Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答时应避免重复和语法错误，句子结构应更自然流畅。可以简洁地描述天气特点，并用连接词使表达更连贯。

Example: I live in Hong Kong, and currently it's summer. The weather is very hot and humid, which can be quite uncomfortable for people.

Suggestion: 回答应更自然，避免语法错误和重复。可以用连接词连接观点和原因，使表达更流畅。

Example: I definitely prefer cold weather because hot weather makes me sweat a lot, which feels sticky and uncomfortable.

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题。应简洁明了地表达观点，并用具体例子支持。

Example: I prefer dry weather because wet weather makes me feel uncomfortable and sticky. For example, I can go outside more easily when it's dry.

Suggestion: 回答较完整，但句子衔接可更自然，避免重复使用“because”。可以用连接词使表达更流畅。

Example: Yes, I always check the weather forecast before going out because it's essential. For example, if it's raining, I need to bring an umbrella, and if it's hot, I dress lightly.

Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。应使用正确的词汇和句式，具体说明气候变化的影响。

Example: In recent years, climate change has caused global warming. As a result, temperatures are rising, and ice in the North and South Poles is melting.

Suggestion: 回答不完整且表达不清晰。应完整表达观点，避免语法错误，并用具体例子支持。

Example: Yes, I enjoy visiting countries with different climates. For example, even if two countries have summer, the weather can feel very different.

× I live in Hong Kong and the weather of the Hong Kong is summer now, and the summer of Hong Kong is not very nice for human because it is really really hot, the temperature is quite high and the weather is quite humid.

✓ I live in Hong Kong and the weather in Hong Kong is summer now, and the summer in Hong Kong is not very nice for humans because it is really really hot, the temperature is quite high and the weather is quite humid.

这里“the Hong Kong”中的定冠词“the”使用错误，香港作为专有名词不需要定冠词；“the weather of the Hong Kong”应改为“the weather in Hong Kong”，表示地点的天气；“for human”应为复数形式“for humans”，表示一般人。

× Absolutely cold. I love cold weather rather than hot weather because when the weather is very hot and I will easily to sweat so my skin will be very sticky and I don't like that feel so I prefer cold weather.

✓ Absolutely cold. I love cold weather rather than hot weather because when the weather is very hot, I will easily sweat so my skin will be very sticky and I don't like that feeling, so I prefer cold weather.

“will easily to sweat”中“to”是不必要的，应直接用动词原形“sweat”；“that feel”应为名词形式“that feeling”，表示感觉。

× Absolutely. I prefer dry weather rather than wet weather because wet weather will I will easy to feel uncomfortable and sticky. For example, when the weather is dry I can go outside.

✓ Absolutely. I prefer dry weather rather than wet weather because wet weather will make me feel uncomfortable and sticky easily. For example, when the weather is dry I can go outside.

“wet weather will I will easy to feel uncomfortable”结构混乱，应改为“wet weather will make me feel uncomfortable and sticky easily”，正确使用情态动词和动词结构。

× In recent years the climatic did really change very much, for example, the global warming. So the temperature is rising every day and the ice in North Pond and South Pond is melted.

✓ In recent years the climate has really changed a lot, for example, global warming. So the temperature is rising every day and the ice in the North Pole and South Pole is melting.

“the climatic did really change very much”中“did”用于强调过去时，但“climatic”应为名词“climate”，且“did really change very much”表达不自然，改为“has really changed a lot”；“the ice ... is melted”应为现在进行时“is melting”；“North Pond”和“South Pond”应为“North Pole”和“South Pole”。

× Yeah, I love visiting other country that have different climates, for instance, even the same weather between two country, let's say summer. But the feeling can be different, like in summer Hong Kong is very.

✓ Yeah, I love visiting other countries that have different climates, for instance, even if the weather is the same between two countries, let's say summer. But the feeling can be different, like in summer Hong Kong is very hot.

“other country”应为复数“other countries”；“that have”主语复数对应；“between two country”应为“between two countries”；句子不完整，补充“hot”使句子完整。