Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to directly describe the weather and avoid mixing unrelated information. Use clear sentences and correct grammar to improve naturalness and effectiveness.

Example: The weather where I live is usually hot and sunny, especially in the summer. I enjoy this because I can spend time outdoors with my friends.

Suggestion: Your answer is brief and lacks detail. Try to provide more specific reasons and use linking words to make your response more coherent.

Example: I prefer hot weather because it allows me to go outside and enjoy activities with my friends. For example, we often play sports or have picnics when it's warm.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and does not directly address the question. Make sure to specify whether you prefer dry or wet weather and explain why with specific details.

Example: I prefer dry weather because it makes me feel happy and comfortable. During dry days, my family and I often cook together and enjoy meals at home.

Suggestion: Your answer has grammatical errors and could be more detailed. Try to use complete sentences and explain your habits clearly with linking words.

Example: I don't usually check the weather forecast every day. However, when I plan to go somewhere, I always check it to prepare accordingly.

Suggestion: Your answer is too general and contains grammatical mistakes. Provide more specific effects of climate change and use linking words to connect your ideas.

Example: Climate change has caused extreme weather events like floods and droughts. For example, deforestation and water wastage contribute to these problems.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Make sure to directly answer the question and provide specific examples with correct grammar and linking words.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates. For instance, I have been to Rajasthan, which is much hotter than my city, and I enjoyed experiencing the different weather.

× The place where I live, I like summer weather because all over greenery and I can go outside in Dubai with my friends.

✓ The place where I live, I like summer weather because there is greenery all over and I can go outside in Dubai with my friends.

The phrase 'all over greenery' is incorrect because 'greenery' is an uncountable noun and needs a proper structure. Adding 'there is' clarifies the existence of greenery, correcting the sentence structure.

× I like hot weather because that time I can go outside with my friend.

✓ I like hot weather because at that time I can go outside with my friends.

The word 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the context of going out with more than one person. Also, 'that time' should be 'at that time' to correctly indicate a specific time.

× I like better weather because that time I feel very happy and we make food at home and enjoy with family members.

✓ I like better weather because at that time I feel very happy, and we cook food at home and enjoy time with family members.

The phrase 'like better weather' is unclear; 'better weather' is acceptable but needs context. 'Make food' is better expressed as 'cook food'. Also, 'enjoy with family members' should be 'enjoy time with family members' for clarity.

× No, no, I don't usually check weather forecast. When I have go to somewhere I check weather.

✓ No, no, I don't usually check the weather forecast. When I have to go somewhere, I check the weather.

The modal verb 'have to' is missing in 'have go to somewhere'. Also, 'weather forecast' needs the definite article 'the'. Adding commas improves sentence clarity.

× There are a number of facts to climate change. People are cutting the trees and wasting the water, so this is the reason of climate change.

✓ There are a number of factors causing climate change. People are cutting down trees and wasting water, so this is the reason for climate change.

'Facts to climate change' is incorrect; 'factors causing climate change' is more appropriate. 'Cutting the trees' should be 'cutting down trees' and 'wasting the water' should be 'wasting water'. 'Reason of' should be 'reason for'.

× If I like to visit other cities have a different weather like whenever I go to Rajasthan, it's a very hot place than my city so.

✓ I would like to visit other cities that have different weather. For example, whenever I go to Rajasthan, it's a much hotter place than my city.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper structure. Using 'I would like' expresses desire correctly. 'Cities have a different weather' should be 'cities that have different weather'. The example is better separated into a new sentence for clarity.