Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn nên tự nhiên hơn và tránh lặp từ. Bạn nên sử dụng các từ vựng mô tả thời tiết phong phú hơn và cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn.

Example: The weather where I live is quite varied; it often rains, but there are also many sunny and cloudy days.

Suggestion: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối ý và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

Example: I prefer cold weather to hot weather because it makes me feel cooler and less tired compared to the hot weather.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên sử dụng từ đúng và cấu trúc câu chính xác để truyền đạt ý rõ ràng.

Example: I prefer dry weather to wet weather because it is cleaner and I can play sports and enjoy outdoor activities.

Suggestion: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh. Hãy tránh lặp từ và cung cấp thông tin cụ thể hơn về tần suất kiểm tra dự báo thời tiết.

Example: I usually check the weather forecast occasionally, especially when I plan to go outside.

Suggestion: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và từ vựng để diễn đạt ý tưởng rõ ràng hơn. Hãy sử dụng các từ vựng liên quan đến môi trường và biến đổi khí hậu một cách chính xác.

Example: I think climate change has worsened in recent years, putting many animal species in danger. Therefore, people should protect the environment more actively.

Suggestion: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng hơn và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác. Hãy tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit other cities with different climates. For example, when I visit the countryside, the air is fresher and less polluted than where I live.

× I prefer a cold weather than a hot weather because when the cold weather is have make me feel cool and so don't tired than the hot weather and the hot weather usually.

✓ I prefer cold weather to hot weather because cold weather makes me feel cool and less tired than hot weather usually does.

The phrase 'a cold weather' and 'a hot weather' incorrectly use singular form with an uncountable noun 'weather'. Also, 'is have make' is grammatically incorrect; the correct verb form is 'makes'. The comparison should use 'prefer X to Y' instead of 'prefer X than Y'.

× I fly a dry weather then a wet weather because when the dry weather is not dirty and I can't play sport and enjoy activity outdoor.

✓ I prefer dry weather to wet weather because dry weather is not dirty and I can play sports and enjoy outdoor activities.

Again, 'a dry weather' and 'a wet weather' are incorrect; 'weather' is uncountable and should not have an article. 'Fly' is incorrect verb here; 'prefer' fits the context. 'Can't play sport' should be 'can play sports' and 'enjoy activity outdoor' should be 'enjoy outdoor activities'.

× Because I always at home so I I will sometime I check the weather forecast.

✓ Because I am always at home, I sometimes check the weather forecast.

The sentence has redundant and misplaced words ('so I I will sometime I'). The correct structure is to use 'Because' clause followed by a main clause without 'so' or extra pronouns. Also, 'always at home' needs the verb 'am'.

× I think in the recent year the climate change has been increasing and so it's in danger for the animal space space.

✓ I think in recent years climate change has been increasing, and so animal habitats are in danger.

'In the recent year' should be 'in recent years' for general recent time. 'Climate change has been increasing' is correct present perfect continuous. 'It's in danger for the animal space space' is unclear; 'animal habitats are in danger' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× So people can't can protect the environment and raise out.

✓ So people can't protect the environment and raise awareness.

Using both 'can't' and 'can' together is incorrect. The phrase 'raise out' is incorrect; the intended phrase is likely 'raise awareness'.

× Oh, I think it's just because for example when I visit a countryside the air is so fresher and not pollutions than in the where I live.

✓ Oh, I think it's just because, for example, when I visit the countryside, the air is fresher and less polluted than where I live.

'A countryside' is incorrect; 'countryside' is uncountable and should not have 'a'. 'So fresher' is incorrect; 'fresher' alone suffices. 'Not pollutions' is incorrect; 'less polluted' is the correct comparative form. 'Than in the where I live' is redundant; 'than where I live' is correct.