Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答时应避免重复和语法错误，且句子应更自然流畅。可以简化描述并用连词连接句子，使表达更连贯。

Example: I live in the South of China, where spring is cool and windy, summer is very hot, autumn is windy, and winter is mild, similar to spring.

Suggestion: 注意语法错误，如动词单复数一致，避免重复词汇。可以用更丰富的词汇表达感受，使答案更自然。

Example: I prefer cold weather because it feels refreshing and comfortable. In contrast, hot weather makes me sweat a lot and feel tired quickly, which I dislike.

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法和表达错误，句子不够连贯。应使用正确的表达方式，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

Example: I don't like either dry or wet weather because dry weather makes my skin very dry, while wet weather makes it hard for my clothes to dry.

Suggestion: 回答应更简洁且语法正确，避免断句不完整。可以明确频率并用连词连接句子。

Example: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast before going out to decide whether to bring an umbrella. I do this about once a week, not every day.

Suggestion: 回答中有多处语法和表达错误，内容不够清晰。应使用正确的词汇和句型，表达观点更具体。

Example: In recent years, climate change has caused more typhoons and floods. This is because people are not aware of environmental protection, and increased carbon dioxide emissions are making the Earth warmer.

Suggestion: 回答不完整且表达不流畅。应完整表达观点，避免句子残缺，并使用连词使内容连贯。

Example: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates to gain new experiences. For example, I went to Korea last summer and found the air very fresh and the weather pleasant.

× In recent year, there are many climates like typhoon and floods.

✓ In recent years, there are many climates like typhoons and floods.

“year”应为复数形式“years”，因为指的是多个年份；“typhoon”应为复数“typhoons”，与“floods”保持一致。

× hot weather often make me feel stinky and uncomfortable, and I tend to sweat a lot, which I don't like.

✓ hot weather often makes me feel stinky and uncomfortable, and I tend to sweat a lot, which I don't like.

主语“hot weather”是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s，故“make”改为“makes”。

× the weather like in spring.

✓ the weather is like in spring.

缺少系动词“is”，使句子完整。

× wet weather will make my clothes count to be dry.

✓ wet weather will make my clothes hard to dry.

“count to be dry”表达不正确，应改为“hard to dry”表示“难以干燥”。

× So dry and wet both I don't like.

✓ So I don't like both dry and wet weather.

句子结构混乱，调整语序使表达更自然。

× I will check the weather forecast before I go out to make sure I bring the umbrella or anything that I need maybe once a week or. Every day not.

✓ I will check the weather forecast before I go out to make sure I bring an umbrella or anything that I need, maybe once a week or not every day.

句子断裂且表达不完整，调整语序并补充缺失部分使句子通顺。

× The reason why deers have this because people are not awareness about the environment and carbon dioxide emission will make the weather gets warmer and warmer, so people should protect it.

✓ The reason for this is that people are not aware of the environment, and carbon dioxide emissions make the weather get warmer and warmer, so people should protect it.

“deers”用词错误，应去掉；“not awareness”应改为“not aware”；“carbon dioxide emission”应为复数“emissions”；“make the weather gets”中“gets”应为原形“get”。

× I feel that the air is very fresh and the weather is very.

✓ I feel that the air is very fresh and the weather is very nice.

句子不完整，缺少形容词“nice”来修饰“weather”。