Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn cần sử dụng cấu trúc câu chính xác hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên thêm liên từ để câu trở nên mạch lạc hơn và mở rộng câu trả lời với chi tiết cụ thể hơn.

Example: I live in Luxus City, where the weather is usually very hot and dry. This kind of weather often makes me feel tired, especially when I play sports outside.

Suggestion: Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và chính xác hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc. Ngoài ra, hãy cung cấp lý do rõ ràng và cụ thể hơn cho sở thích của bạn.

Example: I prefer hot weather because it allows me to go swimming at the beach. Also, I can participate in more outdoor activities, which helps me stay active and not feel lazy.

Suggestion: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể sẽ giúp câu trả lời hiệu quả hơn.

Example: I prefer dry weather because it is more comfortable and convenient for daily activities. For example, wet weather makes it difficult for my clothes to dry.

Suggestion: Bạn nên sắp xếp câu trả lời theo trình tự logic, sử dụng cấu trúc câu chính xác và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Thêm liên từ và chi tiết cụ thể sẽ làm câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Example: I check the weather forecast every day with my parents to plan my activities. For example, if it is going to rain, I usually cancel my picnic plans with friends on the weekend.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, sắp xếp ý hợp lý và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể về các tác động của biến đổi khí hậu.

Example: In recent years, climate change has caused many negative effects, such as the melting of polar ice caps and an increase in hurricanes. These changes pose serious challenges for humans and the environment.

Suggestion: Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn và cấu trúc câu rõ ràng. Thêm liên từ và chi tiết cụ thể sẽ giúp câu trả lời tự nhiên và mạch lạc hơn.

Example: Yes, I would like to experience different climates. For example, I want to visit a snowy city to try winter sports, which would be a new and exciting experience for me.

× I live in Luxus City, the weather in there very hot, dry make me feel tired when I play sports outside.

✓ I live in Luxus City. The weather there is very hot and dry, which makes me feel tired when I play sports outside.

The sentence lacks the verb 'is' after 'weather there' to form a correct 'there be' structure. Also, 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'weather'. The sentence is better split for clarity.

× the weather in there very hot, dry make me feel tired when I play sports outside.

✓ the weather there is very hot and dry, making me feel tired when I play sports outside.

Using 'making' (present participle) correctly connects the cause and effect in the sentence, improving flow and grammar.

× I prefer hot weather because I want to. I want go to swimming in the beach.

✓ I prefer hot weather because I want to. I want to go swimming at the beach.

The verb 'go' needs the infinitive form 'to go' after 'want'. Also, 'in the beach' should be 'at the beach' as the correct preposition for location.

× I want go to swimming in the beach.

✓ I want to go swimming at the beach.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; 'at' is used for specific locations like 'the beach'. Also, 'go to swimming' should be 'go swimming' or 'go to swim'.

× More of a hot weather. Allow me attend more outdoor activity. I don't be lazy.

✓ I prefer hot weather because it allows me to attend more outdoor activities. I don't get lazy.

'More of a hot weather' is unclear and ungrammatical. 'Allow me attend' lacks 'to' and subject. 'I don't be lazy' is incorrect; 'I don't get lazy' is correct.

× Allow me attend more outdoor activity.

✓ It allows me to attend more outdoor activities.

'Activity' should be plural 'activities' to match 'more'. Also, the sentence needs a subject and 'to' before 'attend'.

× I don't be lazy.

✓ I don't get lazy.

The verb 'be' cannot be used with 'don't' in this way; 'get lazy' is the correct expression.

× I prefer dry weather because it's more comfortable and convenient to do.

✓ I prefer dry weather because it's more comfortable and convenient to do activities.

The phrase 'convenient to do' is incomplete; it needs an object like 'activities' to be correct.

× Uh, more activity daily life.

✓ There are more activities in daily life.

The original is a fragment lacking a verb and subject; the correction forms a complete sentence.

× In contrast, the wet weather make my clothes cannot dry.

✓ In contrast, wet weather makes my clothes unable to dry.

'Wet weather' is singular, so the verb should be 'makes'. Also, 'cannot dry' is better expressed as 'unable to dry'.

× Just every day I watch weather forecasts with my parent.

✓ I watch the weather forecast every day with my parents.

'Just every day' is awkward; 'every day' is sufficient. 'Parent' should be plural 'parents' if more than one. 'Weather forecasts' is usually singular 'weather forecast'.

× UH is ensure for my plan to do something in the day.

✓ This ensures my plan to do something during the day.

'UH' is unclear; 'This' refers to watching the forecast. 'Is ensure' is incorrect; 'ensures' is correct. 'In the day' should be 'during the day'.

× For example, if the day rainy, I will cancel a plan for a picnic with my friend on the weekend.

✓ For example, if the day is rainy, I will cancel a plan for a picnic with my friends on the weekend.

Missing verb 'is' after 'day'. 'Friend' should be plural 'friends' if more than one.

× Recently there are many negative effects of climate change on the world like polar ice melting and lead to hurricane drown heat is a question for human and very.

✓ Recently, there have been many negative effects of climate change on the world, like polar ice melting, which leads to hurricanes and flooding. Heat is a serious issue for humans.

The sentence is fragmented and ungrammatical. 'There are' should be 'there have been' for recent events. 'Lead' should be 'leads'. 'Drown' is incorrect; 'flooding' is correct. The last part is unclear and corrected for clarity.

× Yes, I want to export different climate from another place.

✓ Yes, I want to experience different climates from other places.

'Export' is incorrect; 'experience' is the correct verb. 'Climate' should be plural 'climates' when generalizing. 'Another place' should be 'other places'.

× Try a new climate such as cold weather.

✓ I want to try a new climate, such as cold weather.

The sentence is a fragment; adding 'I want to' completes it. Also, a comma before 'such as' is appropriate.

× Allow me to try winter sport.

✓ It will allow me to try winter sports.

The sentence lacks a subject; 'It will allow me' is correct. 'Sport' should be plural 'sports'.