Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more concise and clear by avoiding repetition and improving sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide specific details about the months or seasons.

Example: The weather is hot for most of the year, but during the rainy season, we experience heavy rainfall which often leads to floods and other natural calamities.

Suggestion: Avoid repeating the same idea and improve sentence variety. Start with a clear topic sentence and support it with reasons or examples using linking words.

Example: I prefer cold weather to hot weather because I find it more comfortable and refreshing, especially during summer when the heat can be overwhelming.

Suggestion: Focus on clarity and correct grammar. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid redundancy. Also, correct small errors like 'we dry weather' to 'dry weather'.

Example: I prefer dry weather because wet conditions make traveling difficult and increase the risk of accidents, so dry weather is safer and more convenient.

Suggestion: Try to avoid repetition and improve sentence flow by using linking words. Be more specific about how often you check the forecast and clarify your sentences.

Example: I usually check the weather forecast during the rainy season because the rain can start unexpectedly. This helps me plan my day, such as taking an umbrella if rain is expected.

Suggestion: Make your answer more coherent by using linking words and clearer sentence structure. Provide specific examples of natural calamities caused by climate change.

Example: Due to climate change, weather has become unpredictable, which causes inconvenience in travel and leads to natural calamities like floods and storms, affecting many people.

Suggestion: Improve sentence structure and use linking words to connect ideas. Be more specific about what interests you about the different climates.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit cities like Canada and the UK because their cold climates and snowy winters are very different from my country, and I am eager to experience snow firsthand.

× The weather is very hot most in most of the months but in some in certain months.

✓ The weather is very hot in most of the months but in some certain months.

The phrase 'most in most of the months' is redundant and incorrect. The correct phrase is 'in most of the months'. Also, 'in some in certain months' is redundant; it should be 'in some certain months'. This correction improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× In certain rainy season there are heavy rainfall which causes flood and other natural calamities.

✓ In the certain rainy season, there is heavy rainfall which causes floods and other natural calamities.

The phrase 'In certain rainy season' requires the definite article 'the' to specify the season. 'Heavy rainfall' is uncountable, so 'there is' is correct instead of 'there are'. Also, 'flood' should be plural 'floods' to match the context. These corrections fix article usage, subject-verb agreement, and pluralization.

× I prefer cold weather than hot weather because I I enjoy cold more than hot weather.

✓ I prefer cold weather to hot weather because I enjoy cold more than hot weather.

The verb 'prefer' is followed by the preposition 'to' when comparing two things, not 'than'. Also, the repeated 'I' is a typographical error and should be removed. This correction fixes preposition usage and removes redundancy.

× So I prefer we dry weather.

✓ So I prefer dry weather.

The phrase 'we dry weather' is incorrect; 'we' is an incorrect pronoun here. The correct phrase is simply 'dry weather'. This correction removes the incorrect pronoun to make the sentence grammatically correct.

× I usually like to check weather forecast in rainy season because we cannot know when the rain starts.

✓ I usually like to check the weather forecast in the rainy season because we cannot know when the rain starts.

The phrase 'check weather forecast' requires the definite article 'the' before 'weather forecast'. Also, 'in rainy season' should be 'in the rainy season' to specify the season. These corrections fix article usage and preposition errors.

× So weather forecast always help me help me to understand the weather of that day so I can plan according to the weather.

✓ So the weather forecast always helps me to understand the weather of that day so I can plan accordingly.

The phrase 'weather forecast always help me help me' has a repeated phrase and incorrect verb agreement. 'Weather forecast' is singular, so the verb should be 'helps'. Also, 'plan according to the weather' is better expressed as 'plan accordingly'. This correction fixes verb agreement, removes repetition, and improves phrasing.

× If it is rainy I need to take umbrella, if and if it is not I know.

✓ If it is rainy, I need to take an umbrella; if it is not, I know.

The sentence has awkward structure and missing articles. 'Take umbrella' should be 'take an umbrella'. The phrase 'if and if it is not I know' is unclear and should be simplified to 'if it is not, I know'. Adding commas and semicolons improves readability. This correction fixes sentence structure and article usage.

× Nowadays we cannot predict the weather and it is very difficult for people and it creates inconvenience for them to travel around and also it causes many natural calamities and accident these calamities.

✓ Nowadays, we cannot predict the weather, and it is very difficult for people; it creates inconvenience for them to travel around and also causes many natural calamities and accidents.

The sentence is run-on and lacks proper punctuation. 'Accident these calamities' is incorrect; it should be 'accidents'. Also, 'it causes' should be parallel with 'creates'. Adding commas and semicolons improves clarity. This correction fixes sentence structure and pluralization.

× There are also snow on some seasons.

✓ There is also snow in some seasons.

'Snow' is uncountable and singular, so 'there is' is correct instead of 'there are'. Also, the preposition 'on' should be 'in' when referring to seasons. This correction fixes subject-verb agreement and preposition usage.