Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is informative but a bit lengthy and slightly repetitive (mentioning 'rainy season' and 'monsoon season'). Try to be more concise and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: The weather in my hometown varies throughout the year. Generally, it is moderate, with hot summers and a monsoon season from July to August, which brings heavy rain that helps crops grow and cools the temperature.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but a bit wordy and could be clearer. Avoid vague phrases like 'a number of reasons' without elaboration. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific reasons.

Example: I prefer hot weather because it allows me to enjoy outdoor activities like playing cricket, which are difficult to do in cold weather.

Suggestion: Your answer has some grammar issues and repetition. Try to use correct articles ('wet weather' without 'a') and avoid repeating phrases. Also, use linking words to make your answer coherent and add more specific details.

Example: I prefer wet weather because it offers unique activities like playing in the rain, and it allows us to enjoy nature at its most beautiful.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear but could be more natural and concise. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid awkward phrasing like 'weather checking' and 'overcome the many problems'.

Example: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast before any outdoor activity because it helps me plan better and avoid unexpected problems.

Suggestion: Your answer has grammatical errors and is quite vague. Use correct tense and plural forms, and provide more specific details or examples about climate change effects. Also, use linking words to improve coherence.

Example: Climate has changed over the years; for example, we now experience heavier rainfall than in the past, which affects agriculture and daily life.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but a bit long and repetitive. Try to be more concise and use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, avoid awkward phrasing like 'like to visit city Shimla' and 'which is situated in Shimla'.

Example: Yes, I enjoy traveling and dream of visiting Shimla because of its beautiful scenery and famous landmarks like the church there.

× It usually rains heavily during July and August, which help the crops grow and cool down the temperature.

✓ It usually rains heavily during July and August, which helps the crops grow and cool down the temperature.

The relative pronoun 'which' refers to 'It' (the rain), which is singular, so the verb should be 'helps' to agree in number. Using 'help' is incorrect here because it does not agree with the singular subject.

× As I am much into the hot weather, there are a number of reasons behind my consideration, but I like it especially because in the hot weather we can do a number of outdoor activities which is not possible in the cold weather, for example, playing cricket.

✓ As I am much into the hot weather, there are a number of reasons behind my consideration, but I like it especially because in the hot weather we can do a number of outdoor activities which are not possible in the cold weather, for example, playing cricket.

The relative pronoun 'which' refers to 'a number of outdoor activities', which is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Using 'is' here is incorrect because it does not agree with the plural noun.

× I like to live in a wet weather because in wet weather we can do a number of activities like playing in rain and in raining we can also see nature at its peak beauty.

✓ I like to live in wet weather because in wet weather we can do a number of activities like playing in the rain and when it is raining we can also see nature at its peak beauty.

The phrase 'playing in rain' requires the definite article 'the' before 'rain' to be grammatically correct. Also, 'in raining' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'when it is raining' to indicate the time during rain.

× Yes, I have a habit of weather checking as whenever I have to do any outdoor activity, I check the weather forecast before going outside as it helps me to overcome the many problems.

✓ Yes, I have a habit of checking the weather as whenever I have to do any outdoor activity, I check the weather forecast before going outside as it helps me to avoid many problems.

The phrase 'habit of weather checking' is awkward; the correct form is 'habit of checking the weather'. Also, 'overcome the many problems' is not appropriate here; 'avoid many problems' fits better in this context.

× Climate had experienced a number of changed over the years as nowadays we have to experience more rainy weather as compared to the past.

✓ Climate has experienced a number of changes over the years as nowadays we experience more rainy weather compared to the past.

The past perfect tense 'had experienced' is incorrect here because the sentence refers to a period continuing to the present; present perfect 'has experienced' is appropriate. Also, 'changed' should be the noun 'changes'. The phrase 'have to experience' is awkward; simple present 'experience' is better.

× Yes, as I have a hobby of traveling, I like to visit city Shimla as it was my dream to visit there because of its beauty and it is also known for many places such as the church which is situated in Shimla.

✓ Yes, as I have a hobby of traveling, I like to visit the city Shimla as it has been my dream to visit there because of its beauty and it is also known for many places such as the church which is situated in Shimla.

The phrase 'visit city Shimla' requires the definite article 'the' before 'city'. Also, 'it was my dream' should be 'it has been my dream' to express a continuing desire. These corrections improve grammatical accuracy and clarity.