Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答时应避免语法错误和用词不当，如“humid bad”应改为“humid”。建议用更自然的表达方式描述天气特点，并适当使用连接词使句子更流畅。

Example: I live near the sea, so the weather here depends a lot on the wind. In summer, it is hot and quite humid, while in winter, it tends to be cold and dry.

Suggestion: 回答中应注意语法和表达的自然性，如“show myself like skirt and dress”不够准确。建议使用更地道的表达，并增加连接词使句子更连贯。

Example: Actually, I prefer hot weather because when it's warm, I can wear more beautiful clothes like skirts and dresses, which makes me feel confident.

Suggestion: 回答结构清晰，但用词如“my skin is oil”应改为“my skin is oily”。建议使用更准确的词汇，并适当使用连接词增强逻辑性。

Example: I prefer dry weather for two reasons. Firstly, I have oily skin, so wet weather makes me feel uncomfortable. Secondly, wet weather tends to produce more insects, which I dislike.

Suggestion: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，如“check it, check it”和“have a travel”。建议简化表达，避免重复，并使用正确的短语。

Example: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning before choosing my clothes. Also, when I plan to travel, I look at the forecast for the next few days to make good plans.

Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误和重复，如“I have I have”和“hot hottest”。建议使用正确的时态和词汇，避免重复，并丰富内容。

Example: As the climate has become warmer in recent years, I have experienced the hottest weather of my life. Because of this, I often have to stay indoors with the air conditioning on.

Suggestion: 回答中时态使用不当，如“this summer I come to Guizhou”应为“came”。建议注意时态一致，并使用连接词使表达更自然。

Example: Yes, I really enjoy visiting places with different climates. For example, this summer I went to Guizhou in southeast China, where the weather was very comfortable with an average temperature of about 25 degrees Celsius.

× In the summer it's hot but humid bad, and in the winter it's cold and dry.

✓ In the summer it's hot but badly humid, and in the winter it's cold and dry.

这里“humid bad”用法错误，形容词“humid”后面不能直接跟副词“bad”，应使用副词形式“badly”修饰“humid”。建议将“humid bad”改为“badly humid”。

× Actually, I like hot weather better because when the temperature is high I have a chance to wear more beautiful clothes and show myself like skirt and dress.

✓ Actually, I like hot weather better because when the temperature is high I have a chance to wear more beautiful clothes and show myself, like skirts and dresses.

“show myself like skirt and dress”表达不清晰，且“skirt”和“dress”应为复数形式，表示多种衣服。应加逗号分隔，并将“skirt and dress”改为“skirts and dresses”。

× The first one is that my skin is oil, so the wet weather will make me more uncomfortable.

✓ The first one is that my skin is oily, so the wet weather will make me more uncomfortable.

“skin is oil”中“oil”是名词，形容皮肤应使用形容词“oily”。

× The second reason is that I think the wet weather may produce more insects that I don't like.

✓ The second reason is that I think the wet weather may produce more insects which I don't like.

关系代词“that”在此处用法不够正式，建议用“which”引导非限制性定语从句，更符合书面表达。

× Every morning when I choose the clothes to wear, I will check it, check it and when I have a travel, I will research the broadcast for the next few days to have a good plan for my travel.

✓ Every morning when I choose the clothes to wear, I will check it, and when I have travel, I will check the forecast for the next few days to make a good plan for my trip.

“have a travel”用法错误，travel是不可数名词，不用冠词“a”；“research the broadcast”表达不自然，应改为“check the forecast”；“have a good plan for my travel”表达不地道，改为“make a good plan for my trip”。

× With the climate become warmer and warmer, I have I have no choice but to face the hot hottest weather in my life.

✓ With the climate becoming warmer and warmer, I have no choice but to face the hottest weather in my life.

“climate become”应使用现在分词“becoming”表示持续变化；“I have I have”重复，应删去一个；“hot hottest”重复，应只用最高级“hottest”。

× I have to stay in the room with the air conditioning opening.

✓ I have to stay in the room with the air conditioning on.

“air conditioning opening”表达错误，正确表达应为“air conditioning on”，表示空调开着。

× This summer I come to Guizhou, which is in southeast of China.

✓ This summer I came to Guizhou, which is in the southeast of China.

“This summer”表示过去发生的动作，动词应使用过去式“came”；“in southeast of China”缺少定冠词“the”，应为“in the southeast of China”。