Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer has some grammar and clarity issues. Try to make your sentences clearer and avoid redundancy. For example, say "I live in a city with tropical weather, so it is usually hot and humid, with rain in the afternoon. I like it because it's warm."

Example: I live in a city with tropical weather, so it is usually hot and humid, with rain in the afternoon. I like it because it's warm and comfortable.

Suggestion: Your answer is confusing and has grammar mistakes. Be clear and concise. For example, say "I prefer hot weather because I don't like wearing many layers to keep warm."

Example: I prefer hot weather because I don't like wearing many layers to keep warm.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but has grammar errors and awkward phrasing. Try to say, "I prefer dry weather because rainy days are inconvenient. I have to carry an umbrella or wear a raincoat, which is bothersome."

Example: I prefer dry weather because rainy days are inconvenient. I have to carry an umbrella or wear a raincoat, which is bothersome.

Suggestion: Your answer has grammar mistakes and unclear parts. Try: "Yes, I check the weather forecast every morning before going out. It's important to know if I need to bring an umbrella to avoid getting wet."

Example: Yes, I check the weather forecast every morning before going out. It's important to know if I need to bring an umbrella to avoid getting wet.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and has grammar issues. Try to be specific and organized. For example: "Climate change causes unusual high temperatures and more frequent typhoons than before."

Example: Climate change causes unusual high temperatures and more frequent typhoons than before.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but has grammar and clarity issues. Try: "Yes, I would like to visit places with different climates because I have never experienced cold weather or snow."

Example: Yes, I would like to visit places with different climates because I have never experienced cold weather or snow.

× I live in a city that is that has tropical weather so it usually has high temperature, humidity and it will also have a rain aft in the afternoon.

✓ I live in a city that has tropical weather, so it usually has high temperatures and humidity, and it also has rain in the afternoon.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'is that has' which is redundant and ungrammatical. Also, 'a rain aft' is incorrect; it should be 'rain in the afternoon'. The verb 'will also have' is better expressed as 'also has' to indicate habitual weather conditions. Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× But I still like it because it's really warm so I really unlike.

✓ But I still like it because it's really warm, so I really like it.

The word 'unlike' is incorrectly used here; it is a verb meaning 'to not like' but the sentence context requires 'like'. The sentence also lacks a comma before 'so' to separate the clauses properly.

× Personally I prefer cold hot weather because I'm that person really don't like cold weather.

✓ Personally, I prefer hot weather because I'm the kind of person who really doesn't like cold weather.

The phrase 'cold hot weather' is contradictory and confusing; it should be 'hot weather'. 'I'm that person really don't like' is ungrammatical; it should be 'I'm the kind of person who really doesn't like'. Also, a comma after 'Personally' improves readability.

× It's not only I have to wear many jackets or some like long hoodies to keep me warm.

✓ Not only do I have to wear many jackets or long hoodies to keep warm,

The phrase 'It's not only I have to' is incorrect. The correct structure is 'Not only do I have to'. Also, 'some like long hoodies' is awkward; 'long hoodies' suffices. The sentence is incomplete and should be connected properly.

× Well I prefer dry weather because I really don't like a rainy day.

✓ Well, I prefer dry weather because I really don't like rainy days.

The article 'a' before 'rainy day' is unnecessary when speaking generally. 'Rainy days' plural is more appropriate to express a general dislike.

× It's not only inconvenient to going out but also have to worry.

✓ It's not only inconvenient to go out but also makes me worry.

The phrase 'to going out' is incorrect; the infinitive form 'to go out' is required. Also, 'but also have to worry' lacks a subject and verb agreement; it should be 'but also makes me worry' to complete the idea.

× Like bring umbrella or water for jacket is really inconvenient.

✓ For example, bringing an umbrella or wearing a rain jacket is really inconvenient.

The original sentence lacks proper structure and articles. 'Like bring umbrella or water for jacket' is unclear. It should be 'bringing an umbrella or wearing a rain jacket'. Also, 'water for jacket' is likely a mishearing or misstatement; 'rain jacket' is appropriate.

× Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning before I going out because it's really important to to with the umbrella with you.

✓ Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning before I go out because it's really important to take an umbrella with you.

'Before I going out' is incorrect; it should be 'before I go out'. The phrase 'to to with the umbrella with you' is ungrammatical and unclear; it should be 'to take an umbrella with you'.

× If you see the forecast say it's going to rain otherwise you'll get wet and really causing the inconvenience to work by the home.

✓ If you see the forecast says it's going to rain, otherwise you'll get wet and it will really cause inconvenience when working from home.

The sentence lacks proper conjunctions and verb forms. 'If you see the forecast say' should be 'If you see the forecast says'. 'Really causing' should be 'will really cause'. 'Work by the home' is awkward; 'working from home' is correct.

× Umm, I think it's not only like floating and running a lot, causing like unusual temperature, high temperature.

✓ Umm, I think it's not only flooding and heavy rain causing unusual high temperatures.

'Like floating and running a lot' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely 'flooding and heavy rain'. 'Causing like unusual temperature, high temperature' is awkward; it should be 'causing unusual high temperatures'.

× And there's also more typhoon more frequently.

✓ And there are also more typhoons occurring more frequently.

'More typhoon' is incorrect; the plural 'typhoons' is needed. Also, 'there's' (there is) should be 'there are' for plural. The sentence is improved by adding 'occurring' to clarify the meaning.

× It happens even before.

✓ It didn't happen before.

The sentence 'It happens even before' is ungrammatical and unclear. The intended meaning is likely that such events did not happen previously, so 'It didn't happen before' is correct.

× Yes, if I have a chance to visit a country with other lender whether where I live, I definitely will have a try because I really have seldom have the chance to have the cold weather outside.

✓ Yes, if I have a chance to visit a country with a different climate from where I live, I definitely will try because I have seldom had the chance to experience cold weather.

'Other lender whether' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'different climate'. 'I really have seldom have' is redundant; 'I have seldom had' is correct. 'Have the cold weather outside' is awkward; 'experience cold weather' is better.

× So since I for example, I haven't seen a snow in my life.

✓ For example, I haven't seen snow in my life.

'So since I for example' is redundant and awkward; 'For example' suffices. 'A snow' is incorrect; 'snow' is uncountable and does not take an article.

× So if I have a chance to see a snow.

✓ So if I have a chance to see snow, I will definitely take it.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a main clause. Adding a main clause completes the sentence. Also, 'a snow' is incorrect; 'snow' is uncountable and does not take an article.