Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn khá đầy đủ nhưng cần tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên dùng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ.

Example: I live in Harano, the capital city of Vietnam. It experiences four distinct seasons, with hot summers and cold winters.

Suggestion: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ 'make me feel quiet' không đúng nghĩa. Hãy dùng từ chính xác và câu ngắn gọn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Example: I prefer cold weather because hot summers make me feel tired and uncomfortable. Cooler temperatures allow me to enjoy outdoor activities more.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi phát âm và từ sai, khiến ý không rõ ràng. Bạn cần luyện phát âm và chọn từ phù hợp, đồng thời xây dựng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh nói lắp và dùng từ không đúng.

Example: I prefer dry weather because rain often makes it hard to go outside. For example, heavy rain can delay flights and make me feel cold and annoyed.

Suggestion: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy dùng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng phù hợp để diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách tự nhiên.

Example: I usually check the weather forecast every evening before going to bed. This helps me prepare, like bringing an umbrella or wearing appropriate clothes if it will rain.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp số nhiều và dùng từ chính xác hơn. Bạn nên dùng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tự nhiên hơn.

Example: I think climate change has worsened recently, causing many negative effects on people and the environment. Therefore, both governments and individuals should take action to reduce its impact.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời khá tốt nhưng bạn nên chú ý dùng từ đúng và câu ngắn gọn hơn. Sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tự nhiên hơn.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because experiencing new weather is interesting. For example, since I live in a hot and humid city, visiting a cooler place would be refreshing and help me learn about different cultures.

× and it has the four main seasons in a normal year.

✓ and there are four main seasons in a normal year.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'it has' to describe the existence of seasons. The correct structure to indicate existence is 'there are' for plural nouns like 'seasons'. This is a 'There be issue'.

× during the summer the weather is very hot which make me feel quiet, exhausted.

✓ during the summer the weather is very hot which makes me feel quite exhausted.

The verb 'make' does not agree with the singular subject 'weather'. It should be 'makes'. Also, 'quiet' is incorrect here; the correct adverb is 'quite'. This is a subject-verb agreement error and an incorrect use of adverbs.

× which make me feel quiet, exhausted.

✓ which makes me feel quite exhausted.

The word 'quiet' is an adjective meaning silent, but the intended meaning is 'quite' as an adverb meaning 'very'. This is an incorrect use of adverbs.

× Cold weather is more comfortable for me and I enjoy outdoor activities more when it's cooler.

✓ Cold weather is more comfortable for me and I enjoy outdoor activities more when it is cooler.

The contraction 'it's' is acceptable but in formal speech, 'it is' is clearer. This is a minor style issue, not a grammar error, so no correction needed here.

× I prefer dry razzle because wet razor often make it difficult to go outside and can be quiet and affordable.

✓ I prefer dry weather because wet weather often makes it difficult to go outside and can be quite uncomfortable.

The words 'razzle' and 'razor' are incorrect and likely misspellings of 'weather'. Also, 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'wet weather'. 'Quiet' should be 'quite' and 'affordable' is incorrect in this context; 'uncomfortable' fits better. This involves incorrect use of quantifiers and vocabulary errors.

× Just stopping in annoying.

✓ It is just annoying to be stuck inside.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. It lacks a subject and verb, making it a sentence structure error.

× For example rain.

✓ For example, rain.

Missing comma after 'For example' and the sentence is a fragment. It should be connected to the previous or next sentence for clarity.

× Can you stop my planes and make me feel cold and annoyed?

✓ It can stop my plans and make me feel cold and annoyed.

'You' is incorrect here; the subject should be 'it' referring to rain. Also, 'planes' should be 'plans'. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and vocabulary error.

× And usually take the weather forecast every evening before I go to the bed because it hurt me.

✓ I usually check the weather forecast every evening before I go to bed because it helps me.

The sentence lacks a subject and verb at the start. 'Take the weather forecast' is incorrect; 'check the weather forecast' is correct. 'Go to the bed' should be 'go to bed'. 'It hurt me' is incorrect; 'it helps me' fits the context. This involves incorrect use of prepositions and sentence structure errors.

× Know what the weather will be like the next day.

✓ I know what the weather will be like the next day.

The sentence is missing the subject 'I'. This is a sentence structure error.

× For example, if it's going rain I can prepare an umbrella or with an appropriate clothes.

✓ For example, if it's going to rain, I can prepare an umbrella or wear appropriate clothes.

The phrase 'going rain' is incorrect; it should be 'going to rain'. Also, 'with an appropriate clothes' is incorrect; it should be 'wear appropriate clothes'. This is a modal verb usage and incorrect preposition/pronoun use.

× I think the climate change has increased significantly in recent years which has caused many negative effects on both people in the environment.

✓ I think climate change has increased significantly in recent years, which has caused many negative effects on both people and the environment.

'The climate change' should be 'climate change' without 'the'. Also, 'on both people in the environment' should be 'on both people and the environment'. This is an article error and incorrect use of conjunctions.

× It is important for government and individual to take action to reduce the impacts.

✓ It is important for the government and individuals to take action to reduce the impacts.

'Government' and 'individual' need articles and plural form respectively. This is incorrect use of pronouns and articles.

× Yes, I would like to visit also cities with different climates because it would be interesting to experience new weather in environment.

✓ Yes, I would also like to visit cities with different climates because it would be interesting to experience new weather and environments.

The placement of 'also' is incorrect. 'In environment' should be 'and environments' or 'different environments'. This is incorrect use of quantifiers and sentence structure.

× For example, I live in a hot and humid city, so visiting cooler place would be refreshing and help me learn more about different cultures.

✓ For example, I live in a hot and humid city, so visiting cooler places would be refreshing and help me learn more about different cultures.

'Cooler place' should be plural 'cooler places' to match the context. This is an incorrect use of quantifiers.