Weather— Part 1 Report
Conversation
Part 1
Examiner
What's the weather like where you live?
Candidate
As you know, I live in Beijing, where the weather is usually sunny and clear. However, during the summer it often becomes very hot and humid, with intense rain storms that sometimes cause flooding. In contrast, winters can be quite cold and dry, which makes the climate change dramatically.
Examiner
Do you prefer cold or hot weather?
Candidate
Oh, I prefer the cold weather because it's easier to stay comfortable by wearing extra clothes. For example, when it's cold, I can put on my jacket and still enjoy going out with my friends. On the other hand, hot weather often makes me feel tired and less motivated to do outdoor activities.
Examiner
Do you prefer dry or wet weather?
Candidate
Oh, I prefer dry weather because last time when I visited Qingdao, the air was very humid which made me close feel damp all the time. Dry weather is much more pleasant since my clothes stay fresh and I find it easier to enjoy outdoor activities when weather is dry.
Examiner
Are you in the habit of checking the weather forecast? When and how often?
Candidate
Yes, I usually check the weather forecast almost every day, especially before I go out. When I first started university, I didn't have this habit, so I often forget to bring an umbrella. However, after experience several rainy days, I realized that checking the forecast in advance is very useful.
Examiner
What do you think are the effects of climate change in recent years?
Candidate
Oh, I think one of the most noticeable effects of climate change in recent years is the increase in extreme temperatures. For example, summers have become much hotter and winters colder than before, which seriously affect People's Daily lives by impacting their health and working routines.
Examiner
Would you like to visit other cities that have different climates from where you live?
Candidate
Yes, I would like to visit other cities which have different climates from where I live because I think that different climates foster different cultures, customs and cuisines. For example, I really interested in how people live in cold places like Harbin and what kind of traditional foods they enjoy during the winter seasons.
Evaluation
Overall
Part 1
What's the weather like where you live?
Score: 85.0Suggestion: 回答较为完整且内容丰富，但开头的“As you know”显得不够自然，建议直接切入主题，避免冗余。
Example: I live in Beijing, where the weather is usually sunny and clear. In summer, it often becomes very hot and humid with intense rainstorms that sometimes cause flooding. In contrast, winters can be quite cold and dry, making the climate change dramatically.
Do you prefer cold or hot weather?
Score: 90.0Suggestion: 回答结构清晰，内容具体，但开头的“Oh”显得口语化，建议使用更正式的表达。
Example: I prefer cold weather because it's easier to stay comfortable by wearing extra clothes. For example, when it's cold, I can put on my jacket and still enjoy going out with my friends. In contrast, hot weather often makes me feel tired and less motivated to do outdoor activities.
Do you prefer dry or wet weather?
Score: 80.0Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误（"made me close feel damp"），建议注意语法准确性，同时避免重复表达“dry weather”。
Example: I prefer dry weather because when I visited Qingdao, the humid air made me feel damp all the time. Dry weather is much more pleasant since my clothes stay fresh and I find it easier to enjoy outdoor activities.
Are you in the habit of checking the weather forecast? When and how often?
Score: 85.0Suggestion: 回答内容完整，但“after experience several rainy days”语法错误，建议改为“after experiencing”。
Example: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast almost every day, especially before I go out. When I first started university, I didn't have this habit and often forgot to bring an umbrella. However, after experiencing several rainy days, I realized that checking the forecast in advance is very useful.
What do you think are the effects of climate change in recent years?
Score: 88.0Suggestion: 回答内容具体，但“People's Daily lives”表达不够自然，建议改为“people's daily lives”，并避免口语化的“Oh”。
Example: I think one of the most noticeable effects of climate change in recent years is the increase in extreme temperatures. For example, summers have become much hotter and winters colder than before, which seriously affect people's daily lives by impacting their health and work routines.
Would you like to visit other cities that have different climates from where you live?
Score: 82.0Suggestion: 回答中“I really interested”语法错误，应为“I am really interested”。建议注意动词形式的正确使用。
Example: Yes, I would like to visit other cities with different climates from where I live because I think different climates foster different cultures, customs, and cuisines. For example, I am really interested in how people live in cold places like Harbin and what kind of traditional foods they enjoy during the winter season.
Grammar
× However, after experience several rainy days, I realized that checking the forecast in advance is very useful.
✓ However, after experiencing several rainy days, I realized that checking the forecast in advance is very useful.
这里动词"experience"需要用动名词形式"experiencing"，因为它作为介词"after"的宾语。动词不定式或原形在此处不正确。
× which seriously affect People's Daily lives by impacting their health and working routines.
✓ which seriously affects People's daily lives by impacting their health and working routines.
关系代词"which"指代单数名词"increase"，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式"affects"。此外，"People's Daily"应为"people's daily"，表示人们的日常生活。
× I really interested in how people live in cold places like Harbin and what kind of traditional foods they enjoy during the winter seasons.
✓ I am really interested in how people live in cold places like Harbin and what kind of traditional foods they enjoy during the winter seasons.
动词"interested"需要有助动词"am"构成被动形态，表示状态。缺少"am"导致句子不完整。
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