.

'Different climate' should be plural 'different climates' to match 'cities'. 'There I live' is incorrect; 'where I live' is the correct relative clause.

× For example, I want to go Cox Bazaar because their weather is very comfortable and I which is a which is quite different.

✓ For example, I want to go to Cox's Bazar because their weather is very comfortable, which is quite different.

'I which is a which is' is incorrect and redundant. The correct relative pronoun 'which' refers to 'weather'. Also, 'go Cox Bazaar' should be 'go to Cox's Bazar' with correct preposition and spelling.