Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答时应避免重复“very wet”，并且可以更自然地表达季节变化。建议使用更丰富的词汇和句式，使回答更流畅。

Example: The weather where I live is quite humid during the summer, with hot temperatures and frequent rain. In contrast, winters tend to be dry and quite cold.

Suggestion: 回答中表达不够自然，且有些重复。建议用更简洁和礼貌的方式表达个人喜好，并避免不必要的自我评价。

Example: I prefer cold weather because I find it more comfortable and refreshing. Hot weather makes me sweat a lot, which I don't enjoy.

Suggestion: 回答较为清晰，但有语法错误和重复。建议注意语法准确性，避免重复表达，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

Example: I prefer dry weather because when it's wet, the humidity makes my clothes stick to my body, which feels very uncomfortable.

Suggestion: 回答中时态使用不当，且有重复词汇。建议注意时态一致性，避免重复，并使用连接词使表达更自然。

Example: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every day to decide whether I need to bring an umbrella or choose appropriate clothes for the next day.

Suggestion: 回答语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，注意主谓一致，并提供更具体的影响细节。

Example: Climate change has caused extreme weather, making summers hotter and winters colder, which affects people's daily lives and health.

Suggestion: 回答表达不够自然，有语法错误和重复。建议使用更简洁的句子，避免重复，并说明原因更具体。

Example: I prefer not to visit cities with different climates because I would need to prepare different clothes, which can be inconvenient and uncomfortable for me.

× If it is a wet weather, I think there's a lot of water vapor around my around my body and make my clothes sticking on my body which is very uncomfortable.

✓ If it is wet weather, I think there's a lot of water vapor around my body and it makes my clothes stick to my body, which is very uncomfortable.

“weather”是不可数名词，前面不需要加冠词“a”。此外，句子中缺少主语“it”导致谓语动词“make”使用错误，应改为“it makes”。“make my clothes sticking”应改为“makes my clothes stick”，因为“make”后接动词原形。

× Actually the climate change cause a lot of effects but the most important or serious in fact is that it makes the environmental is not very fit for human to live in that environment because it is too hot in summer or too cold in winter.

✓ Actually, climate change causes a lot of effects, but the most important or serious one is that it makes the environment not very fit for humans to live in because it is too hot in summer or too cold in winter.

“climate change”作为单数主语，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“causes”。“the environmental”应为“the environment”，因为“environment”是名词。句中“makes the environmental is not”结构错误，应改为“makes the environment not”。“human”应使用复数形式“humans”，表示人类的整体。

× If it is a wet weather, I think there's a lot of water vapor around my around my body and make my clothes sticking on my body which is very uncomfortable.

✓ If it is wet weather, I think there's a lot of water vapor around my body and it makes my clothes stick to my body, which is very uncomfortable.

句中“my around my body”重复且不通顺，应删去重复部分。缺少主语“it”导致谓语动词“make”使用错误，应加上“it”。

× If it is a wet weather, I think there's a lot of water vapor around my around my body and make my clothes sticking on my body which is very uncomfortable.

✓ If it is wet weather, I think there's a lot of water vapor around my body and it makes my clothes stick to my body, which is very uncomfortable.

“sticking on my body”中的介词“on”用法不当，正确表达应为“stick to my body”，表示衣服粘在身体上。

× Actually the climate change cause a lot of effects but the most important or serious in fact is that it makes the environmental is not very fit for human to live in that environment because it is too hot in summer or too cold in winter.

✓ Actually, climate change causes a lot of effects, but the most important or serious one is that it makes the environment not very fit for humans to live in because it is too hot in summer or too cold in winter.

“effects”应使用复数形式，且“human”应为复数“humans”，表示人类整体。

× No, I don't like to do that. The reason is that if I go to another city, I need to get suits for the weather intensity and which is not the same as my the city I live in, I live in, so it can make me uncomfortable.

✓ No, I don't like to do that. The reason is that if I go to another city, I need to get suits for the weather intensity, which is not the same as the city I live in, so it can make me uncomfortable.

句中“my the city I live in, I live in”重复且不正确，应改为“the city I live in”。“which”指代前面的内容，前面不应有“and”。