Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱，建议加强语法基础，避免重复和错误表达。可以用更自然的表达方式描述天气特点。

Example: I live near the seaside, so the weather here varies with the wind. In summer, it is hot and humid, while in winter, it becomes cold and dry.

Suggestion: 回答较为简单，缺少连接词和细节描述。建议增加原因和具体细节，使回答更丰富连贯。

Example: I prefer hot weather because I can wear more beautiful clothes like dresses and skirts. Also, I enjoy outdoor activities more when it's warm.

Suggestion: 表达不够流畅，语法错误较多，逻辑连接不清晰。建议理清思路，使用连接词，避免重复和错误表达。

Example: I prefer dry weather because I have oily skin, and wet weather makes me feel uncomfortable. Also, wet weather increases the number of insects, which I dislike.

Suggestion: 回答不完整且语法错误严重，表达不清楚。建议学习正确的时态和句型，清晰表达习惯和频率。

Example: Yes, I check the weather forecast every morning to decide what to wear for the day.

Suggestion: 表达混乱，语法和词汇错误较多，建议加强句子结构和词汇使用，表达观点时更清晰具体。

Example: Climate change has caused temperatures to rise. This summer was much hotter than before, so I had to stay indoors with air conditioning to stay cool.

Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误和表达不准确，建议使用正确的时态和句型，描述更具体。

Example: Yes, I visited a city in southeast China this summer where the weather was very comfortable. The temperature was around 25 degrees Celsius, which was perfect for me.

× In the summer it's hot and moist city but in winter it's cold and dry.

✓ In the summer it's hot and moist, but in winter it's cold and dry.

这里的'moist city'不符合语境，应该去掉'city'，因为描述的是天气的状态，而不是城市。

× Actually, I prefer hot weather because in hot days I can wear some more beautiful clothes like dress and skirt.

✓ Actually, I prefer hot weather because on hot days I can wear more beautiful clothes like dresses and skirts.

'dress'和'skirt'应使用复数形式，因为这里指的是多种衣服。'in hot days'应改为'on hot days'，但此处主要纠正复数问题。

× Actually, I prefer hot weather because in hot days I can wear some more beautiful clothes like dress and skirt.

✓ Actually, I prefer hot weather because on hot days I can wear more beautiful clothes like dresses and skirts.

介词'in'用于月份、年份等较长时间段，'on'用于具体的日子或特定的日子，这里应使用'on hot days'。

× Reason why I my skin is very oil so if the weather is wet that will be more uncomfortable.

✓ The reason is that my skin is very oily, so if the weather is wet, it will be more uncomfortable.

'oil'应为形容词'oily'，表示皮肤油腻。句子缺少冠词和连词，需调整。

× Second is I don't like insects and weight weather will prove insects.

✓ Secondly, I don't like insects and wet weather will promote insects.

'weight weather'应为'wet weather'，且'prove'用错，应为'promote'表示促进。

× Yes I have. I checked every morning to chapter when I was choosing what to wear.

✓ Yes, I do. I check every morning to check the weather when I am choosing what to wear.

这里描述的是习惯动作，应使用一般现在时。'chapter'应为'check the weather'。

× I checked every morning to chapter when I was choosing what to wear.

✓ I check every morning to check the weather when I am choosing what to wear.

'to chapter'是错误表达，应为'to check the weather'。

× Stairs with climate have become warming warmer and warmer that in this summer I have suffered a lot of hot days which is match hotter than before.

✓ The climate has become warmer and warmer, so this summer I have suffered a lot of hot days which are much hotter than before.

'Stairs with climate'无意义，应为'The climate'。'warming warmer'重复，应简化。'match'应为'much'。

× I have to stay in the room in under the air condition.

✓ I have to stay in the room under the air conditioner.

'in under'重复，应去掉'in'。'air condition'应为'air conditioner'。

× Yeah. This summer I come to in southeast of China where the weather is very comfortable.

✓ Yeah. This summer I came to the southeast of China where the weather is very comfortable.

描述过去发生的动作，应使用过去式'came'。

× This summer I come to in southeast of China where the weather is very comfortable.

✓ This summer I came to the southeast of China where the weather is very comfortable.

地理位置前应加定冠词'the'。

× It's orange temperature in summer is about 25°.

✓ Its average temperature in summer is about 25°.

'orange temperature'无意义，应为'average temperature'。