Weather— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally relevant but contains grammatical errors and some unclear phrases like 'human' and 'make me challenging to say cool'. Try to use correct grammar and clearer vocabulary. Also, avoid redundancy and keep sentences concise. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: The weather where I live is generally mild and pleasant. For instance, during spring and autumn, the temperatures are comfortable, which makes it ideal for outdoor activities. However, summers can be quite hot and humid, which sometimes makes it difficult to stay cool.

Suggestion: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical mistakes. Avoid repeating phrases and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples to support your preference.

Example: I prefer hot weather because it allows me to spend more time outdoors. For example, I enjoy traveling to different places and doing various activities with my family during warm days.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'dealing up with the slippery use roads' and 'makes me outdoor plants'. Try to use correct grammar and clearer expressions. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Example: I prefer dry weather because it is more comfortable and convenient for my daily routine. For example, I can go outside without worrying about getting wet or slipping on wet roads. Moreover, dry weather usually means clear skies, which lifts my mood and makes outdoor activities more enjoyable.

Suggestion: Your answer is mostly clear but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing like 'should usually' and 'if rain is accepted'. Use correct modal verbs and clearer expressions. Also, avoid repeating words and use linking words for coherence.

Example: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning before leaving the house. It helps me plan my day, especially to decide what to wear and whether to carry an umbrella. For example, if rain is expected, I make sure to take an umbrella with me.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'move frequent severe weather even such as' and 'melting the polar ice'. Use correct grammar and more precise vocabulary. Use linking words to organize your points clearly.

Example: In recent years, climate change has had a profound effect on the environment and society. For example, we have seen more frequent severe weather events such as hurricanes and floods, which cause significant damage to communities and ecosystems. Additionally, rising global temperatures have led to the melting of polar ice.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but has grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases like 'would love me to try' and 'mom feather'. Use correct sentence structures and clearer vocabulary. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples.

Example: Yes, I would definitely like to visit a city with a different climate from where I live. Experiencing a new climate can be refreshing and exciting. For example, visiting a snowy city would allow me to try winter sports and enjoy a completely different lifestyle compared to my usual environment.

× The weather we are live generally quite mild and pleasant.

✓ The weather where we live is generally quite mild and pleasant.

The original sentence uses 'we are live' incorrectly instead of 'where we live'. Also, the verb 'is' is needed to link the subject and complement in present tense.

× For example, during the spring and autumn, the temperature are comfortable, making the ideal for outdoor activity.

✓ For example, during the spring and autumn, the temperatures are comfortable, making it ideal for outdoor activities.

'Temperature' should be plural 'temperatures' to match the plural verb 'are'. Also, 'making the ideal' is incorrect; it should be 'making it ideal'. 'Activity' should be plural 'activities' to match the context.

× However, in summer we can quite hot and human, which sometimes make me challenging to say cool.

✓ However, in summer we can be quite hot and humid, which sometimes makes it challenging for me to stay cool.

The modal verb 'can' needs 'be' to form 'can be'. 'Human' is a typo for 'humid'. 'Make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'which'. 'Say cool' is incorrect; it should be 'stay cool'.

× I prefer to hot weather.

✓ I prefer hot weather.

The preposition 'to' is unnecessary here. 'Prefer' is directly followed by the noun without 'to'.

× In hot weather we go outdoor.

✓ In hot weather, we go outdoors.

The correct adverb is 'outdoors' not 'outdoor'. Also, a comma after the introductory phrase improves clarity.

× We do outdoor activity and go for traveling out some other places and we spend the time with my family and and the hot weather.

✓ We do outdoor activities and go traveling to some other places, and we spend time with my family in the hot weather.

'Activity' should be plural 'activities'. 'Go for traveling out some other places' is incorrect; it should be 'go traveling to some other places'. 'Spend the time' should be 'spend time'. 'And and' is a typo.

× We do so many things, so many activity we do.

✓ We do so many things; so many activities we do.

'Activity' should be plural 'activities' to match 'so many'. The sentence structure is awkward; a semicolon or period helps separate ideas.

× I prefer dry weather because it's more comfortable and convenient for daily routine and for example, I can go outside without worrying about getting wet or dealing up with the slippery use roads.

✓ I prefer dry weather because it's more comfortable and convenient for my daily routine. For example, I can go outside without worrying about getting wet or dealing with slippery roads.

'For daily routine' should be 'for my daily routine'. 'Dealing up with' is incorrect; it should be 'dealing with'. 'Slippery use roads' is incorrect; 'use' is unnecessary.

× Additionally, dry weather usually means clear skies which left me in my mood and makes me outdoor plants and more enjoyable.

✓ Additionally, dry weather usually means clear skies which lift my mood and make outdoor activities more enjoyable.

'Left me in my mood' is incorrect; it should be 'lift my mood'. 'Makes me outdoor plants' is incorrect; likely intended 'make outdoor activities more enjoyable'.

× Yes, I should usually check the weather forecast every morning before leaving the house.

✓ Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning before leaving the house.

'Should' is unnecessary here; 'usually check' suffices to express habitual action.

× For example, if rain is accepted, I make sure to take umbrella with myself.

✓ For example, if rain is expected, I make sure to take an umbrella with me.

'Rain is accepted' is incorrect; it should be 'rain is expected'. 'Take umbrella with myself' is incorrect; it should be 'take an umbrella with me'.

× In recent years, climate change has had profound effect on environment society.

✓ In recent years, climate change has had a profound effect on the environment and society.

'Effect' should be preceded by 'a' as it is singular. 'Environment society' should be 'the environment and society'.

× Firstly, we have witnessed move frequent severe weather even such as hurricanes, floods, rod and so many others and the significant damage to communities and ecosystem.

✓ Firstly, we have witnessed more frequent severe weather events such as hurricanes, floods, droughts, and many others, causing significant damage to communities and ecosystems.

'Move' should be 'more'. 'Weather even' should be 'weather events'. 'Rod' is likely 'droughts'. 'And so many others' is informal; 'and many others' is better. 'Ecosystem' should be plural 'ecosystems'.

× Additionally, rising the global temperature have led to melting the polar ice.

✓ Additionally, rising global temperatures have led to the melting of polar ice.

'Rising the global temperature' is incorrect; it should be 'rising global temperatures'. 'Have' agrees with plural 'temperatures'. 'Melting the polar ice' should be 'the melting of polar ice'.

× Yes, I would definitely like to visit city with a different climate from where I live.

✓ Yes, I would definitely like to visit a city with a different climate from where I live.

'City' needs the article 'a' before it.

× Experience the new climate environment can be refreshing, exciting.

✓ Experiencing a new climate and environment can be refreshing and exciting.

The sentence lacks a subject and verb agreement. 'Experience' should be 'Experiencing' to function as a gerund subject. 'New climate environment' is better as 'a new climate and environment'.

× For example, visiting a snow city and would love me to try winter sports.

✓ For example, visiting a snowy city would make me love trying winter sports.

'Would love me to try' is incorrect; it should be 'would make me love trying'. 'Snow city' should be 'snowy city'.

× Enjoying com completely different lifestyle compared to my usual mom feather.

✓ Enjoying a completely different lifestyle compared to my usual one.

'Enjoying com' is a typo; should be 'Enjoying a'. 'Mom feather' is unclear and likely a typo; replaced with 'one' to refer to usual lifestyle.