Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법적 오류가 있습니다. 'Unlike other summers in other country' 대신 'Compared to other countries'를 사용하고, 문장을 더 명확하게 구성하세요.

Example: The weather in Korea is quite hot, especially during the summer, which is hotter compared to other countries.

Suggestion: 답변이 명확하지 않고 문법 오류가 있습니다. 'I can keep feel' 부분은 의미 전달이 어렵습니다. 이유를 구체적으로 설명하고 문장을 간결하게 만드세요.

Example: I prefer cold weather because I can wear warm clothes to stay comfortable, whereas hot weather makes me feel uncomfortable.

Suggestion: 문장이 부자연스럽고 연결이 매끄럽지 않습니다. 'For example' 사용법을 개선하고, 이유를 더 구체적으로 설명하세요.

Example: I prefer dry weather because, for example, in summer I suffer more from humidity than from the heat itself.

Suggestion: 'Check the whole ring'의 의미가 불분명합니다. 문장을 명확하게 하고, 습관과 이유를 간결하게 표현하세요.

Example: I check the weather forecast every morning before going to school or work because it helps me choose appropriate clothes.

Suggestion: 'Rose temperature'는 잘못된 표현입니다. 문법과 어휘를 정확히 사용하고, 구체적인 예시를 들어 설명하세요.

Example: I think climate change causes temperatures to rise, making summers hotter and winters colder, and it also affects animal habitats.

Suggestion: 'Enjoy their weathers'는 부자연스럽습니다. 문장을 더 자연스럽게 만들고, 이유를 구체적으로 설명하세요.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because it offers a unique experience that I cannot have in my hometown.

× Unlike other summers in other country, Korea's summer is especially the hottest.

✓ Unlike other summers in other countries, Korea's summer is especially the hottest.

The word 'country' should be plural 'countries' because it refers to multiple other countries, not just one.

× Korea's summer is especially the hottest.

✓ Korea's summer is especially hot.

The superlative 'the hottest' is incorrect here because it compares Korea's summer to all summers globally without context. 'Especially hot' is more appropriate to express emphasis.

× I prefer cold weather because if I am cold, I can avoid the cold by wearing more and more clothes and I can keep feel.

✓ I prefer cold weather because if I am cold, I can avoid it by wearing more and more clothes and I can keep feeling comfortable.

The sentence is awkward and incomplete. 'Keep feel' is incorrect; it should be 'keep feeling comfortable' to express continuous sensation. Also, 'avoid the cold' is better than 'avoid cold' for clarity.

× I prefer dry weather because for example is summer I really suffer from humidity more than the hot temperature.

✓ I prefer dry weather because, for example, in summer I really suffer from humidity more than from the hot temperature.

Prepositions 'in' and 'from' are missing before 'summer' and 'the hot temperature' respectively. Also, commas are needed around 'for example' for clarity.

× sometimes I need to check the whole ring.

✓ sometimes I need to check the whole thing.

The word 'ring' is incorrect here; likely a mispronunciation or typo for 'thing'. The correct pronoun is 'thing' to refer to an unspecified object.

× I think climate change affects the Rose temperature that makes the summer more and more hot and the winter more and more cool there.

✓ I think climate change affects the rise in temperature that makes the summer hotter and the winter cooler.

'Rose temperature' is incorrect; it should be 'rise in temperature'. Also, 'more and more hot' and 'more and more cool' are awkward; comparative forms 'hotter' and 'cooler' are correct.

× And yeah, it also effects animals.

✓ And yeah, it also affects animals.

'Effects' is a noun; the correct verb form is 'affects' to indicate influence.

× Yes, I really like to visit other cities that have different climates because it can give me such a great experience to enjoy their weathers, but I cannot experience when I'm in my hometown.

✓ Yes, I really like to visit other cities that have different climates because it can give me such a great experience to enjoy their weather, but I cannot experience that when I'm in my hometown.

'Weathers' is incorrect; 'weather' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized. Also, adding 'that' improves clarity in the second clause.