Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit unclear and lengthy. Try to give a clear topic sentence first, then add specific details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and keep it concise.

Example: The weather where I live near Everest is mild, neither too hot nor too cold. It often changes throughout the day, which I enjoy more than constant sunny or rainy weather. Because of this, I like going outside during such days.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and has some errors. Start with a clear preference, then explain reasons using linking words. Use correct vocabulary and sentence structure.

Example: I prefer hot weather because it allows me to wear light clothes without layering. Also, sunny hot days make me feel energetic and comfortable.

Suggestion: Your answer is confusing and has grammar mistakes. Give a clear topic sentence, then explain reasons with specific details and linking words. Avoid unclear phrases.

Example: I prefer dry weather because it is easier to go outside without worrying about getting my clothes wet. Also, dry days are better for outdoor activities and shopping.

Suggestion: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Start with a clear statement about your habit, then explain when and why you check the forecast using linking words and complete sentences.

Example: I usually do not check the weather forecast regularly. However, if I have an important event where I need to dress elegantly, I check the forecast to choose appropriate clothes.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and has vocabulary errors. Give a clear opinion, explain causes or effects with specific details, and use correct vocabulary and linking words.

Example: I believe climate change in recent years is mainly caused by increased pollution from vehicles and deforestation. These activities raise greenhouse gases, which affect the environment negatively.

Suggestion: Your answer is incomplete and repetitive. Start with a clear statement, then explain reasons with specific details and linking words. Avoid redundancy and finish your thoughts.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because experiencing new weather helps me learn about different environments. It also changes how I feel and behave, which is interesting.

× The weather where I live is in Everest, not so hot, not so cold in between and it seems frequently in a day also, and I love this kind of weather more than the sunny days or the rainy days and I like to go out in this type of.

✓ The weather where I live, in Everest, is not so hot, not so cold, somewhere in between, and it changes frequently during the day. I love this kind of weather more than sunny or rainy days, and I like to go out in this type of weather.

The original sentence misuses prepositions such as 'is in Everest' instead of 'where I live, in Everest,' and 'go out in this type of' without specifying 'weather.' Correct preposition use clarifies location and context, improving sentence clarity and grammatical correctness.

× To be honest, I like hot weather compared to golf because in hot weather we can wear light clothes and cannot do lots of layering and.

✓ To be honest, I like hot weather compared to cold because in hot weather we can wear light clothes and do less layering.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'golf' instead of 'cold' and ends with an incomplete conjunction 'and.' Also, 'cannot do lots of layering' is awkward; 'do less layering' is clearer. Proper conjunction use and word choice improve sentence coherence.

× I prefer dry weather compared to wet because while the weather is great, the chance of getting your dress dots is high and I feel like dry weather is more suitable to go out and to sell rather than in the way.

✓ I prefer dry weather compared to wet because when the weather is great, the chance of getting your clothes dirty is low, and I feel like dry weather is more suitable to go out and sell rather than wet weather.

The sentence misuses prepositions and phrases such as 'while the weather is great' (better as 'when the weather is great'), 'dress dots' (likely 'clothes dirty'), and 'rather than in the way' (should be 'rather than wet weather'). Correct preposition and phrase use clarifies meaning.

× To be honest, I usually don't take weather but if the if there is something that is more necessary event or occasion where I have to wear elegant clothes, then that time I usually check weather forecast to dress up according to the weather and it is very.

✓ To be honest, I usually don't check the weather, but if there is an important event or occasion where I have to wear elegant clothes, then I usually check the weather forecast to dress appropriately according to the weather.

The sentence lacks quantifiers like 'an' before 'important event' and misuses 'take weather' instead of 'check the weather.' Also, the sentence ends abruptly. Proper quantifiers and complete sentence structure improve clarity and correctness.

× I think the main cause of things in climbing in recent years is the pollution that is increasing by the use of use of lots of old Pickles and even from the forestry.

✓ I think the main cause of climate change in recent years is pollution, which is increasing due to the use of many old vehicles and even from deforestation.

The sentence misuses prepositions and words: 'things in climbing' should be 'climate change,' 'use of use of lots of old Pickles' likely means 'use of many old vehicles,' and 'from the forestry' should be 'from deforestation.' Correct preposition and word choice clarify meaning.

× Yes, I love to visit other places where I can experience new types of weather because I like to go and see the place and know the environment and even I feel like even different environment you can feel differently and act differently and it helps you to.

✓ Yes, I love to visit other places where I can experience new types of weather because I like to explore and learn about the environment. I also feel that in different environments, you can feel and act differently, and it helps you grow.

The sentence misuses prepositions and lacks clarity, such as 'go and see the place and know the environment' which is better as 'explore and learn about the environment.' The sentence also ends abruptly. Proper preposition use and sentence completion improve clarity and correctness.