Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 答えは基本的な情報を提供していますが、文法の誤りと不自然な表現があります。例えば、「low temperature」は「it is very cold with low temperatures」と言い換えると自然です。また、文をつなげるために接続詞を使うと良いでしょう。

Example: In the summer, the weather is not very hot, but in winter, it becomes very cold with low temperatures.

Suggestion: 答えは明確ですが、内容が少し散漫で、接続詞を使って論理的に繋げると良いです。また、「for me comfortable」は不自然なので、「which was comfortable for me」と言い換えましょう。

Example: I prefer cold weather because this summer was not too hot, which was comfortable for me. However, I don't like rain since it rains a lot here.

Suggestion: 文法の誤りが目立ちます。例えば、「it dry out」は「they dry out」に修正し、「I didn't like it」は過去形でなく現在の感想なら「I don't like it」が適切です。文をつなげる接続詞も使いましょう。

Example: I prefer dry weather because clothes dry out very quickly. However, in my hometown, summers are very wet, and I don't like that.

Suggestion: 文法と語彙の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。「checking whether」は不自然で、「checking the weather forecast」が正しいです。また、「rainbow」は「rain boots」や「umbrella」の誤りと思われます。文を簡潔にし、正しい語彙を使いましょう。

Example: I check the weather forecast every morning before I leave home because I decide what to wear, like a rain jacket or rain boots.

Suggestion: 文法と表現が不完全で、意味が不明瞭です。「a lot of negative effect」は「many negative effects」に修正し、例文も完全な文にしましょう。接続詞を使って論理的に繋げることが重要です。

Example: There are many negative effects of climate change. For example, some parts of the world experience extremely high temperatures during the summer.

Suggestion: 文法と語彙の誤りがあります。「other climate place」は「places with different climates」に修正し、「that is cultural difference」は「because of cultural differences」に直しましょう。文をつなげる接続詞も使うと良いです。

Example: Yes, I would like to visit places with different climates because of cultural differences, and I sometimes enjoy experiencing different weather. For example, I would like to visit Southeast Asia.

× In the summer it is not so hot here and in winter it's very cold and low temperature.

✓ In the summer it is not so hot here and in winter it's very cold with low temperatures.

The phrase 'low temperature' is incorrect here because 'temperature' is a countable noun and should be pluralized as 'temperatures' when referring to general cold conditions. Also, 'and low temperature' is not a proper way to connect the ideas; 'with low temperatures' is more appropriate.

× For example, this summer is not too hot here and that was for me comfortable.

✓ For example, this summer is not too hot here and that was comfortable for me.

The phrase 'that was for me comfortable' has incorrect word order. The adjective 'comfortable' should come after 'was' and the phrase 'for me' should follow it to maintain natural English syntax.

× But I don't like rain. It rains a lot.

✓ But I don't like rain. It rains a lot.

No correction needed here as the pronouns are used correctly.

× I prefer dry weather because when I wash clothes it dry out very quickly.

✓ I prefer dry weather because when I wash clothes they dry out very quickly.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect when referring to 'clothes' which is plural; 'they' should be used. This is a pronoun error but also relates to subject-verb agreement.

× In my in my hometown in summer it is very wet.

✓ In my hometown in summer it is very wet.

The phrase 'In my in my hometown' contains a repeated prepositional phrase. Removing the duplicate corrects the sentence.

× I didn't like it.

✓ I didn't like it.

No correction needed; the past tense is used correctly here.

× I am checking whether every day is especially in the morning before I go out my home because I decide depends on whether what I wears for example rain jacket or rainbow.

✓ I check the weather every day, especially in the morning before I leave my home, because I decide what to wear depending on the weather, for example, a rain jacket or a raincoat.

Multiple errors: 'I am checking' should be simple present 'I check' for habitual action; 'whether' is incorrect, should be 'weather'; 'go out my home' should be 'leave my home'; 'I decide depends on whether what I wears' is incorrect structure, should be 'I decide what to wear depending on the weather'; 'rainbow' is incorrect, should be 'raincoat'.

× There is a lot of negative effect because of climate changes.

✓ There are a lot of negative effects because of climate change.

'Effect' should be plural 'effects' because of 'a lot of'; 'climate changes' should be singular 'climate change' as it refers to the general phenomenon.

× For example, in the summer in some part of the world has extremely high temperature that's.

✓ For example, in the summer, some parts of the world have extremely high temperatures.

'Some part' should be plural 'some parts'; 'has' should be 'have' to agree with plural subject; 'temperature' should be plural 'temperatures'; 'that's' is unnecessary and incorrect here.

× Yes, I would like to visit other climate place because that is cultural difference and sometimes I enjoy the different climates.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit other climate places because there are cultural differences and sometimes I enjoy different climates.

'Climate place' should be plural 'climate places'; 'that is cultural difference' should be 'there are cultural differences' to be grammatically correct and natural.