Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct plural forms and articles, and avoid redundancy. Also, keep your answer concise and natural.

Example: The weather changes with each season. For instance, summers are very hot, while winters are quite cold, so I use air conditioners and heaters to maintain a comfortable temperature at home.

Suggestion: Your answer expresses your preference clearly but could be more concise and natural. Avoid repeating words like 'really really' and use singular forms for uncountable nouns like 'hot weather'.

Example: I prefer hot weather because I feel uncomfortable in very cold winters. In hot weather, I can simply use the air conditioner to stay comfortable.

Suggestion: There seems to be confusion with the word 'white' instead of 'wet'. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary and correct grammar. Make sure to directly answer the question and explain your reasons clearly.

Example: I prefer wet weather because dry weather often makes my throat sore, especially in the morning. Wet weather feels much more comfortable for me.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but contains some grammatical errors and awkward expressions like 'keep track on' and 'feed the weather'. Use correct prepositions and clearer expressions to improve naturalness.

Example: I usually check the weather forecast almost every day because I want to stay updated and dress appropriately for the weather.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical mistakes and could be more specific. Use correct word order and provide clearer examples with linking words.

Example: Climate change has caused several effects in recent years. For example, in my hometown, winters have fewer snowy days, which shows that temperatures are rising.

Suggestion: Your answer is positive but could be expanded with more details and linking words to sound more natural and complete.

Example: Absolutely. I enjoy trying new experiences and learning about different places, their environments, and climates.

× It's distinct in every seasons.

✓ It's distinct in every season.

The word 'seasons' is plural, but the phrase 'every seasons' is incorrect because 'every' is used with singular nouns. The correct form is 'every season' to indicate each individual season.

× I have to use air conditioners and heaters to keep a proper temperature in house.

✓ I have to use air conditioners and heaters to keep a proper temperature in the house.

The phrase 'in house' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'house'. This is an article error but also relates to singular noun usage. The correct phrase is 'in the house'.

× Of course I prefer hot weather because I always feel really really uncomfortable in winters if the weather is very cold, but in hot weathers I can open my air conditioner to maintain a comfortable environment.

✓ Of course I prefer hot weather because I always feel really really uncomfortable in winter if the weather is very cold, but in hot weather I can open my air conditioner to maintain a comfortable environment.

The words 'winters' and 'weathers' are incorrectly pluralized. When referring to seasons or weather in general, the singular form 'winter' and 'weather' should be used.

× I prefer white weather because in dry weather my throat is going to be very painful, especially after I wake up in the morning, and white weather is much more comfortable for me.

✓ I prefer white weather because in dry weather my throat is going to be very painful, especially after I wake up in the morning, and white weather is much more comfortable for me.

The sentence contains the word 'white weather' which seems to be a typo or incorrect word choice. Possibly the intended word is 'wet weather'. However, since this is not a grammar problem type listed, no correction is made here.

× I often check weather forecast.

✓ I often check the weather forecast.

The phrase 'check weather forecast' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'weather forecast'. Also, 'weather forecast' is a countable noun phrase that requires an article in this context.

× I do it almost every day because I want to keep track on the weather so I can change my clothes every time to feed the weather.

✓ I do it almost every day because I want to keep track of the weather so I can change my clothes every time to fit the weather.

The phrase 'keep track on the weather' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'of'. Also, 'feed the weather' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'fit' to mean adjusting clothes according to the weather.

× Climate change has many effects recent in recent years.

✓ Climate change has had many effects in recent years.

The phrase 'has many effects recent in recent years' is ungrammatical and redundant. The correct structure is 'has had many effects in recent years' to indicate ongoing impact.

× In my hometown, for example, in the winter, there are less snowy days, so I can see the temperature rising.

✓ In my hometown, for example, in the winter, there are fewer snowy days, so I can see the temperature rising.

The word 'less' is used with uncountable nouns, but 'snowy days' is countable plural. The correct quantifier is 'fewer' for countable nouns.

× Absolutely. I always want to try different things and know more about other places, environment and weather.

✓ Absolutely. I always want to try different things and know more about other places, environments, and weather.

The word 'environment' should be pluralized to 'environments' when referring to multiple places, as each place has its own environment.