Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Try to give a direct and complete sentence describing the weather, and avoid repetition. Use linking words if needed.

Example: The weather where I live is usually cold during winter, which I find very beautiful and refreshing.

Suggestion: Your answer is too long and has grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences clear and concise, and use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Example: I prefer cold weather because it feels refreshing. Also, I enjoy wearing warm clothes and drinking hot tea or coffee during winter, which makes the season peaceful and beautiful.

Suggestion: Your answer is incomplete and lacks detail. Provide a full sentence and explain your preference with reasons or examples.

Example: I prefer dry weather because it is more comfortable and suitable for outdoor activities.

Suggestion: Your answer has many hesitations and repetitions. Try to speak smoothly and organize your ideas clearly using linking words.

Example: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast daily because I enjoy walking and playing sports. Dry weather is better for these activities and makes planning easier.

Suggestion: Your answer is vague and grammatically incorrect. Provide specific examples and explain clearly how climate change affects the environment.

Example: Climate change has caused significant effects recently. For example, many plants and animals are affected because their natural habitats are changing.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and repetitive. Give a clear response with examples and explain why you want to visit those cities.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates, such as Nasia, Galena, and Kanwari, which are very cold. It would be interesting to experience different temperatures and weather conditions.

× The weather like the winter, winter is so beautiful weather and cold.

✓ The weather is like winter; winter has beautiful and cold weather.

The original sentence lacks a verb in the first clause and has awkward phrasing. Adding 'is' after 'weather' corrects the sentence structure, and rephrasing improves clarity.

× I really enjoy the weather in winter because it is cold and refreshing the and the chilly air makes its prefer from the very warm clothes and drinking hot teas, coffee and hot milk.

✓ I really enjoy the weather in winter because it is cold and refreshing, and the chilly air makes me prefer wearing very warm clothes and drinking hot tea, coffee, and hot milk.

The original sentence has incorrect conjunction use and unclear phrasing. Adding 'and' properly connects clauses, and correcting 'makes its prefer' to 'makes me prefer' clarifies meaning.

× Winter weather very beautiful and peaceful where I live.

✓ The winter weather is very beautiful and peaceful where I live.

The sentence is missing the verb 'is' to link the subject and predicate, which is necessary for correct sentence structure.

× Yes, I like to dry weather and.

✓ Yes, I like dry weather.

The phrase 'like to dry weather' is incorrect; 'like dry weather' is the correct form. The extra 'and' is unnecessary and should be removed.

× And yes, my habit, uh yes, my habit of the checking the weather forecast. Uh uh, I I enjoying going the walk and and playing sports when the weather is dry and more activity.

✓ Yes, I have a habit of checking the weather forecast. I enjoy going for walks and playing sports when the weather is dry and there is more activity.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains filler words. Correcting sentence structure and verb forms improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I prefer dry weather because it is a comfortable and easier to plan outdoor activities.

✓ I prefer dry weather because it is comfortable and makes it easier to plan outdoor activities.

The article 'a' before 'comfortable' is incorrect because 'comfortable' is an adjective describing weather. Also, the sentence needs a subject for 'easier to plan,' so adding 'makes it' corrects the structure.

× We're a big change in the effect of the climate change in the recent year.

✓ There has been a big change in the effects of climate change in recent years.

The original sentence has incorrect structure and verb usage. Using 'There has been' correctly introduces the change, and pluralizing 'effects' and 'years' fits the context.

× For example, trees, plants, animals, more effective, especially in plants.

✓ For example, trees, plants, and animals are more affected, especially plants.

The phrase 'more effective' is incorrect; 'more affected' fits the context. Also, adding 'are' is necessary for sentence completeness.

× Yes, you you like to visit other cities, for example Nasia, Galena and Kanwari Mosam is very cold.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit other cities. For example, Nasia, Galena, and Kanwari have very cold climates.

The original sentence has pronoun confusion and lacks proper verb forms. Correcting pronouns and verb agreement improves clarity.

× The different different cities at different temperature, so that.

✓ Different cities have different temperatures.

The original sentence is incomplete and repetitive. Simplifying and completing the sentence corrects the structure.