Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to avoid repetition and hesitations to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, aim to be concise and clear by removing unnecessary words and focusing on the main points.

Example: The weather where I live is very hot in summer and quite cold in winter. We experience hot, dry summers and cold, rainy winters. Overall, the climate can be classified as desert-like.

Suggestion: Avoid contradictions and unclear statements. Make sure your reasons are logically connected and clearly expressed. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Example: I prefer cold weather because I enjoy staying indoors, having a warm drink, and chatting with my family while watching TV. Also, I dislike hot, dry weather since I don't like sweating all the time.

Suggestion: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and unnecessary repetition. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent and concise.

Example: I prefer dry weather because it allows me to go outside for walks and exercise with my child in the nearby playground. In contrast, wet or rainy weather prevents me from enjoying these activities.

Suggestion: Avoid hesitations and repetitions. Structure your answer clearly by stating your habit first, then giving specific examples. Use linking words to improve coherence.

Example: I don't usually check the weather forecast daily, but I do check it when planning outdoor activities like BBQ parties. This helps us decide if the weather will be suitable for our plans.

Suggestion: Be careful with word choice and avoid confusing terms like 'global war' when you mean 'global warming'. Provide more specific examples and explain their impact clearly.

Example: Climate change has significantly affected our environment and daily lives. For instance, increased CO2 emissions contribute to global warming, leading to rising temperatures and extreme weather events.

Suggestion: Avoid repetition and unclear phrases like 'extreme waters'. Use precise vocabulary and provide clear examples with explanations.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates, such as London or New York, to experience their varied weather conditions and temperature changes.

× And also the the the the climate can be can can be classified as a desert climate.

✓ And also the climate can be classified as a desert climate.

The repetition of the definite article 'the' and the phrase 'can be' is redundant and incorrect. Removing the extra words improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I'm a big fan of cold weather because I cannot stay indoor, have a warm drink and have a chat with my family watching TV.

✓ I'm a big fan of cold weather because I cannot stay indoors, have a warm drink and have a chat with my family watching TV.

The word 'indoor' is an adjective, but here a prepositional phrase is needed. The correct form is 'indoors' to indicate being inside a building.

× So I the reason why I don't like the dry weather because I'm not a big fan of sweating.

✓ So the reason why I don't like dry weather is because I'm not a big fan of sweating.

The original sentence has a misplaced phrase 'I the reason' which disrupts sentence structure. Correcting the word order and removing the article before 'dry weather' improves clarity and grammar.

× So if it is wet or rainy, I cannot to go outside and do my uh hobbies.

✓ So if it is wet or rainy, I cannot go outside and do my hobbies.

The modal verb 'cannot' should be followed directly by the base form of the verb without 'to'. Including 'to' is incorrect.

× Climate change has many effects on the our environment and the globe.

✓ Climate change has many effects on our environment and the globe.

The phrase 'the our environment' is incorrect because 'our' is a possessive pronoun and does not require the definite article 'the' before it.

× Yes, I'd like to visit other countries that have different climate from our country, For example the cities that has extreme waters like London, New York, so I can enjoy the the extreme weather there and experience the rise or decline in temperatures.

✓ Yes, I'd like to visit other countries that have different climates from our country. For example, cities that have extreme weather like London and New York, so I can enjoy the extreme weather there and experience the rise or decline in temperatures.

The word 'climate' should be plural 'climates' to agree with 'other countries'. Also, 'cities that has' should be 'cities that have' to agree in number. 'Extreme waters' is incorrect; 'extreme weather' is appropriate. Additionally, punctuation and article usage were corrected for clarity.