Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by avoiding redundancy and grammatical errors. Use a simple structure: state the weather, then explain briefly why. For example, avoid repeating 'because' and incorrect phrases like 'you we usually use our air con to.'

Example: The weather where I live is usually hot and sunny, so we often use air conditioning to stay cool.

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit confusing and has grammatical mistakes. Try to give a clear preference and explain your reason using linking words like 'because' or 'so.' Avoid repeating words and incorrect phrases like 'when if the weather is rainy it is.'

Example: I prefer cold weather because when it's too hot, I feel uncomfortable. However, I like hot weather when it's not rainy because rain makes it hard to move around.

Suggestion: Your answer is too long and repetitive. Try to be concise and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, correct grammar mistakes like 'a dry weather' should be 'dry weather.'

Example: I prefer dry weather because it is easier and more comfortable to move around, unlike wet weather which requires a lot of preparation.

Suggestion: Your answer lacks coherence and has grammatical errors. Try to combine your ideas into one or two sentences using linking words. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'this uncontrolled.'

Example: I seldom check the weather forecast because I don't have much time, and I believe the weather is beyond our control anyway.

Suggestion: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical errors. Try to complete your thoughts and use plural forms correctly. Use linking words to explain effects clearly.

Example: In recent years, I believe climate change has had significant effects on our planet and our lives. For example, there are more frequent heavy rains and extreme weather events.

Suggestion: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and redundancy. Use correct verb forms and avoid repeating words. Make your answer clear and concise with linking words.

Example: Of course, if given the chance, I would like to visit countries with different climates to experience how it feels and learn how people live there.

× The weather where I live is quite hot because it is usually a sunny day and because of that you we usually use our air con to.

✓ The weather where I live is quite hot because it is usually a sunny day and because of that we usually use our air con too.

The pronoun 'you' is incorrectly used here; it should be 'we' to refer to the speaker and others collectively. Also, 'to' at the end is incorrect and should be 'too' to mean 'also'. This correction improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I could say it depends because I prefer cold weather when the weather is too hot, while I prefer a hot weather when if the weather is rainy it is because I find it uncomfortable to move.

✓ I could say it depends because I prefer cold weather when the weather is too hot, while I prefer hot weather when it is rainy because I find it uncomfortable to move.

The modal verb 'could' is acceptable here, but the sentence has redundancy and incorrect use of 'a hot weather' which should be 'hot weather' as 'weather' is uncountable. Also, 'when if' is incorrect; it should be 'when'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I prefer a dry weather because I find it easy to go to move around and I feel comfortable for me to be able to move from one place to another because if wet weather there's a lot of preparation and.

✓ I prefer dry weather because I find it easy to move around and I feel comfortable being able to go from one place to another because if it's wet weather, there's a lot of preparation.

The article 'a' before 'dry weather' is incorrect because 'weather' is uncountable. Also, 'go to move around' is redundant; 'move around' suffices. The phrase 'if wet weather' is incomplete and should be 'if it's wet weather'. These corrections improve grammatical accuracy and sentence clarity.

× I seldom check the weather forecast. It is because I don't have plenty of time to do it. And of course no matter what the weather is, it will not matter because this uncontrolled.

✓ I seldom check the weather forecast because I don't have much time to do it. And of course, no matter what the weather is, it does not matter because it is uncontrollable.

The phrase 'It is because' is awkward and better combined with the previous sentence. 'Plenty of time' is positive; the negative form should be 'much time'. 'Will not matter' is future tense but the context suggests a general truth, so 'does not matter' is better. 'This uncontrolled' is incomplete and should be 'it is uncontrollable'. These changes improve tense consistency and clarity.

× In recent years, I believe climate change has a significant effects not only in our planet Earth, but in the way we are living. Sometimes there's a lot of rains and.

✓ In recent years, I believe climate change has significant effects not only on our planet Earth, but also on the way we are living. Sometimes there is a lot of rain.

The phrase 'a significant effects' mixes singular and plural; it should be 'significant effects' without 'a'. The preposition 'in' should be 'on' when referring to effects on something. 'There's a lot of rains' is incorrect because 'rain' is uncountable; it should be 'there is a lot of rain'. These corrections fix number agreement and preposition use.

× Of course, if given a chance, I'd like to visit other countries that have different climates from where I lives so that I have will have an idea on how it feels and the way the other people lives with.

✓ Of course, if given a chance, I'd like to visit other countries that have different climates from where I live so that I will have an idea of how it feels and the way other people live.

The verb 'lives' is incorrectly used with the pronoun 'I'; it should be 'live'. Also, 'have will have' is redundant; 'will have' suffices. The phrase 'an idea on' should be 'an idea of'. 'The other people lives with' is incorrect; it should be 'other people live'. These corrections fix subject-verb agreement and improve sentence clarity.