Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng ngữ pháp và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như thiếu động từ hoặc sai thì. Hãy mô tả cụ thể hơn về hai mùa và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Example: I live in a tropical country where the weather is usually either sunny or rainy. There are two distinct seasons: the dry season and the rainy season. I prefer the sunny weather because it makes outdoor activities more enjoyable.

Suggestion: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối ý và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, nên dùng từ vựng phù hợp và chính xác hơn để diễn đạt ý của mình.

Example: I prefer hot weather because I have some health issues that are aggravated by the cold. Moreover, hot weather allows me to enjoy outdoor activities and spend time with my friends and family. In contrast, cold weather often keeps me indoors because it's too chilly to go outside.

Suggestion: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và từ vựng, đồng thời tránh lỗi chính tả như "ride" thay vì "dry". Hãy sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và liên kết các ý bằng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: I prefer dry weather because it allows me to do many outdoor activities with my friends, such as taking photos. This season is ideal for capturing beautiful pictures. On the other hand, wet weather makes me feel cold and it's difficult to go outside.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên tập trung trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lặp từ. Hãy thêm các chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: I usually don't check the weather forecast because my daily routine is simple: I go to school and return home. However, on special occasions, such as when I have to travel to the capital to deliver photos to friends or customers, I check the weather to prepare accordingly.

Suggestion: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và từ vựng để diễn đạt ý tưởng rõ ràng hơn. Hãy sử dụng các câu đơn giản, tránh lỗi sai và giải thích cụ thể các tác động của biến đổi khí hậu với ví dụ minh họa.

Example: I believe human activities like deforestation and excessive use of air conditioners have contributed to climate change in recent years. These actions have disturbed the natural weather patterns, making the climate more unpredictable and extreme.

Suggestion: Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và ngữ pháp chính xác hơn. Hãy trình bày ý kiến rõ ràng, sử dụng liên từ để kết nối các ý và cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Example: Visiting cities with different climates sounds like an interesting experience, especially during summer vacation. However, because of my health issues related to cold weather, I would need to prepare enough medicine before traveling. If I have the chance, I would definitely try it as a memorable experience in my life.

× I live in a tropical country so the weather often sunny and rainy and it's have a definitely different between two season lighted and I love the sunny more.

✓ I live in a tropical country, so the weather is often sunny and rainy, and there is definitely a difference between the two seasons, and I love the sunny one more.

The sentence lacks the verb 'is' after 'weather' to form the present tense correctly. 'It's have' is incorrect; it should be 'there is' to indicate existence. 'Two season lighted' is unclear and corrected to 'the two seasons'. The sentence needs proper verb forms and articles to be grammatically correct.

× I prefer hot weather because I have some illness about cold weather and I feel like the hot weather allow me to do many activity outdoor.

✓ I prefer hot weather because I have some illnesses related to cold weather, and I feel like the hot weather allows me to do many outdoor activities.

The modal verb 'allow' should be in third person singular form 'allows' to agree with the singular subject 'hot weather'. Also, 'activity' should be plural 'activities' to match 'many'. The phrase 'about cold weather' is better expressed as 'related to cold weather'.

× I can connect with my friends and my family, but the cold weather is I can just stay in my house because the outside was too cold to do anything like that.

✓ I can connect with my friends and my family, but in cold weather, I can only stay in my house because it is too cold outside to do anything like that.

The original sentence has awkward structure and incorrect word order. 'The cold weather is I can just stay' is incorrect; it should be 'in cold weather, I can only stay'. Also, 'the outside was too cold' should be 'it is too cold outside' to maintain present tense and correct word order.

× I prefer ride weather because allow me to do many outdoor activity with my friends such as taking photo and this is a really ideal season to making many unbootable photo and in contrast the way better also bring me a really chilly feeling but it's not really easy to go outside.

✓ I prefer dry weather because it allows me to do many outdoor activities with my friends, such as taking photos, and this is a really ideal season for making many beautiful photos. In contrast, the wet weather also brings me a really chilly feeling, but it's not really easy to go outside.

'Ride weather' is a typo and should be 'dry weather'. 'Allow' needs the subject 'it' and should be 'allows'. 'Activity' should be plural 'activities'. 'Making many unbootable photo' is incorrect; 'making many beautiful photos' is appropriate. 'Way better' should be 'wet weather'. 'Bring' should be 'brings' to agree with singular subject. The sentence also needs commas and conjunctions for clarity.

× I don't have the habit of checking the weather forecast because every day I have just do one thing that I have to go to school and go back to my hair to my whole world.

✓ I don't have the habit of checking the weather forecast because every day I just do one thing: I have to go to school and go back to my home, which is my whole world.

'Have just do' is incorrect; it should be 'just do'. 'Go back to my hair' is a mistake; it should be 'go back to my home'. The sentence needs punctuation to separate ideas clearly.

× So I don't really remind you the weather.

✓ So I don't really pay attention to the weather.

'Remind you the weather' is incorrect usage of pronouns and verbs. The intended meaning is better expressed as 'pay attention to the weather'.

× But in some special occasions like I had to go to capital, bring the pictures for my friends or from my customers.

✓ But on some special occasions, like when I have to go to the capital to bring pictures for my friends or my customers.

'Had to go' suggests past tense, but the context implies habitual or future action, so 'have to go' is better. 'On some special occasions' is the correct preposition. The sentence is incomplete and needs restructuring.

× So I have to check the weather to make sure that I have a.

✓ So I have to check the weather to make sure that I am prepared.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object after 'have a'. Completing the sentence with 'am prepared' makes it grammatically correct and meaningful.

× I think the people habit had chased the climate in recent years such as deforestation or the cosmetic trees.

✓ I think people's habits have changed the climate in recent years, such as deforestation or cutting down trees.

'People habit had chased the climate' is incorrect pronoun and verb usage. 'People's habits have changed the climate' is correct. 'Cosmetic trees' is likely a mistranslation or typo; 'cutting down trees' is appropriate.

× So the weather isn't are in this flow and also they are used to much air conditioner so make the weather was harder so so the climate hedges like that.

✓ So the weather isn't stable these days, and people use air conditioners too much, which makes the weather harsher, so the climate changes like that.

The sentence has multiple tense and structure errors. 'Isn't are' is incorrect; 'isn't stable' is correct. 'Used to much air conditioner' should be 'use air conditioners too much'. 'Make the weather was harder' should be 'makes the weather harsher'. 'Climate hedges' is a typo for 'climate changes'.

× It is a really interesting experience if it has a summer vacation trip, but I would consider it because have some health issues related to the cold weather.

✓ It would be a really interesting experience if I had a summer vacation trip, but I would consider it carefully because I have some health issues related to cold weather.

'If it has a summer vacation trip' is incorrect; it should be 'if I had a summer vacation trip' to express a hypothetical situation. 'Have some health issues' needs the subject 'I'. Modal verb 'would' is used correctly for hypothetical.

× But if I have a chance and if I repair enough medicines for me, maybe I will try it like memorable experience in my life.

✓ But if I have a chance and if I prepare enough medicine for myself, maybe I will try it as a memorable experience in my life.

'Repair enough medicines for me' is incorrect; it should be 'prepare enough medicine for myself'. 'Like memorable experience' should be 'as a memorable experience'. Pronouns and verb choice need correction.