Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more concise and avoid filler words like 'umm' and 'uh'. Also, use correct grammar such as 'there is' instead of 'there are' when referring to rain. Organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words for coherence.

Example: The weather in my city is mostly sunny, but occasionally we experience heavy rain and cloudy days, especially during the fall season.

Suggestion: Avoid redundancy and incomplete thoughts. Provide a clear reason for your preference and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, try to end your sentences clearly without trailing off.

Example: I prefer cold weather because hot weather makes me feel tired, so I often need cold drinks like ice cream to feel better.

Suggestion: Be careful with word choice and grammar, for example, 'driver' should be 'dry'. Avoid repeating ideas and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect your reasons clearly and provide a complete thought.

Example: I prefer dry weather because it allows me to enjoy outdoor activities like hiking and social gatherings, although sometimes it can feel a bit boring.

Suggestion: Reduce filler words and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to explain when and why you check the forecast. Make sure your sentences are complete and grammatically correct.

Example: Yes, I check the weather forecast every day as part of my routine, especially when the weather seems changeable, so I can decide what to wear.

Suggestion: Focus on clear and grammatically correct sentences. Avoid filler words and incomplete thoughts. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and provide specific examples or consequences of climate change.

Example: I believe climate change has seriously affected our environment and animal life. Many animals have to find new habitats or face extinction because of rising global temperatures.

Suggestion: Improve sentence clarity and grammar. Avoid vague phrases like 'change their circumstances'. Use linking words to explain your reasons clearly and provide specific details about why you want to visit cities with different climates.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit other cities with different climates because I am not very fond of my city's weather, and I think living in a place with better weather would be more enjoyable for me.

× you can see some rain which are really huge

✓ you can see some rain which is really heavy

The word 'rain' is uncountable and singular, so it should be paired with 'is' instead of 'are'. Also, 'huge' is not typically used to describe rain; 'heavy' is more appropriate.

× especially falling in fall or days around the fall or something like this

✓ especially during fall or days around fall or something like that

The preposition 'in' is less appropriate here; 'during' is used to indicate a period of time. Also, 'something like this' should be 'something like that' to refer to a similar idea.

× I prefer driver there

✓ I prefer drier weather there

The word 'driver' is incorrect; the intended adjective is 'drier' to describe weather with less moisture.

× I really enjoy to check different cities with better weather conditions and change their circumstances

✓ I really enjoy checking different cities with better weather conditions and changing their circumstances

The verb 'enjoy' should be followed by a gerund ('checking') rather than an infinitive ('to check'). Also, parallel structure requires 'changing' to match 'checking'.

× one of the huge problem that it would make it, uh, about our environment

✓ one of the huge problems that it would cause to our environment

The phrase 'one of the huge problem' should be 'one of the huge problems' because 'one of' is followed by a plural noun. Also, 'make it about' is incorrect; 'cause to' or 'affect' is more appropriate.

× it would going to be the temperature of the, the globally temperature really high

✓ the global temperature is going to be really high

The phrase 'would going to be' is incorrect; 'is going to be' is the correct future tense. Also, 'the temperature of the globally temperature' is redundant and incorrect; 'global temperature' is sufficient.