Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều từ thừa, ngắt quãng không cần thiết. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: I prefer the winter season in my city because the weather is cool and comfortable. It allows me to enjoy outdoor activities such as biking and hiking without feeling too hot.

Suggestion: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng ngữ pháp và tránh lặp từ. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp và sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.

Example: I prefer cold weather because hot weather makes me feel uncomfortable. Cold weather feels refreshing and relaxing whenever I am outside.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn có lỗi lặp từ và thiếu sự mạch lạc. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích rõ hơn lý do bạn thích thời tiết khô ráo.

Example: I prefer dry weather because humid weather makes me feel sticky and uncomfortable. Dry weather is more pleasant for me.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu khẳng định hoặc phủ định rõ ràng và giải thích lý do một cách mạch lạc.

Example: I don't usually check the weather forecast because I find it unnecessary and I don't worry much about the weather.

Suggestion: Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích rõ hơn về các tác động của biến đổi khí hậu. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: I think climate change has caused sea levels to rise and global temperatures to increase. These effects have led to more extreme weather events in recent years.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều từ thừa và không tự nhiên. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lặp từ để câu trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit many places with different climates from my city to experience new environments and cultures.

× In my city, I prefer winter season because it allows me attending a activity in uh, outside and for example, I uh, can uh, biking and uh, hiking.

✓ In my city, I prefer the winter season because it allows me to attend activities outside; for example, I can go biking and hiking.

The verb 'allows' should be followed by the infinitive form 'to attend' instead of the gerund 'attending'. Also, 'a activity' is incorrect; it should be 'an activity' or better 'activities' in plural. Additionally, 'can biking' is incorrect; modal verbs like 'can' should be followed by the base form of the verb, so 'can go biking' or simply 'go biking' is correct.

× In my city, I prefer winter season because it allows me attending a activity in uh, outside and for example, I uh, can uh, biking and uh, hiking.

✓ In my city, I prefer the winter season because it allows me to attend activities outside; for example, I can go biking and hiking.

The phrase 'winter season' requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific season. Also, 'outside' does not need the preposition 'in' before it.

× I uh, can uh, biking and uh, hiking.

✓ I can go biking and hiking.

After modal verbs like 'can', the base form of the verb should be used. 'Biking' is a gerund and cannot follow 'can' directly. The correct form is 'can go biking'.

× I prefer winter season because it allows me attending a activity in uh, outside

✓ I prefer the winter season because it allows me to attend activities outside

The noun 'activity' should be plural 'activities' to match the context of multiple actions like biking and hiking.

× I applied for a cold weather because of hot weather make me feel uncomfortable and also cold weather it made me feel refreshing and uh, relaxing when, uh, when uh, every time I outside.

✓ I prefer cold weather because hot weather makes me feel uncomfortable, and cold weather makes me feel refreshed and relaxed whenever I am outside.

'Applied for' is incorrect here; 'prefer' is the correct verb to express preference. Also, 'hot weather make' should be 'hot weather makes' to agree with singular subject. 'It made me feel' should be 'makes me feel' to maintain present tense. 'Refreshing' and 'relaxing' should be adjectives 'refreshed' and 'relaxed' to describe feelings. 'Every time I outside' is missing the verb 'am'.

× hot weather make me feel uncomfortable

✓ hot weather makes me feel uncomfortable

The singular subject 'hot weather' requires the singular verb form 'makes'.

× cold weather it made me feel refreshing and uh, relaxing when, uh, when uh, every time I outside.

✓ cold weather makes me feel refreshed and relaxed whenever I am outside.

The sentence should be in present tense to express habitual feelings. 'Made' is past tense and should be 'makes'. 'Refreshing' and 'relaxing' are present participles; the correct adjectives are 'refreshed' and 'relaxed'. Also, 'every time I outside' lacks the verb 'am'.

× cold weather it made me feel refreshing and uh, relaxing when, uh, when uh, every time I outside.

✓ Cold weather makes me feel refreshed and relaxed whenever I am outside.

The sentence has redundant subject 'cold weather it' and awkward phrasing. It should be simplified to 'Cold weather makes me feel...' and 'whenever I am outside'.

× I, uh, prefer dry weather because weather weather very humid and I don't like to feel humid.

✓ I prefer dry weather because the weather is very humid and I don't like to feel humid.

The repetition 'weather weather' is an error. Also, 'weather very humid' lacks the verb 'is'. The sentence needs 'the weather is very humid'.

× Am I not a pupil, have a habit of checking the weather forecast? Uh, because I, uh, feel it's unnecessary and I don't care about this problem?

✓ I am not a pupil and do not have a habit of checking the weather forecast because I feel it's unnecessary and I don't care about it.

The original sentence is a question but intended as a statement. It lacks proper subject-verb structure and uses question marks incorrectly. It should be a declarative sentence with correct conjunctions.

× I don't care about this problem?

✓ I don't care about it.

'This problem' is vague and awkward here; 'it' is more natural to refer back to the weather forecast issue.

× I think it's a result in a sea level rising and global warming. It affects the climate change in recent years.

✓ I think it has resulted in sea level rise and global warming. These have affected the climate in recent years.

'It's a result in' is incorrect; the phrase should be 'it has resulted in'. 'Sea level rising' should be 'sea level rise'. 'It affects the climate change' is awkward; better to say 'These have affected the climate'.

× I think it's a result in a sea level rising and global warming.

✓ I think it has resulted in sea level rise and global warming.

The phrase 'a sea level rising' is incorrect; 'sea level rise' is an uncountable noun and does not need an article.

× Yes, I'll lie. I'll always want to try many, uh, places, uh, and uh, try, uh, different climate from, uh, another city.

✓ Yes, I will. I always want to try many places and experience different climates from other cities.

'I'll lie' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo; 'I will' is appropriate. 'Try different climate' should be 'experience different climates'. 'Another city' should be 'other cities' for plural and general meaning.