Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答时句子结构不够清晰，存在语法错误，且表达不够自然。建议简化句子，避免重复，使用更准确的词汇描述天气特点。

Example: In Guangdong province, summers are hot and humid with plenty of sunshine, which can sometimes cause sunburn. Winters are usually windy and cooler, but not very cold.

Suggestion: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够流畅。建议使用更准确的时态和词汇，简洁表达个人喜好并给出具体原因。

Example: I generally prefer cold weather because hot weather makes me sweat a lot, which is uncomfortable. Cold weather feels more refreshing to me.

Suggestion: 回答中存在词汇使用错误（如'skin sleep'应为'skin dry'），句子结构不够清晰。建议注意词汇准确性，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Example: I prefer wet weather because dry weather makes my skin dry and uncomfortable. Although wet weather can make me sweat and mess up my hair, I still find it better than dry weather.

Suggestion: 回答中语法错误较多，表达重复且不够连贯。建议简化句子，避免重复，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Example: I usually check the weather forecast if I have plans to go out the next day. If I stay indoors, I don't check it because it doesn't matter. Checking helps me prepare things like an umbrella or a sun hat.

Suggestion: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，句子结构较为简单。建议使用更准确的词汇和句型，清晰表达观点。

Example: I think climate change has caused noticeable changes in recent years. Due to global warming, hot days have become more frequent and temperatures are higher than before.

Suggestion: 回答中时态使用错误，句子不完整且表达不连贯。建议注意时态一致性，使用完整句子，并用连接词使表达更自然。

Example: I would love to visit cities with different climates from Guangdong. For example, northern China is relatively dry and cold, which I find very interesting and would like to experience.

× In summer, it's always wet and hot and shiny, which can burn people's skin.

✓ In summer, it's always wet, hot, and sunny, which can burn people's skin.

这里'shiny'用来形容天气不合适，应该用'sunny'表示阳光充足。'shiny'是形容物体表面发光，不用于天气描述。

× In the place I live, which is the Guangdong province, in winter it is always windy and the wind blows halfway and it's can be very cold.

✓ In the place I live, which is Guangdong province, in winter it is always windy, and the wind blows strongly; it can be very cold.

句子结构混乱，'the wind blows halfway'表达不清，应改为'the wind blows strongly'表示风很大。'it's can be'中'it's'多余，应去掉。

× Generally I prefer cold weather rather than hot weather because when it is really hot it can make people sweat and it's always sunshine and I don't like the feeling when I'm sweat, but in cold weather it seldom make me.

✓ Generally, I prefer cold weather rather than hot weather because when it is really hot, it can make people sweat and it's always sunny, and I don't like the feeling when I sweat, but in cold weather it seldom makes me sweat.

'it's always sunshine'应改为'it's always sunny'，'sunshine'是名词，'sunny'是形容词。'when I'm sweat'错误，'sweat'为动词，应为'when I sweat'。'it seldom make me'缺少宾语且动词单复数错误，应为'it seldom makes me sweat'。

× Well I would say I prefer wet weather to dry weather cause dry weather makes my skin sleep and it is really uncomfortable.

✓ Well, I would say I prefer wet weather to dry weather because dry weather makes my skin sleep and it is really uncomfortable.

'cause'为口语缩写，正式场合应使用'because'。

× Although wet weather always make me sweat and my hair will be messy but it's better than dry weather.

✓ Although wet weather always makes me sweat and my hair gets messy, it's better than dry weather.

'make'应为第三人称单数形式'makes'，'my hair will be messy'时态不合适，改为'gets messy'更自然。句中'Although'和'but'重复使用，去掉'but'。

× I will check the weather forecast when I need to hang out on the other on the next day or there is something important to do outdoor the next day.

✓ I will check the weather forecast when I need to hang out the next day or when there is something important to do outdoors the next day.

'on the other on the next day'表达混乱，应简化为'the next day'。'outdoor'应为副词形式'outdoors'。

× When I need to stay indoor I won't check the weather forecast since it's doesn't matter.

✓ When I need to stay indoors, I won't check the weather forecast since it doesn't matter.

'indoor'是形容词，表示室内的，副词应为'indoors'。'it's doesn't matter'中'it's'多余，应为'it doesn't matter'。

× But when I need to go outside it's really important for me to prepare things like umbrella or sunset hat so. I I check.

✓ But when I need to go outside, it's really important for me to prepare things like an umbrella or a sun hat, so I check.

'sunset hat'应为'sun hat'。缺少冠词'an'和'a'。句子末尾重复'I'，应删除。

× I do feel there is significant changes of the weather conditions in recent years since the climate change warm.

✓ I do feel there are significant changes in the weather conditions in recent years since the climate has warmed.

'there is significant changes'主谓不一致，'changes'为复数，应使用'there are'。'climate change warm'表达不完整，应改为'climate has warmed'。

× As the global warming is more serious this day, the hot day becomes more often and the temperature is higher than before.

✓ As global warming becomes more serious these days, hot days occur more often and the temperature is higher than before.

'this day'应为'these days'表示最近一段时间。'the hot day becomes more often'表达不自然，应改为'hot days occur more often'。

× I would love to visit other cities that had a different kind of climate and weather.

✓ I would love to visit other cities that have a different kind of climate and weather.

这里表达的是现在或将来的愿望，定语从句应使用现在时'have'，而不是过去时'had'。

× For example, visited a place that is totally different from Guangdong province, like the North place of China, which is a relative relative dry and cold.

✓ For example, I want to visit a place that is totally different from Guangdong province, like the northern part of China, which is relatively dry and cold.

缺少主语'I want to'，'North place'应为'northern part'，'relative relative dry'重复且用词错误，应为'relatively dry'。

× And it is I'm really curious about.

✓ And I am really curious about it.

句子结构错误，'it is I'm really curious about'语序混乱，应改为'I am really curious about it'。